Unit 2仿写法写家人的出行 方式（专项训练）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit1仿写法写家人的出行方式 话 1、 写作方法指引 Yang Ling: Where do you live now? Su Hai: I live on Moon Street, near City Library.介绍出行方式和原因 Yang Ling: How do you come to school? Su Hai: Su Yang and I come to school by bus.介绍家人的出行方式和原因 01 写作方法指引 原文：I live on Moon Street, near City Library. 句子结构：I live on … Street, near … 仿写：I live on No. 2 Park Street, near City Cinema. 原文：My aunt lives in Beijing. 句子结构：… lives in … 仿写： My father lives in Chengdu. 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 My new home is on Green Road. It is near my school. 引入话题 I usually go to school by bike. But sometimes it rains. I go to school by bus. My father is a teacher. My mother is a clerk. They work in different places. The school where my father works is far from our home. My father has a motorcycle. So he rides to work every day. And my mother goes to work by subway. 介绍出行方式和原因 What about you? How do you go to school? Can you tell me? 表达情感 2、 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.引入话题-介绍自己新家的位置 参考句型： My new home is on... It is near/ far from... My name is... I live on... I have moved to a new home. It is... 参考单词： XXX Street; XXX Road; Avenue; new home; spacious and bright;small but beautiful; 2. 介绍自己去上学以及父母去上班的方式 参考句型： I usually go to school... But sometimes... I go to school by... My father/mother is a... They work in... My father has a... So he drives to work... And my mother goes to work in ... My friend... lives on... He goes to school by... because... 参考单词： on foot（步行）by bike（骑自行车） by bus（乘公交车）by subway （乘地铁） by car（乘小汽车，如有家长接送） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 一般现在时 定义：一般现在时表示通常性、规律性、习惯性、真理性（即事实）的动作或状态，或者动作有时间规律发生的事件的一种时间状态。 构成： 肯定句： 主语不是第三人称单数：主语 + 动词原形 + 其他。 例如：I play football.（我踢足球。） We go to school every day.（我们每天去上学。） 主语是第三人称单数：主语 + 动词第三人称单数形式 + 其他。 例如：He plays football.（他踢足球。） She goes to school by bike.（她骑自行车去上学。） 否定句： 主语不是第三人称单数：主语 + don't + 动词原形 + 其他。 例如：I don't play basketball.（我不打篮球。） hey don't go to the park on Sundays.（他们星期天不去公园。） 主语是第三人称单数：主语 + doesn't + 动词原形 + 其他。 例如： He doesn't like music.（他不喜欢音乐。） She doesn't watch TV in the evening.（她晚上不看电视。） 时间标志词：常用于一般现在时的词语有 sometimes（有时）、usually（通常）、often（经常）、every day/week/month/year（每天 / 每周 / 每月 / 每年）、always（总是）、now（现在）等 动词第三人称单数形式的变化规则： 一般情况：在动词后加 - s。如：play-plays，work-works，read-reads。 以 s、x、ch、sh、o 结尾的词：加 - es。如：pass-passes，fix-fixes，watch-watches，wash-washes，go-goes。 以辅音字母 + y 结尾的词：变 y 为 i 再加 - es。如：study-studies，carry-carries，fly-flies。 特殊变化的词：be 动词的变化为 am，is，are；have 的第三人称单数形式为 has。 单项选择 1.She often ________ books in the evening. A. read B. reads C. reading 2.We ________ to school on foot every day. A. go B. goes C. going 3.My father ________ a doctor. A. am B. is C. are 参考解析： 1.答案：B 解析：本题考查一般现在时中动词的用法。句中的 “often”（经常）是一般现在时的标志词，表示经常发生的动作。主语 “she”（她）是第三人称单数，在一般现在时中，当主语是第三人称单数时，动词要用第三人称单数形式。“read” 的第三人称单数形式是 “reads”，所以这里应该选择 B 选项。 2.答案：A 解析：同样考查一般现在时中动词的形式。“every day”（每天）提示句子用一般现在时，主语 “we”（我们）是复数形式，在一般现在时里，主语不是第三人称单数时，动词用原形，“go” 是动词原形，“goes” 是第三人称单数形式，“going” 是现在分词形式，不符合此处语法要求，所以选择 A 选项。 3.答案：B 解析：本题考查 be 动词在一般现在时里与不同主语搭配的用法。主语 “My father”（我的父亲）是第三人称单数，be 动词的用法规则中，第一人称单数（I）用 “am”，第三人称单数（he/she/it 等）用 “is”，复数（we/they 等）用 “are”，所以 “my father” 对应的 be 动词应该是 “is”，选择 B 选项。 三、模拟写作提升 模拟写作提升1 前情提要： 假如你是苏海,请根据图片及提示,以“How do we come to school?”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你和你的好朋友们住在哪里以及怎样上学。要求：语句通顺，不少于5句话。 提示： Moon Street/far from/by bus; near school/on foot; Sunshine Town/by metro; Park Street /by taxi How do we come to school? _____________________________________________________________________ 参考句型： My new home is on... It is near/ far from...I usually go to school... But sometimes... I go to school by...My father/mother is a... They work in... The hospital is far from...My father has a... So he drives to work... And my mother goes to work in his car. How do you go to school? Can you tell me? 参考词汇： new home, street, near, school, on foot, taxi, father, doctor, mother, nurse, hospital, far from, car, drive, work, you, go to school, tell 范文1： My new home is on Red Star Street.It is near my school. 引入话题I usually go to school on foot. But sometimes I get up too late. I go to school by taxi. My father is a doctor. My mother is a nurse. They work in the same hospital. The hospital is far from our home. My father has a car. So he drives to work every day. And my mother goes to work in his car. 介绍出行方式和原因What about you? How do you go to school? Can you tell me? 表达情感 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 陈元的家住在青衣路，离学校比较远，他乘公共汽车去上学。他的爸爸开车去上班，他的妈妈乘地铁去上班。他的朋友刘涛住在公园街，他乘出租车去上学，因为他的爸爸是一名出租车司机。 要求： 1.语句连贯通顺，条理清楚。 2.短文需包括所有信息提示，不少于5句话。 【思路点拨】可能用到的词汇： Shanghai Road ; far from ; Park Street ; taxi driver 参考句型： 1.My name is... I live on... 2.It's far from... I go to school by... 3.My father/mother goes to work by... 4.My friend... lives on... He goes to school by... because... 参考词汇： name, live, road, far from, school, bus, father, work, car, mother, metro, friend, street, taxi, driver, love, family 范文2： My name is Cheng Yuan. I live on Qing Yi Road. It’s far from my school. 引入话题I go to school by bus. My father goes to work by car. And my mother goes to work by metro. My friend Liu Tao lives on Park Street. He goes to school by taxi, because his father is a taxi driver. 介绍出行方式和原因I love my family. 表达情感 四、真题写作练习-江苏常州 假设你搬了新家，你的新家在哪里?你是怎样去上学的?你的父母是怎样去上班的?请你根据这些问题写一篇短文吧！ 要求： 条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。 不少于 40个单词。 参考句型： 1. I have moved to a new home. It is... 2. I go to school by... 3. My father goes to work by... 4. My mother takes...to work. 参考词汇： new home, park, school, bike, father, car, mother, bus, convenient, enjoy, destination 范文3 I have moved to a new home. It is near a park. 引入话题I go to school by bike every day. It's fun and good exercise. My father goes to work by car. He says it's convenient. My mother takes the bus to work. She enjoys looking out of the window on the way. 介绍出行方式和原因I love our new home and the way we all go to our destinations. 表达情感 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$