2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：拖延症带来的教训：从失败到改变 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 拖延症带来的教训：从失败到改变 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Most people think that procrastination (拖延症) is a negative habit. But people like me who routinely put off doing assignments, are likely to defend our “slower” approach to getting tasks done. I'm the only procrastination in my family. My parents and sister were all born with the “do it right now” gift. They are always in a rush, as if closely rushed by an invisible deadline. Personally, I prefer a more relaxed pace. When my parents voiced their concern about my tendencies, saying “Don’t put off until tomorrow what you can do today,” “No way!” I responded, confidently presenting my research as a defense. It said people procrastinated when they need to solve a problem or commit to a topic or project. In these cases, delaying a decision can be beneficial. This was because our minds continue to reflect on problems even when we were not actively thinking about them, which could lead to more creative solutions. My findings filled me with satisfaction and pride. My method of getting things done was just as good as my sister’s…or so I thought. 4 4 续写原文 At school we’d been talking about architecture and design. As part of the final assessment my teacher Mr. Smith announced an exciting project that each student would have a month to complete. We were expected to choose our materials, construct a small building and make use of things we had learned in class. Not only would the winners receive extra credit, but the winning constructions would be proudly displayed in the cafeteria. “I have no clue how I could get it done,” my friend Nate sighed in despair. I didn’t say anything. Not because I shared his anxiety-but because I was not nervous at all. I loved hands-on projects! Picturing my brilliant work exhibited in the cafeteria, I was fully convinced that I would definitely produce something that could impress everyone. So relaxed was I that I didn’t give it a second thought for weeks. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： Before I knew it, I had only one day left for the project. Paragraph 2： That taught me a great lesson. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了一个有拖延习惯的主人公的经历。主人公一家除他之外，都有 “今日事今日毕” 的习惯，而他却喜欢更放松的做事节奏，并认为拖延有时有益。学校布置了一个建筑设计项目，为期一个月，主人公因喜爱这类项目且自信满满，数周都未在意。直到截止日前一天，他才惊慌失措地开始动手。结果通宵赶工完成的作品远不如预期，让他羞愧不已。这次经历让他深刻认识到拖延的危害，决心改变，开始为任务设定小目标，逐步推进，不再拖延。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： Before I knew it, I had only one day left for the project. 此句点明时间紧迫，故事转折。接着可描述主人公发现只剩一天时，内心极度震惊与恐慌，想起之前的自信满满，对比此刻的慌乱，形成强烈反差。然后详细描绘他手忙脚乱找材料的过程，因毫无准备，材料难找且不齐全，他尝试搭建，但因缺乏规划，一次次失败。熬夜赶工，眼睛布满血丝，身体疲惫不堪，可仍无法完成理想中的作品。最终完成的作品质量极差，与他想象中在食堂惊艳众人的样子天差地别 。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：That taught me a great lesson. 此句引出教训总结。先阐述他深刻反思，意识到拖延带来的严重后果，不再盲目相信拖延能带来好处。接着讲他开始向家人和做事高效的同学请教方法，学会制定详细计划，合理安排时间。从那以后，面对任何任务，他都不再拖延，而是按计划一步步推进。在新的任务中，他提前准备，有条不紊地完成，收获了成功和自信，彻底告别拖延带来的失败 。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 When the fact that only one day remained for the project dawned on me, panic seized me completely. Recalling my earlier overconfidence, I was now filled with regret. I dashed around my room, rummaging through drawers and boxes in a vain attempt to find suitable materials. As I had procrastinated for weeks, the materials were scattered and in disarray. Each attempt to piece together the building failed miserably due to lack of prior planning. I burned the midnight oil, my eyes bloodshot and my body aching. However, the final result was far from satisfactory. It was a poorly constructed mess, nothing like the magnificent creation I had dreamed of presenting in the cafeteria. 13 13 范文呈现 That experience served as a wake - up call. I realized that procrastination was not a harmless trait but a self - destructive habit. I decided to turn over a new leaf. I started by consulting my parents and classmates who were known for their efficiency. I learned to break down tasks into smaller, manageable steps and create a detailed schedule. From then on, whenever I was assigned a task, instead of putting it off, I would immediately start working according to my plan. This new approach brought remarkable changes. In subsequent projects, I was able to complete them with ease and confidence, leaving procrastination firmly in the past. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Before I knew it, I had only one day left for the project. It was then that I was suddenly struck by a sense of horror. Remembering my previous nonchalance, I now found myself scurrying around in a frenzy, rummaging through piles of materials, which, due to my long - term procrastination, were in utter disarray. Every attempt to construct the building ended in failure as no prior thought had been given to the plan. Staying up all night, my eyes bloodshot and body exhausted, I still couldn't produce anything close to my initial vision. What I finally submitted was a shabby piece of work, far from the masterpiece that could have been displayed proudly in the cafeteria. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 That taught me a great lesson. It was procrastination that had led me to this disappointing outcome. Determined to change, I reached out to those around me who were efficient in getting things done. By following their advice, I learned to break down tasks into smaller, achievable goals and set up a detailed schedule. From that moment on, no longer did I put off tasks until the last minute. Instead, I took immediate action and steadily progressed. As a result, I began to achieve satisfactory results in my projects, finally bidding farewell to the negative impact of procrastination. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$