Unit 1 单元主题写作满分精讲精练（讲义& 题型突破）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册单元重难点精讲精练全突破（人教版2024）

Unit 1 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （主题Favorite animal讲义&题型突破) 一、写作主题 Favorite animal 二、主题分析 有关最喜欢的动物的写作，通常要求学生以第一人称描述自己最喜欢的动物，在描写动物的时候，需要合理使用形容词，再介绍动物的其他信息，如这些动物该动物的名字、来自哪里、‌外貌特征、性格特点、生活习性喜欢什么、饮食和睡眠习惯等以及与自己之间的情感联系‌等方面展开叙述。这样的写作不仅能够锻炼学生的英语表达能力，还能让他们学会如何运用具体细节来描绘事物，使文章更加生动有趣。一般情况下用一般现在时进行描述。 例如，学生可能会选择描述一只可爱的小狗，通过描绘它雪白的毛发、圆溜溜的眼睛、活泼的性格以及每天陪伴自己散步的情景，来表达自己对这只小狗的喜爱之情。这样的写作既体现了学生的观察力，又展现了他们的情感世界，是初中英语写作中常见且富有教育意义的主题之一。‌ 二、写作步骤 1. 话题引入。开篇点题，引出你要介绍的动物。 2. 详细介绍。介绍动物的特征，如：动物的名称、年龄、栖息地及其性格特点、喜好等。 3. 做评价，抒发对此动物的感情，并号召人们爱护动物。 三、常用的词汇 favorite最喜欢的，big大的，round圆的，bamboo竹子，protect保护，lovey可爱的，cute可爱的，lazy懒惰的，animal动物，friendly友好的，friendship友谊，symbol象征，scary吓人的，exciting兴奋的，friendly友好的， he symbol of……的象征，black and white黑白相间的，many kinds of许多种类的，be from来自。 四、常用的句型句式 I like...best.我最喜欢…… What's your favorite animal？你最喜欢的动物是什么？ He likes...because they're very...他喜欢……因为它们很…… Pandas are from china.熊猫来自中国。 It's a symbol of...它是……的象征。 I like him/her because he/she.我喜欢他/她因为他/她…… 开头句 1. This is a photo of... 2. Do you like...? 3. What’s your favourite animal? 4. Do you know many animals are in danger? 5. Animals are our friends. 6. I have a plan to build a zoo to... 7. Let’s go and see... 8. I think a good zoo is home to many animals like... 9.There are many animals in the world.世界上有许多动物。 10.Giant pandas are China's national treasure.熊猫是中国的国宝。 11.There are many kinds of animals in the zoo.动物园有许多种动物。 12.They are friendly.他们是友好的。 中间句 1. My favourite animal is... 2. He/ She is from... 3. He/She is...years old. 4. But I think it’s kind of... 5. Don’t throw any food to them, because... 6. We should learn to live peacefully with... 7. Why must they live in the zoo? 8. There are also many donated pets... 9. They are a symbol of friendship... 10. They are so kind to people that... 11. They’re too shy to live in noisy places. 12. Never try to take a photo with them. 13. It’s dangerous to get close to them. 14. Think of a good way to protect them... 结尾句 1. I love the zoo, because I want the... 2. I’m happy to see so many people... 3. Let’s go together to do something to give them a safe home! 4. How happy they are! 5. I love animals. I love nature. 6. I believe all people can live in a friendly way with these animals. 7.We must try our best to protect them.我们必须尽力去保护他们。 8.The panda is one of the symbols of China.熊猫是中国的象征之一。 例题精讲 假如中国国宝大熊猫是你最喜爱的动物，请以“My favorite animals-giant pandas”为题，根据下面提示写一篇短文。内容包括： 1.你为什么喜欢它们（cute, friendly），它们来自哪里（China）； 2.它们有哪些特征（white and black fur，大眼睛、圆耳朵）； 3.特点和爱好（lazy, bamboo，爬树）； 4.大熊猫是中国国宝（national treasure），友谊（friendship）的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护（protect）它们； 5.开头已经给出，其他可以适当发挥。70~80词。 My favorite animals-giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world，______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨 开篇点题 喜欢熊猫 like... best be from China 介绍熊猫 外貌特征 white and black fur,big eyes round ears 性格、习性 cute,friendly,lazy,lovely eat bamboo,climb trees 自己的感悟 呼吁保护 National treasure,the symbol of friendship,2,000，protect them 范文赏析 My favorite animals-giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world,but I like pandas best.They are from China. I like pandas because they are cute and friendly. hey have white and black fur.And they have big eyes and round ears.They look a little lazy but very cute.They like eating bamboo.They also like climbing trees.So they are lovely. Giant pandas are China's national treasure. They are the symbol of friendship.There are only about 2,000 pandas now.We must try our best to protect them. 1. 