2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：志愿者的努力与寻找援手之路 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 志愿者的努力与寻找援手之路 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 On a bright sunny day, I started my first day of volunteering at the L.A．Food Bank. My reason to volunteer at the food bank was to satisfy my need to help others and leave a change. This was my opportunity to make a positive impact in the world along with others who enjoy volunteering. As I entered the food bank, there were lots of people there. They waited in lines to check in with coordinators (协调员). Everybody volunteering began heading quickly to their assigned duties after checking in. I started to get excited when I realized my opportunity to encounter and work with a diverse group of people. This experience allowed me to make connections with people of different backgrounds. 4 4 续写原文 Coordinators assigned me to repackage donated food items. When I packed the donated food into a bag, I must make sure each bag had to contain the correct amount of food. I also must place food into bags quickly before the table would get overcrowded. My task also required a lot of focus when trying to work quickly with my hands. However, I thought all the hard work and effort would be worth it. 5 5 续写原文 We worked together as a team to ensure that our task was going effectively. While doing my task, some volunteers around me sighed, “There are still many boxes of food that need to be unloaded though we tried our best to work at a fast-pace.” I felt like we all had a common goal of helping others, but the problem was that there weren’t enough volunteers. In fact, we needed more people to deal with the food, which couldn’t be kept for too long. Without enough volunteers, much food would go bad. However, where could we find more volunteers? I decided to have a try to persuade some people to help deal with the food. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：After a busy morning, I decided to eat something in a restaurant. Paragraph 2：I walked towards them and wanted them to join us. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 在阳光明媚的一天，“我” 开启了在洛杉矶食品银行的首次志愿工作。在食品银行，“我” 被分配重新包装捐赠食品，大家齐心协力却发现志愿者人手不足，大量食物面临变质风险。“我” 决心寻找更多志愿者，忙碌一上午后在餐厅有了新发现，或许能解决燃眉之急。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： After a busy morning, I decided to eat something in a restaurant. 忙碌一上午后，我走进一家餐厅准备吃点东西。坐在餐桌前，享受着片刻的放松。不经意间，我注意到旁边一桌坐着几个年轻人，他们正热烈地交谈着，脸上洋溢着青春的活力。我灵机一动，心想他们或许就是我们急需的志愿者。但当我准备上前邀请时，心里不禁有些忐忑。毕竟和陌生人搭话，还请求他们帮忙，万一被拒绝了怎么办？可一想到食品银行堆积如山的食物和即将到来的变质危机，我还是鼓起了勇气。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：I walked towards them and wanted them to join us. 我走向他们，脸上挂着友善的笑容，先做了简单的自我介绍，接着详细地讲述了食品银行的现状。我告诉他们，大量捐赠的食物因为志愿者人手不够，面临着变质浪费的风险，而他们的加入可以改变这一局面。出乎我意料的是，他们听后眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒，还接连问了好多问题，对志愿工作表现出浓厚的兴趣。他们相互讨论了一会儿后，竟然一致同意跟我去食品银行帮忙。他们的热情瞬间感染了我，有了这些新伙伴的加入，我坚信我们一定能避免食物浪费，为那些需要帮助的人送去温暖。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 After a busy morning, I entered a restaurant to grab something to eat. Sitting at the table, I was enjoying a moment of relaxation. Suddenly, I noticed a group of young people sitting at the adjacent table. They were chatting animatedly, with the glow of youth on their faces. An idea popped into my mind. Maybe they could be the volunteers we urgently needed. However, when I was about to approach them, I felt a bit nervous. After all, it was not easy to talk to strangers and ask for their help. What if they refused? But thinking of the mountains of food in the food bank and the impending spoilage crisis, I summoned up my courage. 14 14 范文呈现 I walked towards them with a friendly smile. First, I introduced myself briefly, and then I described the situation at the food bank in detail. I told them that due to the shortage of volunteers, a large amount of donated food was at risk of spoiling, and their participation could change the situation. To my surprise, their eyes sparkled with excitement after hearing this. They asked a series of questions, showing great interest in the volunteer work. After a short discussion among themselves, they unanimously agreed to go to the food bank with me. Their enthusiasm immediately infected me. With these new volunteers joining, I firmly believed that we could prevent food waste and bring warmth to those in need. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 After a strenuous morning, I stepped into a restaurant, intent on grabbing a bite. Seated at the table, relishing a brief respite, my attention was abruptly drawn to a group of young individuals at the neighboring table. Engaged in animated conversation, their faces radiated youthful exuberance. A thought, like a bolt of lightning, flashed through my mind: perhaps they could be the much - needed reinforcements for the food bank. However, as I readied myself to approach them, a wave of nervousness washed over me. After all, initiating a conversation with strangers and soliciting their assistance was no easy feat. What if they declined? Nevertheless, the image of the mountainous piles of food at the food bank, teetering on the brink of spoilage, steeled my resolve, and I summoned the courage to proceed. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 I advanced towards them, wearing a warm smile. First, I offered a concise self - introduction, followed by a detailed account of the dire situation at the food bank. I explained that due to the scarcity of volunteers, a substantial quantity of donated provisions was perilously close to spoiling, and their involvement could be the turning point. To my astonishment, their eyes lit up with enthusiasm upon hearing this. They peppered me with a flurry of questions, evincing profound interest in the volunteer endeavor. After a brief huddle among themselves, they reached a unanimous decision to accompany me to the food bank. Their infectious zeal immediately permeated the air, and I was filled with a newfound sense of confidence. With these fresh volunteers on board, I was certain that we could stave off food waste and extend a helping hand to those in need. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$