2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：伦敦马拉松的暖心互助时刻 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 伦敦马拉松的暖心互助时刻 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Training for a marathon is one of the most physically demanding activities you can willingly put yourself through. And when the race day finally comes after months of training and hours spent running on the playground you want to finish the race well. But sometimes, that just doesn’t happen. A warm moment happened among three runners, and with the help of two other runners, there was a runner who reached the finish line and finished the race. It’s reported that the three runners didn’t know each other before the race. 4 4 续写原文 That moment happened at the 203 London Marathon. A runner named Louis experienced this as he worked his way towards the end of the race. The man began to double over (弯腰) and was on the edge of collapsing (昏倒) as other runners passed by. Clearly, he was too tired to finish the race. But it was only 200 meters left. And he might fall to the ground at any time. So tired, Louis fell to the ground and looked white and upset. At that moment, a runner saw Louis who needed help, so the runner ran to him and picked him up. “Are you OK?” the runner asked Louis. “I am too tired to keep running,” Louis replied. “Come on! Let me support you to the finish line 200 meters away,” the runner said and grabbed his arm. 5 5 续写原文 “It is very kind of you,” Louis said happily. With the help of the runner, there were only 150 meters away from the finish line. But it seemed that he couldn’t hold Louis steady enough, Louis was in a bad condition and would fall to the ground at any time. The runner was very anxious and watched helplessly as other runners ran to the finish line, not knowing what to do. Although the runner tried his best to support Louis steady, Louis fell to the ground again. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. Paragraph 2With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 马拉松训练极为艰苦，选手都渴望在比赛中顺利完赛。在 2023 年伦敦马拉松赛上，选手路易斯临近终点时体力不支，几近昏倒。此时一名选手发现后，主动上前搀扶，助他前行。然而，只剩 150 米时，因一人难以支撑，路易斯再次摔倒。就在这关键时刻，另一名选手及时出现，一场感人的互助接力就此展开。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. 就在这时，另一名选手从路易斯身后赶来。他看到路易斯摔倒在地，以及旁边那名满脸焦急的选手，立刻明白发生了什么。没有丝毫犹豫，他迅速跑到路易斯身旁，蹲下身子，一只手穿过路易斯的腋下，用力将他扶起。然后对另一位帮忙的选手说：“我们一起，一定能把他送到终点！” 两人分别在路易斯两侧，紧紧搀扶着他，一步一步向前挪动。尽管路易斯身体沉重，脚步踉跄，但他们三人的眼神中都透着坚定，一心朝着终点前进。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. 在两名选手的帮助下，路易斯终于抵达了终点线。冲线的那一刻，全场观众爆发出热烈的掌声和欢呼声。路易斯虽疲惫不堪，却满脸感激，他对两位帮助他的选手说道：“没有你们，我不可能完成比赛，太感谢了！” 两位选手笑着回应：“这是我们应该做的，大家都是为了完成这场挑战。” 这场马拉松比赛，不仅是体力的较量，更是人性善良与互助精神的体现，而这温暖的一幕，也将永远留在人们的记忆中 。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. He saw Louis lying on the ground and the first runner looking anxious. Without thinking twice, he ran towards them quickly. Kneeling down beside Louis, he put his arm around Louis's shoulder and said, "Don't worry. I'm here to help." Then, he and the first runner stood on either side of Louis, firmly supporting him. They encouraged Louis with kind words and slowly moved forward step by step. Although Louis was extremely weak and could barely move his legs, the three of them were determined to reach the finish line together. 14 14 范文呈现 With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. As they crossed the line, the crowd erupted into applause and cheers. Louis, exhausted but grateful, turned to the two runners and said, "I couldn't have made it without you. Thank you so much!" The two runners smiled and replied, "It's what we should do. We are all here to complete this challenge." This marathon race was not only a test of physical strength but also a showcase of the kindness and mutual assistance among people. This warm moment would be engraved in everyone's memory forever. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. Spotting Louis lying helplessly on the ground and the first runner in distress, this new - comer rushed over without hesitation. Kneeling down beside Louis, he firmly put his arm around Louis's shoulder, saying, "Hold on! I'm here to give you a hand." Then, shoulder - to - shoulder with the first helper, they flanked Louis, lending him strong support. With words of encouragement, they inched forward, step by step. Despite Louis's extreme weakness, their determination was unwavering, as they were all set on reaching the finish line together. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. As they crossed that significant line, the on - looking crowd erupted into thunderous applause and cheers. Exhausted yet filled with gratitude, Louis turned to his two saviors and said, "It was you two who made this possible. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!" Smiling, the two runners replied, "It's simply what runners do for each other. We're all in this challenge together." This marathon wasn't merely a test of physical prowess; it was a vivid display of human kindness and solidarity. This heartwarming moment would surely be etched in everyone's memory for a long time. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$