假定你是阳光中学“Love Nature”社团的负责人李华，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，呼吁全校师生加入到保护野生动物的活动中来。 要求： 1.参考下侧提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何你的真实信息（校名、姓名和地名等）； 4.词数：80—120词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Reasons in great danger keep the balance (平衡) of nature Ways no hunting (猎捕) stop buying things made out of animals plant more trees Dear teachers and students, As the leader of the “Love Nature” club, I want to call on everyone to join us in protecting wildlife. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假设你是一名七年级学生李华，你的学校将举行保护动物环保周活动。请根据以下要点提示，完成一篇保护动物的演讲稿，号召大家一起行动起来，保护动物。 动物对人类的重要性如何做？ 1.动物能帮助人类。 2.动物让人们感觉不再孤单。 如何做？ 1.保护动物。 2.不猎杀动物。 3（自己补充至少一点） 号召大家保护动物 …… 要求： 1.必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear students, Hello, I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 书面表达 “Animals are our friends.”请你以“My Favorite animal”为题目，根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 1.What is your favorite animal? 2.What is he/she like? 3.Why do you like him/her? （注：英语中，我们可以用she或he指代动物，将它拟人化） 要求： 1.短文必须包括提示所有要点，可以适当发挥； 2.短文中不要出现真实的人名及校名； 3.词数60—80词左右。 My Favorite Animal ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛，请根据下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。 动物名称： 我最喜欢的动物是…… 动物外貌： 它的颜色，外形与主要特征…… 生活特性： 喜欢吃什么东西，喜欢在什么地方睡觉，是否喜欢晚上活动，是否喜欢发出噪音。 喜欢的原因： 至少两点…… 要求： 1. 字数60左右； 2. 要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节使文章连贯通顺。 My favourite animal ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 旅外大熊猫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜，又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为主题的英文手抄报评选活动。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制，而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示，完成一篇英语短文。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数 60 左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Giving Pandas a Good Life What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 某英文杂志向中学生征稿，请同学们以“My Favourite Animal”为题，根据以下提示，介绍一下自己最喜欢的动物。（语篇类型：应用文  人称：第三人称为主） 1. What animal do you like best? 2. Why do you like it? 3. … （时态：一般现在时） 要求： 1.词数60左右； 2.短文意思连贯、符合逻辑； 3.所给提示词仅供选用。 提示词：cute, clever, helpful, friendly _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 假如你是李华，最近养了一只宠物猫。请根据下面单词提示，用英文下一篇短文，介绍一下你的新宠物。 Mimi   six months   black and white   China   shy  cute   fish   ball 要求： 1、短文中不得出现真实的人名及相关信息； 2、短文须包括所有提示单词，可适当发挥，词数50左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 请你就以上材料，以“A Visit to the zoo”为题写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）请你谈谈动物园里看到的动物； （2）请你描述一下当时的心情； （3）呼吁人们保护动物。 要求： 1.字数60 词左右； 2.文章中不能出现真实的姓名、学校等信息。 A visit to the Zoo! 9. 假设你是李冬，你的英国笔友Bob给你发了一封英文邮件，请结合以下邮件内容，给Bob回一封邮件。