2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：雨中的启迪：从困境走向希望之路 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 雨中的启迪：从困境走向希望之路 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 20 years ago, my father died of an accident resulted from drinking, leaving my sick mother and two younger brothers alone. At that time, I was in a senior high school. After my father’s funeral, the whole family was in a worse condition than ever. As the eldest son, I had no choice but to quit school and work in a factory. Life went on without any wonder. I dared not to ask for more, just hoping to bring up two younger brothers. However, that was not an easy thing, for I couldn’t afford their tuition even if I worked from day to night without stopping, and much worse, I had to take my sick mother into account. The present misery made me want to have another try, but it seemed impractical, for I couldn’t lose this job any more. 4 4 续写原文 A thread of hope sparkled in those gloomy days suddenly. It was a rainy dusk when I put myself in the rain and walked in the street. Suddenly the rain stopped! To my bewilderment(困惑) , I raised my head, and found that “the sky” was in fact a dark blue umbrella. Then I heard a deep voice. “Why not run without an umbrella?” A middle-aged man with one leg on crutch said to me, “If you run, you would get less drenched.” 5 5 续写原文 I shook my head, but after a second I thought: Right, why not run without an umbrella? His words shocked me deeply. Without my father, could I only be a slave to the fate, and my dream in childhood only an illusion? Life is like this. When you are in rainy days in your life, if you couldn’t find a way to prevent you from being drenched earlier, you would have been overwhelmed by it, but if you decide to get rid of it, you’ll discover that the rainy days last not so long as you imagined. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： While walking together in the rain, he told me his story. Paragraph 2： Then, I decided to return to school and earn money to support my family while studying. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 20 年前，父亲因酒后事故离世，留下患病母亲和两个弟弟，身为长子的 “我” 无奈辍学去工厂打工。生活艰难，“我” 虽想改变却又不敢辞职。一个雨夜，一位独腿中年男子撑伞与 “我” 交谈，他的话和自身经历，给身处困境的 “我” 带来了希望与勇气，“我” 决定做出改变。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： While walking together in the rain, he told me his story. 在雨中一同前行时，他向我讲述了自己的故事。曾经，他是一名前途光明的运动员，却因一场意外失去了一条腿。但他没有被这巨大的不幸打倒，反而凭借着顽强的意志，努力重新开始生活。他白手起家，创办了一家小公司，创业过程中遭遇了无数的艰难险阻。资金短缺、客户流失、市场竞争激烈，每一个问题都像一座大山横在他面前。然而，他凭借着不屈不挠的精神，一次次地克服困难，最终取得了成功。他的经历深深地震撼了我，让我在黑暗中看到了一丝曙光。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Then, I decided to return to school and earn money to support my family while studying. 听完他的故事后，我毅然决定重返校园，同时在学习之余赚钱养家。我利用课余时间四处寻找兼职工作，发传单、做家教、在餐厅打工，只要能赚钱，再苦再累我都愿意做。在学校里，我争分夺秒地学习，不放过任何一个知识点。虽然生活十分艰辛，但我始终牢记着他的话，从未有过放弃的念头。渐渐地，情况开始有所好转。我不仅能够负担起弟弟们的学费，还能给母亲买药治病。最终，我考上了一所理想的大学。多年后，我成为了一名成功的专业人士，而那个雨夜与他的相遇，永远改变了我的人生轨迹，我对此心怀无尽的感激。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 While walking together in the rain, he told me his story. He had been a promising athlete before an accident deprived him of his healthy leg. However, he didn't allow this misfortune to beat him. Instead, he used his strong will to start life anew. He established a small business from nothing. During the process, he encountered numerous difficulties. There were shortages of funds, losses of customers, and fierce market competition. Each problem was like a huge mountain standing in his way. Nevertheless, with his indomitable spirit, he overcame these difficulties one by one and finally achieved success. His story deeply shocked me and gave me a glimmer of hope in the darkness. 14 14 范文呈现 After hearing his story, I resolutely decided to return to school and earn money to support my family while studying. I looked for part - time jobs during my breaks. I handed out flyers, gave private lessons, and worked in restaurants. I was willing to do any job, no matter how hard or tiring it was, as long as it could bring in money. At school, I made the most of every minute to study, not missing any knowledge points. Although life was extremely tough, I always remembered his words and never had the thought of giving up. Gradually, things started to change for the better. I could afford my brothers' tuition and buy medicine for my mother. Eventually, I was admitted to an ideal university. Years later, I became a successful professional. And that encounter with him on that rainy night had forever changed the course of my life, for which I was extremely grateful. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 While traversing the rain - soaked streets side by side, he unfolded his life's narrative. Once a promising athlete, an accident had brutally snatched away his healthy leg. However, far from being vanquished by this misfortune, he summoned his indomitable will to embark on a new life journey. From the ground up, he launched a small business venture, only to be met with a litany of challenges. Financial constraints, client defections, and cut - throat market competition — each obstacle loomed like an insurmountable mountain. Nevertheless, with unwavering determination and grit, he surmounted these hurdles one by one, ultimately achieving resounding success. His story struck a deep chord within me, casting a glimmer of hope into the abyss of my despair. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Having absorbed his story, I made a resolute decision to return to the hallowed halls of learning while simultaneously shouldering the financial burden of my family. During breaks, I scoured the city for part - time employment opportunities. Whether it was distributing flyers on street corners, tutoring students in their homes, or toiling away in restaurants, I was undeterred by the arduousness or tedium. At school, I immersed myself in my studies, seizing every fleeting moment to master knowledge. Despite the overwhelming hardships, his words echoed in my mind like a mantra, quelling any thoughts of surrender. Gradually, the tides of fortune began to turn. I managed to scrape together enough funds to cover my brothers' tuition and purchase medicine for my ailing mother. Eventually, I secured admission to an esteemed university. Years down the line, I blossomed into a successful professional. That serendipitous encounter on that rainy night had irrevocably altered the trajectory of my life, for which I remain eternally grateful. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$