2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：生日惊喜中的道德抉择与坚守 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 生日惊喜中的道德抉择与坚守 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 On my twelfth birthday, I desired a shining new bicycle. However, considering our family’s financial struggle, I realized that such a bike was merely an impossible dream. Then, I decided to choose a nightstand (床头柜). It seemed like a sensible choice, as it would provide me with a safe space to store my personal things. Therefore, I requested my parents for a nightstand equipped with lockable drawers. We visited the second-hand furniture store and chanced upon an old nightstand in a dark brown color. Although its appearance wasn’t attractive, it had drawers that could be locked. I decided to repaint it in order to make it look better. 4 4 续写原文 After bringing it home, I prepared to paint the nightstand. However, as I pulled out the drawers, I found something stuck to the back of the bottom drawer. Curious and eager, I reached deep into the back and was surprised to discover a bag. Upon opening the bag, I discovered several official-looking papers within, under which there was a wad (沓) of dollar bills! Imagine my surprise when I found such a treasure, especially on my birthday! Eagerly, I read the papers, which turned out a will. A certain elderly woman was leaving her savings to her son and grandchildren. It must have been that after her passing no one knew of the money. Her family donated the nightstand to a second-hand furniture store, and now it has found its way into my hand. 5 5 续写原文 I counted the money and found it totaled over 1,000 dollars. My heart was racing with excitement. With such a large amount, I could buy the coolest bicycle. I even had enough to buy bicycles for my younger brothers. Perhaps I could even surprise my parents with a car. What a dilemma! Should I keep the money and use it to buy all kinds of things for myself and my family? Or should I return it all? “Somebody helps me with this!” I begged. But I knew I didn’t truly need anyone to give me the answer. I had a clear sense of right and wrong. I decided not to fail this test. It was a test of my virtue. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：I asked my family to come to my bedroom and showed them what I’d found. Paragraph 2：They three reached the line together, who was the crowd cheering? The boy was confused. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 十二岁生日时，因家庭经济困难，“我” 放弃新自行车，选择二手床头柜。带回家准备重新粉刷时，在抽屉后发现装有遗嘱和一千多美元的袋子。面对这笔巨款，“我” 陷入纠结，是用它满足家人的愿望，还是坚守道德底线归还。最终 “我” 决定通过家人支持寻找失主，一场归还失物的行动就此展开。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： I asked my family to come to my bedroom and showed them what I’d found. 我把家人叫到卧室，向他们展示了我发现的东西。家人们围拢过来，看着桌上的钱和遗嘱，脸上都露出了惊讶的神情。我详细地讲述了发现它们的经过，说完后，大家都陷入了沉默。过了一会儿，爸爸率先开口，他严肃地看着我，眼神中满是欣慰，表扬我做得对，并且强调这钱必须归还。妈妈也在一旁点头表示赞同，她说这是做人的基本准则。在家人的支持下，我们开始四处打听寻找失主的方法。我们先联系了二手家具店，店主帮我们联系到了处理老太太遗产的慈善机构。经过一系列的电话沟通和信息核实，我们离归还这笔失物越来越近。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：A few days later, the old lady’s son came to my house with his wife. 几天后，老太太的儿子和儿媳来到了我家。他们一进门，眼中就闪烁着感激的泪光。他们紧紧握着我的手，激动地说这笔钱对他们家庭意义重大，尤其是能帮助孩子们继续学业。为了表达感谢，他们拿出一个红包要给我当作报酬，我连忙婉拒了。我真诚地告诉他们，看到钱能回到真正属于它的地方，我就已经很满足了。这次经历让我更加坚定了自己的道德信念，也让我深刻理解了诚信的价值，它成为我十二岁生日中最难忘的记忆。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 A few days later, the old lady's son and daughter - in - law came to my house. As soon as they entered the door, their eyes were filled with tears of gratitude. They held my hands tightly and said excitedly that this money was of great significance to their family, especially for their children's education. To express their gratitude, they took out a red envelope and wanted to give it to me as a reward, but I declined it immediately. I told them sincerely that seeing the money return to its rightful place made me very satisfied. This experience made me more determined in my moral beliefs and also made me deeply understand the value of integrity. It became the most memorable memory of my twelfth - birthday. 14 14 范文呈现 When he reached them, the boy gently took the blind man's hand and said softly, "Sir, let me guide you." Then he supported the old lady's arm and said with concern, "Grandma, don't worry. We'll go together slowly." With the boy's help, the three of them moved forward step by step towards the finish line. When they finally crossed it together, the crowd erupted into cheers and applause. Looking around at the approving smiles on the audience's faces, the boy finally understood that real success wasn't about shining alone but about bringing warmth to others. From then on, the boy changed completely and always adhered to the belief of kindness and helping others in his later life. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I summoned my family to my bedroom, unveiling the unexpected discovery before them. Their eyes widened in astonishment as they beheld the stack of money and the will lying on the table. In meticulous detail, I recounted the sequence of events that led to this find. Post - narration, a profound silence ensued. Moments later, my father broke the stillness. His gaze, firm yet filled with pride, fixed upon me as he commended my upright decision, emphasizing that the money's rightful return was non - negotiable. My mother, nodding in unison, affirmed that such integrity was the cornerstone of our family values. Bolstered by their unwavering support, we embarked on a quest to locate the rightful owner. Our initial step was to reach out to the second - hand furniture store, whose proprietor, in turn, connected us with the charity overseeing the old lady's estate. Through a series of arduous phone calls and painstaking information verifications, we edged closer to the fulfillment of our mission to restore the lost inheritance. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 A few days hence, the old lady's son and daughter - in - law graced our doorstep. Their eyes, brimming with heartfelt gratitude, met mine as they entered. They clasped my hands firmly, their voices tremulous with emotion as they expressed the profound significance this money held for their family, particularly for their children's educational pursuits. In an attempt to convey their appreciation, they proffered a red envelope as a token of gratitude, which I promptly declined. With sincerity, I conveyed that witnessing the money's return to its rightful owner was the most precious gift I could receive. This experience not only fortified my moral compass but also etched indelibly upon my soul the true value of integrity, rendering it an indelible chapter in the annals of my twelfth - birthday memories. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$