2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：爱心传递：善举循环的温暖故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 爱心传递：善举循环的温暖故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 What Goes Around Comes Around One day a man saw an old lady on the side of the road. Noticing she might need help, he pulled up, got out and found that she had a flat tire(瘪胎).The lady was worried. No one had stopped to help for the last hour or so. He could see that she was so afraid, standing out there in the cold. He said, "I'm here to help you, ma'am. Why don't you wait in the car where it's warm? By the way, I am Bryan Anderson." As he was changing her tire, she rolled down the window and began to talk to him. She told him that she was only just passing through. She couldn't thank him enough for coming to her aid. 4 4 续写原文 When the work was finished, the lady asked how much she owed him, wiling to accept any amount. Bryan never thought twice about being paid. He told her that if she really wanted to pay him back, the next time she saw someone who needed help, she could give that person the assistance he or she needed, and Bryan added," And think of me." He waited until she started her car and drove off. It had been a cold and depressing day, but he felt good as he headed for home, disappearing into the darkness. 5 5 续写原文 A few miles down the road the lady went into a small café. The waitress came over and brought a clean towel to wipe her wet hair. She still had a sweet smile even though she mentioned that her husband died and she had to make a living by herself. The lady noticed the waitress was nearly eight months pregnant, but she never let her condition change her positive attitude. The old lady wondered how someone who had so little could be so caring to a stranger. Then she remembered Bryan and decided to do something. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： After the lady finished her meal, the waitress came to collect the bill. Paragraph 2： The waitress posted the touching story online, accompanied by words "Thank you! Kind lady!" 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 一天，布莱恩・安德森在路上看到一位车胎瘪了的老妇人，主动帮忙更换轮胎且分文未取，只希望她能将帮助他人的善举传递下去。老妇人离开后走进一家小咖啡馆，看到怀有身孕却独自谋生且笑容甜美的女服务员朱迪，想起布莱恩的话，决定施以援手。故事围绕着这份爱心的接力展开，展现人与人之间善良互助的美好。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： After the lady finished her meal, the waitress came to collect the bill. 老妇人吃完饭后，朱迪前来结账。老妇人看到朱迪胸前的名牌，知道了她的名字。她从钱包里拿出一张百元大钞递给朱迪。朱迪接过钱，转身去柜台找零。就在这时，老妇人起身，轻手轻脚地离开了咖啡馆。她在餐桌上的餐巾纸下压了一张纸条，上面写着：“你无需感谢我。曾经也有人像我帮助你一样帮助过我。如果你真的想回报我，就别让这份爱的传递终止。” 朱迪找零回来，发现老妇人已经不见，看到纸条的那一刻，她的内心被深深触动，眼眶瞬间湿润，泪水在眼眶里打转。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：The waitress posted the touching story online, accompanied by words "Thank you! Kind lady!" 朱迪被老妇人的善举深深感动，她决定把这个温暖的故事分享出去。她在社交媒体上发布了这个故事，并配上文字：“谢谢你！善良的女士！” 没想到，这个故事迅速在网络上传播开来，如同一颗爱心的种子，在无数人心中生根发芽。许多网友看到后，纷纷被这份善良和爱心所打动，有的人在评论区分享自己被帮助的经历，有的人表示以后也要像故事中的人一样，主动去帮助他人。这份爱心在网络的助力下，传递得更远更广，让更多人感受到人性的美好。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 After the lady finished her meal, the waitress came to collect the bill. The lady saw the name tag on the waitress, which read "Judy". She took out a $100 bill from her wallet and handed it to Judy. Judy received the money and turned around to get the change at the counter. At that moment, the lady got up and quietly left the café. She left a note under the napkin on the table. It said, "You don't owe me anything. Somebody once helped me out, just like I'm helping you. If you really want to pay me back, don't let this chain of love end." When Judy came back with the change and found the lady had gone, she was deeply touched when she saw the note. Her eyes were filled with tears. 14 14 范文呈现 The waitress was so moved by the kind act of the lady that she decided to share this warm story. She posted the story on social media, accompanied by the words "Thank you! Kind lady!" Surprisingly, the story spread rapidly on the Internet. It was like a seed of love, taking root and sprouting in the hearts of countless people. Many netizens were touched by this kindness and love. Some shared their own experiences of being helped in the comments section, and some said they would take the initiative to help others just like the people in the story. With the help of the Internet, this love was passed on further and wider, making more people feel the beauty of human nature. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 After the lady finished her meal, the waitress came to collect the bill. Spotting the name tag reading "Judy" on the waitress, the lady retrieved a $100 bill from her wallet and extended it towards Judy. Judy took the money and pivoted to fetch the change at the counter. Seizing this moment, the lady rose and slipped out of the café unnoticed. Under the napkin on the table, she left a note that read, "You don't owe me a thing. Someone once lent me a hand, just as I'm doing for you. Should you truly wish to repay me, ensure this chain of love remains unbroken." Upon returning with the change to find the lady gone, Judy's eyes welled up with tears as she perused the note, her heart deeply stirred. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 So deeply moved was the waitress by the lady's benevolent act that she resolved to share this heartwarming story. She posted it on social media, accompanied by the words "Thank you! Kind lady!" Astonishingly, the story went viral on the Internet, like a seed of love taking root and flourishing in the hearts of countless individuals. Many netizens, touched by this display of kindness and love, shared their own experiences of being assisted in the comment section, while others pledged to proactively help others, emulating the protagonists in the story. Thanks to the power of the Internet, this love propagated far and wide, enabling more people to experience the beauty of human nature. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$