2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：勇气助力，火海之中显担当 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 勇气助力，火海之中显担当 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Jay, 24, got home from work shortly after midnight. Then, suddenly, a horror-filled scream ripped through the still night. He rushed outside and saw flames lighting the sky half a mile away. Hurriedly, he called the fire department and rushed out to check the situation. Seconds later, Jay was fishtailing his car on the main road. The fire raged at a small hillside complex of mobile homes. Jay slid the car to a stop and sprinted up a steep lane toward the reddening glow. Reaching the hilltop, he saw that a 70-foot-long trailer (房车) was on fire. A young woman in torn nightclothes was running wildly back and forth, jumping to smash at the 6-foot-high windows with her hands. “Dear God!” she screamed. “My family is dying!” 4 4 续写原文 Jay felt a moment of panic. He seemed to be the only person there to help. Never had he seen such a fire! Flames were leaping out of broken windows at the far end of the trailer and winding along the roof; the roaring, crackling noises grew louder by the second. He grabbed the woman by the shoulders. “What happened?” he shouted. Barely coherent, Cindy told him she had escaped through one of the master bedroom windows. Her husband, Leonard, had gone for their two children: 22-month-old Ryan and 6-week-old Angela. He was supposed to hand them out to her from the bedroom. But, seconds later, flames had burst from the kitchen and living room windows. Cindy began crying miserably. “Where are they?” Jay yelled. Cindy pointed to the end section of the trailer, where thick, black smoke poured from the windows. 5 5 续写原文 From the time he was old enough to play sports, Jay had learned to battle the odds. As a Little Leaguer, he led his underdog team to the state championship. And in tiny St. Maries, his courage had earned him townspeople’s respect. Always, Jay recalled the words of his father: “The word can’t never did anything for anybody. You can do it! Never stop trying, son!” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Jay’s father’s words echoed in his mind. Paragraph 2： As her husband was placed in the ambulance to be driven to the hospital, Cindy walked over to Jay. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 深夜，24 岁的 Jay 下班后刚到家，就被一声惊恐的尖叫打破宁静。他发现半英里外的房车着火，一位年轻女子 Cindy 在车外哭喊，称丈夫 Leonard 和两个孩子还在车内。Jay 深知情况危急，他回忆起父亲 “永不言弃” 的教诲。在这千钧一发之际，Jay 决定挺身而出，冒险进入火海营救被困人员。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Jay’s father’s words echoed in his mind. Jay 的父亲的话在他脑海中不断回响。这些话如同强心针，让他瞬间充满力量。他迅速调整呼吸，准备迎接这场生死考验。他从附近找来一块湿布，捂住口鼻，毫不犹豫地再次冲进火海。房车内的温度极高，火焰和浓烟几乎让他无法视物。他凭借着顽强的意志和对方向的判断，艰难地朝着 Cindy 所指的方向摸索前进。每走一步，都要忍受着热浪的侵袭和烟雾的呛人。终于，在房车的尽头，他看到了 Leonard 和两个孩子。Leonard 已经体力不支，但仍紧紧护着孩子。Jay 赶忙上前，先将两个孩子抱起来，然后大声呼喊 Leonard，让他跟着自己。在艰难的摸索中，他们一步步向出口靠近。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：As her husband was placed in the ambulance to be driven to the hospital, Cindy walked over to Jay. 当她的丈夫被送上救护车准备送往医院时，Cindy 缓缓走向 Jay。她的眼中满是泪水，脚步有些踉跄。她走到 Jay 面前，扑通一声跪下，泣不成声地说道：“谢谢你，你是我们全家的救命恩人。若不是你，我真不敢想象会发生什么。”Jay 赶忙扶起 Cindy，轻声安慰道：“别这样，换做任何人都会这么做的。只要你们一家平安就好。” 此时，周围的邻居们也纷纷围过来，对 Jay 的勇敢行为赞不绝口。Jay 看着被送上救护车的 Leonard 和在一旁哭泣的 Cindy，心中感慨万千。他深知，是父亲的教诲让他有了面对危险的勇气，而这次经历也将永远铭刻在他的心中。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Jay’s father’s words echoed in his mind. These words were like a shot in the arm, filling him with instant strength. He quickly adjusted his breathing, ready to face this life - and - death test. He found a wet cloth nearby, covered his nose and mouth, and without hesitation, rushed into the sea of fire again. The temperature inside the trailer was extremely high, and the flames and thick smoke almost blinded him. Relying on his strong will and sense of direction, he groped his way forward with great difficulty towards the direction Cindy had pointed to. Every step he took, he had to endure the heat and the choking smoke. Finally, at the end of the trailer, he saw Leonard and the two children. Leonard was already exhausted but still holding the children tightly. Jay quickly stepped forward, picked up the two children first, and then shouted loudly to Leonard, asking him to follow. Amid the difficult groping, they moved step by step towards the exit. 14 14 范文呈现 As her husband was placed in the ambulance to be driven to the hospital, Cindy walked over to Jay. Her eyes were filled with tears, and her steps were a bit unsteady. She walked up to Jay, knelt down with a plop, and sobbed, "Thank you. You're the savior of our whole family. I can't imagine what would have happened without you." Jay quickly helped Cindy up and comforted her softly, "Don't do this. Anyone would have done the same. The most important thing is that your family is safe." At this time, the surrounding neighbors also gathered around, praising Jay's brave act. Jay looked at Leonard who was being sent to the hospital in the ambulance and Cindy who was crying beside him, and he felt a lot in his heart. He knew that it was his father's teachings that gave him the courage to face the danger, and this experience would always be engraved in his heart. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Jay’s father’s words echoed in his mind. Resounding repeatedly, those words from his father functioned as a powerful shot of courage, infusing him with an immediate surge of strength. Swiftly adjusting his breathing, Jay steeled himself for this life - or - death trial. Equipping himself with a wet cloth nearby to cover his nose and mouth, he plunged back into the inferno without the slightest hesitation. Inside the trailer, the searing heat was almost unbearable, and the conflagration along with the billowing smoke rendered visibility almost zero. Relying on his indomitable will and sharp sense of direction, he inched forward laboriously towards the area Cindy had indicated. With each step, he braved the intense heat and suffocating smoke. Eventually, at the far end of the trailer, he located Leonard and the two children. Leonard, on the verge of collapse, still shielded the kids with his body. Jay hastened to pick up the children first, then yelled for Leonard to follow. Amid the arduous struggle through the thick smoke, they gradually made their way towards the exit. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 As her husband was placed in the ambulance to be driven to the hospital, Cindy walked over to Jay. Tears streaming down her face, Cindy, her steps faltering, approached Jay. Upon reaching him, she dropped to her knees, sobbing uncontrollably, "Thank you. You're the hero who saved our entire family. I'm shuddering to think what could have happened if not for you." Jay promptly helped her up, offering words of comfort, "Please don't. Any decent person would have done the same. All that matters is that your family is out of danger." At that moment, the neighboring folks, drawn by the commotion, gathered around, showering Jay with praises for his heroic deeds. Gazing at Leonard being carted away in the ambulance and Cindy weeping beside him, Jay was filled with profound emotions. He was acutely aware that it was his father's teachings that had bestowed upon him the courage to confront the peril, and this experience would be indelibly etched in his memory forever. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$