2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：破茧成蝶：爱丽丝的重生之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 破茧成蝶：爱丽丝的重生之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 In a world where the sky was painted with dreams, Alice was a star that shined brightest until one day when a disastrous accident took her legs. Then Alice was suddenly thrown into the darkness. The physical limitation changed Alice a lot. She became increasingly isolated (孤僻的). She avoided going out, preferring the quietness of her room to the sounds of the outside world. Her friends, once close, now seemed distant, as Alice pushed them away with her bitter words. She gave up on her dream of a successful career, seeing no point in searching for a job that might never come. 4 4 续写原文 Days turned into months. Alice spent her time in loneliness, watching the world pass her by. But one day, a knock on the door broke the silence. It was her friend, Sarah, who had not given up on Alice despite her changes. Sarah sat beside her, listening to her sadness and fears with patience and understanding. Sarah promised to help Alice regain her lost confidence. She began by arranging visits with other friends, encouraging Alice to reconnect with those she had pushed away. Slowly but surely, Alice’s mood improved. Sarah also researched job opportunities that would be suitable for Alice’s condition and applied for her. 5 5 续写原文 After weeks of preparation with Sarah’s guidance, Alice’s first job interview finally arrived. Despite her best efforts, the interview didn’t go as smoothly as they had hoped. The interviewer seemed doubtful of Alice’s ability to perform the job duties because of her physical condition. Alice left with a broken heart. As soon as she got home, Alice broke down in tears, feeling like all her hard work had been for nothing. Sarah immediately came to her side with a comforting hug. “Don’t give up, Alice,” Sarah said firmly, “Trust yourself and there will be a company which cares more about your ability. Besides, I can help you. Let’s start from sending out more resumes (简历).” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Inspired by Sarah’s words, Alice wiped away her tears and decided to take her friend’s advice. Paragraph 2： Finally, after a long wait, Alice received a call offering her the job position she applied for. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 爱丽丝曾如闪耀星辰，却因一场意外失去双腿，陷入黑暗，性格变得孤僻，放弃梦想与朋友。然而，好友莎拉未放弃她，耐心陪伴，倾听她的痛苦。莎拉鼓励爱丽丝重新联系旧友，助其改善心情，还为她寻找合适工作机会并准备面试。尽管初次面试因身体状况失败，爱丽丝伤心落泪，但在莎拉坚定鼓励下，她决定重新振作。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Inspired by Sarah’s words, Alice wiped away her tears and decided to take her friend’s advice. 受莎拉话语的鼓舞，爱丽丝擦干眼泪，决定采纳朋友的建议。她和莎拉一起重新梳理了自己的优势和技能，精心修改简历，突出自己的能力和潜力。为了提升面试表现，爱丽丝每天对着镜子练习回答问题，纠正自己的仪态和语气。莎拉也在一旁不断给予反馈和鼓励，帮她模拟各种面试场景。她们还积极寻找更多适合爱丽丝的岗位，一家家投递简历，不放过任何一个可能的机会。在这个过程中，爱丽丝逐渐找回了自信和勇气。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Finally, after a long wait, Alice received a call offering her the job position she applied for. 终于，在漫长的等待后，爱丽丝接到了一通电话，对方提供了她申请的工作岗位。听到这个好消息，爱丽丝激动得热泪盈眶，她简直不敢相信自己的耳朵。她第一时间把这个喜讯告诉了莎拉，两人在电话里欢呼雀跃。这一刻，爱丽丝所有的努力和付出都得到了回报。她深知，没有莎拉的陪伴和帮助，自己不可能走到今天。她对未来充满了期待，准备以全新的姿态迎接这份工作，开启人生的新篇章 。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Inspired by Sarah’s words, Alice wiped away her tears and decided to take her friend’s advice. Together with Sarah, she carefully reviewed her strengths and skills, and then polished her resume meticulously, highlighting her capabilities and potential. To improve her interview performance, Alice practiced answering questions in front of the mirror every day, correcting her manner and tone. Sarah was always there, offering feedback and encouragement, and simulating various interview scenarios. They also actively searched for more suitable positions for Alice and sent out resumes one by one, leaving no chance unexplored. During this process, Alice gradually regained her confidence and courage. 14 14 范文呈现 Finally, after a long wait, Alice received a call offering her the job position she applied for. Upon hearing the good news, Alice was so excited that tears welled up in her eyes. She could hardly believe her ears. She immediately shared this wonderful news with Sarah, and they cheered with joy on the phone. At this moment, all of Alice's hard work and efforts paid off. She knew clearly that without Sarah's company and help, she couldn't have come this far. Filled with anticipation for the future, Alice was ready to embrace this job with a brand - new attitude and start a new chapter in her life. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Inspired by Sarah’s words, Alice wiped away her tears and decided to take her friend’s advice. Guided by Sarah, Alice meticulously combed through her strengths and skills, leaving no stone unturned in crafting a resume that spotlighted her capabilities and potential. Each day, she stood before the mirror, intently practicing interview responses, while Sarah patiently provided feedback, fine - tuning her every gesture and tone. Together, they scoured job boards, leaving no suitable position unapplied for, sending out resumes with unwavering determination. In this journey, Alice, step by step, reclaimed her lost confidence and found her inner strength. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Finally, after a long wait, Alice received a call offering her the job position she applied for. The moment the good news reached her ears, Alice was overwhelmed with excitement, her eyes welling up with tears of joy. Hardly able to believe her fortune, she immediately dialed Sarah, and their shrieks of elation echoed through the phone. At this glorious moment, all of Alice's arduous efforts bore fruit. She was acutely aware that without Sarah's unwavering support, this achievement would have been impossible. With a heart full of hope and anticipation, Alice geared up to embrace this new job, ready to write a brilliant new chapter in her life. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$