词数：80词左右，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Li Dong, How are you? I know the panda is a symbol of China and I like the pandas very much. But I’m so sorry to hear that they are in danger. Can you tell me something more about pandas? For example, where do they live? What’s their favourite food? Why are they in danger and how to save them? I’m looking forward to your email. Best wishes. Yours, Bob ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 动物是我们人类的朋友，请你以“My favourite animal”为题，写一篇短文，80词左右。 写作要点： 1. What does it look like? 2. What’s its lifestyle? 3. Why do you love it? 4. … 注意事项： 1. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥。 My favourite animal _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11. 假如你是上海动物园的志愿讲解员，请你根据以下信息提示，写一篇英文讲解词来介绍明星动物多多。 名字：多多 年龄：21岁 物种：亚洲象 (Asian elephant) 家乡：缅甸 (Myanmar) 喜欢的活动：洗淋浴 用象鼻 (trunk) 和大家打招呼 喜欢的食物：青草 (grass) 各种水果和蔬菜 观赏注意事项：请勿投喂 (feed) 要求：1.讲解词须包含所有信息提示，可适当发挥； 2.语言表达要准确，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3.词数不少于60，讲解词的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to Shanghai Zoo. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12. 假定你是Tony，是Star Middle School的一名七年级学生。上星期天你从报纸上看到野生动物保护俱乐部 (Friend of Wildlife) 的招聘广告。请你写封简短的申请信，介绍自己的情况并说明申请理由及期盼的心情。 姓名 Tony 年龄 15 性格 外向；乐于助人 爱好 阅读；旅游；拍各种动物照片 相关经历 经常照顾无家可归的动物；曾就保护野生动物给报纸写信 空闲时间 每周日上午 申请理由 ……(自拟2条加入俱乐部的理由) 提示词： 保护野生动物：protect wild animals 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括所有的信息，并作适当地发挥； 2.90词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I read your advertisement in the newspaper last Sunday, I’d like to become a member of Friend of Wildlife. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 13 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （主题Favorite animal讲义&题型突破) 一、写作主题 Favorite animal 二、主题分析 有关最喜欢的动物的写作，通常要求学生以第一人称描述自己最喜欢的动物，在描写动物的时候，需要合理使用形容词，再介绍动物的其他信息，如这些动物该动物的名字、来自哪里、‌外貌特征、性格特点、生活习性喜欢什么、饮食和睡眠习惯等以及与自己之间的情感联系‌等方面展开叙述。这样的写作不仅能够锻炼学生的英语表达能力，还能让他们学会如何运用具体细节来描绘事物，使文章更加生动有趣。一般情况下用一般现在时进行描述。 例如，学生可能会选择描述一只可爱的小狗，通过描绘它雪白的毛发、圆溜溜的眼睛、活泼的性格以及每天陪伴自己散步的情景，来表达自己对这只小狗的喜爱之情。这样的写作既体现了学生的观察力，又展现了他们的情感世界，是初中英语写作中常见且富有教育意义的主题之一。‌ 二、写作步骤 1. 话题引入。开篇点题，引出你要介绍的动物。 2. 详细介绍。介绍动物的特征，如：动物的名称、年龄、栖息地及其性格特点、喜好等。 3. 做评价，抒发对此动物的感情，并号召人们爱护动物。 三、常用的词汇 favorite最喜欢的，big大的，round圆的，bamboo竹子，protect保护，lovey可爱的，cute可爱的，lazy懒惰的，animal动物，friendly友好的，friendship友谊，symbol象征，scary吓人的，exciting兴奋的，friendly友好的， he symbol of……的象征，black and white黑白相间的，many kinds of许多种类的，be from来自。 四、常用的句型句式 I like...best.我最喜欢…… What's your favorite animal？你最喜欢的动物是什么？ He likes...because they're very...他喜欢……因为它们很…… Pandas are from china.熊猫来自中国。 It's a symbol of...它是……的象征。 I like him/her because he/she.我喜欢他/她因为他/她…… 开头句 1. This is a photo of... 2. Do you like...? 3. What’s your favourite animal? 4. Do you know many animals are in danger? 5. Animals are our friends. 6. I have a plan to build a zoo to... 7. Let’s go and see... 8. I think a good zoo is home to many animals like... 9.There are many animals in the world.世界上有许多动物。 10.Giant pandas are China's national treasure.熊猫是中国的国宝。 11.There are many kinds of animals in the zoo.动物园有许多种动物。 12.They are friendly.他们是友好的。 中间句 1. My favourite animal is... 2. He/ She is from... 3. He/She is...years old. 4. But I think it’s kind of... 5. Don’t throw any food to them, because... 6. We should learn to live peacefully with... 7. Why must they live in the zoo? 8. There are also many donated pets... 9. They are a symbol of friendship... 