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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was New Year’s Day. I made a resolution to find my stray (走失的) dog, Puppy-Rocky. In the morning, I could hear icy rain knocking the windows. I said a quick prayer for Puppy-Rocky. He was out there somewhere in the storm, and I could just feel it. Sure, it had been three months since he’d gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles (奇迹). That fall, Puppy-Rocky, my sweet dog, had disappeared from my parents’ house in California. He had been staying with them while I was between apartments. At the time, I lived and worked in New York City. I was staying with friends until I signed my lease (租约) on a new place. Puppy-Rocky had gotten out of my parents’ house two days before I was set to fly back home to pick him up. My mom and I spent that entire visit searching for him. Mom was the family's resident “realist”, which meant she spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. “He's either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found him,” she said. I rolled my eyes. Mom always supported me, but this time she doubted. She could have done with a little more faith! Besides, though I couldn't explain it, I believed I'd see my Puppy-Rocky again. His barks never faded away. He'd been homeless when I first met him, a naughty little dog that had survived all on his own. If any dog could do the impossible, it was my Puppy-Rocky. Even after I returned to New York City without him and the weeks stretched into months, deep down I had this feeling that we'd be reunited. Now, home again for the holidays, I was determined to pick up my search. I grabbed Puppy-Rocky's carrier, loaded it into the car, and then asked my mom to drive me to the shelter for the homeless dogs, hoping he'd been found. “Dave, you have to be realistic,” my mom said as we headed to the garage. “He's been gone too long. You're not going to find him.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Para. 1 “Don’t you believe in New Year miracles?” I asked. Para. 2 When I stepped into the last room of the shelter, a familiar bark came into my ears. 情节回顾 那年秋天，我因为搬家而不幸走失爱犬，寻找了三个月也没有找到，但我内心有一种感觉，爱犬就在我的身边。因此，哪怕母亲劝说要我现实一点，我也坚持要找回爱犬。转眼便是新年，我许下新年愿望，希望能够找回爱犬。有一天出门的时候，我拿上宠物包，并让母亲开车带我到流浪狗收容所寻找。 五要素分析 1. 人物（Characters） “我”：故事的主人公，对走失的狗狗 Puppy - Rocky 充满坚定的爱与信念，坚信能与它重逢。尽管妈妈持悲观态度，仍在新年第一天决心前往流浪狗收容所继续寻找。 妈妈：“我” 的母亲，较为现实，认为狗狗走失时间太久，找到的可能性微乎其微，但仍陪同 “我” 前往收容所。 Puppy - Rocky：“我” 走失的狗狗，曾是流浪狗，有顽强的生命力，在走失三个月后，或许仍在等待与 “我” 团聚。 2. 地点（Setting） 主要地点：流浪狗收容所，这是 “我” 寻找狗狗的关键场所。收容所内环境嘈杂，弥漫着各种狗狗的叫声和特殊气味，有着一排排的笼子，众多流浪狗被安置于此 。 次要地点：“我” 父母位于加州的家，狗狗在此处走失；纽约，“我” 当时生活和工作的地方。 3. 时间（Time） 新年第一天，这一时间点赋予了故事特殊的意义，象征着新的开始和希望，也契合 “我” 相信奇迹会发生的信念，让 “我” 更加坚定地踏上寻找狗狗的旅程。 4. 事件（Plot） 起因：新年伊始，“我” 决心找到走失三个月的狗狗 Puppy - Rocky。此前，狗狗在 “我” 父母家走失，当时 “我” 在纽约，狗狗暂住在父母家。“我” 和妈妈曾全力寻找，但毫无结果。 经过：“我” 带着狗狗的笼子，让妈妈开车送 “我” 去流浪狗收容所继续寻找。一路上妈妈持怀疑态度，而 “我” 满怀期待。到达收容所后，工作人员带领 “我” 在各个房间查看。 高潮（待续写）：“我” 在收容所的最后一个房间听到了熟悉的狗狗叫声。 结局（待续写）：“我” 能否成功找到狗狗 Puppy - Rocky，以及找到后的一系列反应和后续情况。 5. 主题（Theme） 文章围绕着爱、信念与坚持展开。通过 “我” 对走失狗狗的执着寻找，展现了人与宠物之间深厚的情感纽带。即便面对重重困难和他人的质疑，“我” 凭借坚定的信念和不放弃的精神，最终有可能实现与狗狗的团聚，强调了爱和信念能够战胜一切困难，同时也传递出在生活中要始终怀揣希望的积极态度 。 思路点拨 文章主要使用了插叙的手法，并且是第一人称视角叙事。第一段主要是新年时我对爱犬的祈祷，并点明：新年时期会有奇迹发生。第二到四段讲述了我寻找爱犬的过程，以及期间妈妈不断地劝说，让我做好最坏的打算。第五段和第六段则是新年时期，我坚持要妈妈带我去收容所寻找爱犬。根据两个段首句可以判断，最终我在收容所找到了爱犬。在这个过程中，faith创造了miracle。当然，有考生可能会误解妈妈在这个过程中扮演的角色，即有可能是妈妈不喜欢狗，故意弄丢。其实，正是因为妈妈知道狗狗对我有多么重要，为了安抚我的情绪，也不想让我一次又一次失望，因此才说要现实一点，并让我做好最坏的打算。此外，妈妈嘴上说着现实一点，但是出于对我的爱，还是陪着我一直在寻找。