内容正文:
Review the structure of “ The Power of Good”
Part 1.
Para 1
Part 2.
Para 2-6
Part 3.
Para 7
The________________of Winton
Introduction
The________________of Winton
Main body
The________________to Winton
Conclusion
achievements
major events
comments
How to write a biography?
Biography
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Basic information of the person
His/her biggest achievement
Major events (in time order)
Your opinion/comments on his/her contribution
B3 U2
Making a difference
Writing a biography
Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
Read Tu Youyou’s story(P30) and find out when and why she was awarded the Nobel Prize.
when and why she was awarded the Nobel Prize.
Name of the person: _____________________
Her biggest achievement: _________________
______________________________________
Introduction
Major events(in time order):
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
Main body
Introduction
Name of the person: ___________
Her biggest achievement:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
Tu Youyou
won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
She won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
Introduction
Name of the person: ___________
Her biggest achievement:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
Tu Youyou
Tu Youyou, a great medical scientist,
was the first Chinese to win the Nobel Prize......
Name of the person: _____________________
Her biggest achievement: _________________
______________________________________
Introduction
Major events(in time order):
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
Main body
be born
on
in
In (year), ... On (day/date), ...
Later, ... Finally, ...
At the age of ... At one point, ...
By (year/day/date), ...
Useful expressions
when and why she was awarded the Nobel Prize.
from...to...
study at
Main Body
Major events (in time order):
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. From 1951 to 1955, she studied at Beijing Medical College .
2.屠呦呦于1930年12月30日出生在浙江宁波,21岁时被北京大学医学院(Peking University Medical School) 录取(admit)
① Tu Youyou was born
on December 30 th, 1930
in Ningbo,Zhejiang
Born in Ningbo,Zhejiang on December 30 th, 1930,
at the age of 21
Tu Youyou was admitted to Peking University Medical School
at the age of 21.
② She was admitted to Peking University Medical School
and
2.屠呦呦于1930年12月30日出生在浙江宁波,21岁时被北京大学医学院(Peking University Medical School) 录取(admit)
① Tu Youyou was born
on December 30 th, 1930
in Ningbo,Zhejiang
Born in Ningbo,Zhejiang on December 30 th, 1930,
at the age of 21
Tu Youyou was admitted to Peking University Medical School
at the age of 21.
② She was admitted to Peking University Medical School
and
when and why she was awarded the Nobel Prize.
from...to...
since
study at
work at
work as
/ˈtenjərd/ adj. 终身的;长期保有的
Main Body
Major events (in time order):
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. From 1951 to 1955, she studied at Beijing Medical College .
2. Since 1955, she has worked as a tenured and chief researcher at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences,
出生于:___________________ 酷爱:_______________
在……方面有天赋:_______________从某大学毕业:__________
be born in
have/show a passion for
be talented in...
graduate from
1.引出人物:--- 简单介绍人物背景
语料积累
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
2.介绍人物主要经历
做…工作:____________
起关键性作用:_______________
在…获得巨大的成功:___________________
下定决心做某事:_____________________
work as
play a crucial role in
achieve great success in...
/ take up a position as
be determined to do sth
when and why she was awarded the Nobel Prize.
in
by
...years later
年龄
Main Body
Major events (in time order):
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By 1972, she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb, which is very effective in fighting malaria.
In 1969, she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria.
when and why she was awarded the Nobel Prize.
in
by
...years later
年龄
Main Body
Major events (in time order):
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
14 years later, she obtained a New Drug Certificate for qinghaosu, issued by the Ministry of Health of China.
At the age of 85 , she won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering a novel therapy against malaria.
when and why she was awarded the Nobel Prize.
in
by
...years later
年龄
Main Body
Major events (in time order):
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
In 2019, she was nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century”.
Conclusion
Your opinion on her contribution:
__________________________________________
She is a universal hero and a model of her time.
Introduction:
Tu Youyou, a Chinese scientist , was the 1st woman who won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.
Main body:
… on 30th December 1930; … from 1951 to 1955; Since 1955, …; In 1969, …; By 1972, …; Fourteen years later, …; … at the age of 85; In 2019, …
Conclusion:
Tough, stubborn and determined,she gave her best and made great contributions to medicine.
She is a universal hero and a model of her time.
eye-catching
logical & coherent
conclusive
5. 总之,她在医药学方面(in the field of medicine)的成就在中国乃至全世界都受到高度评价。
her achievements
In short/ In a word/ All in all,
speak of sb highly
her achievements are praised highly
praise highly
her achievements in the field of medicine are praised highly
In short, her achievements in the field of medicine are praised highly in China and even the whole world.
her achievements in the field of medicine are praised highly in China and even the whole world.
5. 总之,她在医药学方面(in the field of medicine)的成就在中国乃至全世界都受到高度评价。
her achievements
In short/ In a word/ All in all,
speak of sb highly
praise highly
In short, her achievements in the field of medicine are praised highly in China and even the whole world.
人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇
为某人赢得好名声:_______________
高度评价__________________
做出巨大贡献:________________________
被授予……:________________
作为……而闻名:__________________
被尊称为________________________
树立好榜样:_________________
值得我们尊重:_________________________________
earn sb a good reputation
make great contributions to
be awarded...
be known/famous as
be honored as
set a good example
deserve our respect
speak highly of
Body
Ending
Beginning
Basic information
(Name, identity...)
Experience
Achievements
Impressive story
Opinions or comments
Structure
引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平,教育,职业等
介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写,贡献或成就等
人物评价及对作者的影响---人格,贡献,闪光点
注意:运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用 ,而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用 ____________
一般现在时
一般过去时
终身学者
担任
旨在做某事
设法做
对……有效
(正式)发给
治疗……的新疗法
被提名为……
tenured researcher
work as
aim to do
manage to do
be effective in sth./doing sth.
by issued by
a novel therapy against…
be nominated for/as
Useful expressions:
姓名: 袁隆平
出生: 1930年,北京
毕业院校: 西南农学院
职业: 科学家
工作经历: 大学毕业后,他从事农业教学何研究工作
在1975年,他成功培育出了杂交水稻,
成就: 提高了水稻产量,有助于消除世界饥饿
被誉为“杂交水稻之父”
西南农学院:
Southwest Agricultural College
他从事农业教学和研究工作
agricultural teaching
research
培育出了杂交水稻
breed hybrid rice
杂交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
提高了水稻产量,
有助于消除世界饥饿
improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger
参考词汇
出生于:___________________ 酷爱:_______________
在……方面有天赋:_______________从某大学毕业:__________
be born in
have/show a passion for
be talented in...
graduate from
1.引出人物:--- 简单介绍人物背景
语料积累
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
2.介绍人物主要经历
做…工作:____________
把…奉献给…:___________________
起关键性作用:_______________ 坚定的决心___________________
在…获得巨大的成功:___________________
使某人能够做某事:_____________________
下定决心做某事:_____________________
work as
devote oneself/entire life to...
play a crucial role in
strong will and determination
achieve great success in...
enable sb to do sth
/ take up a position as
be determined to do sth
Polish your writing.
Homework:
Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft.
□ Does the biography include the key points?
□ Is the biography organized properly and
smoothly?
□ How is the language?
□ How is the handwriting?
□ How is the paper design?
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