所以，我和妈妈之间其实是没有矛盾的，只不过一人称叙事视角让读者感觉妈妈隐瞒了不好的事情。因此，在续写的段落中，笔墨可以着眼于我的坚持，我和爱犬之间的心灵感应，我找到爱犬后妈妈的流露出的情感等。 下水文1 Para. 1 “Don’t you believe in New Year miracles?” I asked. She replied worriedly, “I just don't want you to get your hopes up and be disappointed again.” I didn’t respond. Along the way, the atmosphere was charged with an awkward silence. As we pulled up to the shelter, I could feel my heart pounding with a mixture of anticipation and anxiety. I took a deep breath and stepped out of the car, ready to face whatever awaited me inside. After hearing my explanation, a staff member led us to different rooms. My heart sank as I scanned the dogs of various colors and sizes but none of them was Puppy-Rocky and I could feel my Mom’s hands holding me more tightly. Para. 2 When I stepped into the last room of the shelter, a familiar bark came into my ears. My heart leaped with joy and disbelief and I rushed towards the sound. And there he was, my Puppy-Rocky, sitting in a corner, his tail wagging excitedly as he recognized me. Tears of happiness welled up in my eyes as I ran to him and scooped him up in my arms. Showing him to Mom, I cried, “It’s a true New Year miracle!” I noticed her eyes filled with affection and relief. We expressed our heartfelt gratitude to the staff. All the doubts and fears of the past three months melted away. On the way home, Puppy-Rocky interacted actively with us, and laughter of happiness came floating out of the car window. 语言分析： 在续写段落的情节中，可以写的点有很多，例如开车前往收容所的途中我的心情，到达了之后我是如何寻找爱犬，期间我的心理变化，找到了爱犬之后我们的反应。下水文中除了包括了上述情节之外，还使用了环境描写来烘托人物情绪，同时两处和妈妈有关的细节描写让妈妈这个人物的形象更加丰满。 下水文2 Para. 1 “Don’t you believe in New Year miracles?” I asked. Mom just shook her head slightly, but she still accompanied me to the shelter. As we arrived, I rushed in with high hopes. The staff there were very kind and showed me around each room. The smell of the shelter was strong, filled with the barks of various dogs. I looked at each dog carefully, my heart pounding with anticipation. Mom stood behind me, still skeptical. Para. 2 When I stepped into the last room of the shelter, a familiar bark came into my ears. My heart skipped a beat. I quickly scanned the room and there he was, Puppy - Rocky, looking a bit thinner but still as lively as ever. He jumped up and down, barking excitedly. Tears filled my eyes as I rushed towards him. Mom was stunned at first, then a big smile spread across her face. I gently put him into the carrier, and we drove home happily, celebrating the beautiful New Year miracle. 参考答案 Para. 1 “Don’t you believe in New Year miracles?” I asked. Mom sighed but didn't say more. When we reached the shelter, I was greeted by a chaotic scene. Dogs were barking everywhere, and the staff were busy handling different cases. I showed them a picture of Puppy - Rocky and they led me through the rows of cages. I could feel Mom's doubtful eyes on me, but I was too focused on finding my dog. Each step was filled with hope and nervousness. Para. 2 When I stepped into the last room of the shelter, a familiar bark came into my ears. Instantly, I recognized it was Puppy - Rocky. He was in a corner, wagging his tail vigorously when he saw me. I opened the cage and he leaped into my arms, licking my face all over. I was so overjoyed that I couldn't stop crying. Mom came over, patting my shoulder, saying, “I was wrong. You were right all along.” With Puppy - Rocky safely in the carrier, we left the shelter, feeling the warmth of this wonderful reunion. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$