10. They are so kind to people that... 11. They’re too shy to live in noisy places. 12. Never try to take a photo with them. 13. It’s dangerous to get close to them. 14. Think of a good way to protect them... 结尾句 1. I love the zoo, because I want the... 2. I’m happy to see so many people... 3. Let’s go together to do something to give them a safe home! 4. How happy they are! 5. I love animals. I love nature. 6. I believe all people can live in a friendly way with these animals. 7.We must try our best to protect them.我们必须尽力去保护他们。 8.The panda is one of the symbols of China.熊猫是中国的象征之一。 例题精讲 假如中国国宝大熊猫是你最喜爱的动物，请以“My favorite animals-giant pandas”为题，根据下面提示写一篇短文。内容包括： 1.你为什么喜欢它们（cute, friendly），它们来自哪里（China）； 2.它们有哪些特征（white and black fur，大眼睛、圆耳朵）； 3.特点和爱好（lazy, bamboo，爬树）； 4.大熊猫是中国国宝（national treasure），友谊（friendship）的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护（protect）它们； 5.开头已经给出，其他可以适当发挥。70~80词。 My favorite animals-giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world，______________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨 开篇点题 喜欢熊猫 like... best be from China 介绍熊猫 外貌特征 white and black fur,big eyes round ears 性格、习性 cute,friendly,lazy,lovely eat bamboo,climb trees 自己的感悟 呼吁保护 National treasure,the symbol of friendship,2,000，protect them 范文赏析 My favorite animals-giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world,but I like pandas best.They are from China. I like pandas because they are cute and friendly. hey have white and black fur.And they have big eyes and round ears.They look a little lazy but very cute.They like eating bamboo.They also like climbing trees.So they are lovely. Giant pandas are China's national treasure. They are the symbol of friendship.There are only about 2,000 pandas now.We must try our best to protect them. 1. 假定你是阳光中学“Love Nature”社团的负责人李华，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，呼吁全校师生加入到保护野生动物的活动中来。 要求： 1.参考下侧提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何你的真实信息（校名、姓名和地名等）； 4.词数：80—120词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Reasons in great danger keep the balance (平衡) of nature Ways no hunting (猎捕) stop buying things made out of animals plant more trees Dear teachers and students, As the leader of the “Love Nature” club, I want to call on everyone to join us in protecting wildlife. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear teachers and students, As the leader of the “Love Nature” club, I want to call on everyone to join us in protecting wildlife. As we all know, many animals and plants are in great danger. Wildlife plays an important role in nature, so we should protect them and keep the balance of nature. First, we should try our best to call on humans to stop hunting wild animals greatly. Second, we can stop buying goods made out of endangered animals. When the buying stops, the killing can stop, too. Third, we can also take part in some organized activities, such as planting more trees and saving injured animals. By working together, we can make a difference to nature and create a better future for ourselves. Let us join hands and take action to protect our precious nature. Thanks for your listening. 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍保护野生动物的理由； 第二步，具体阐述如何保护野生动物； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ① in great danger处于极大的危险中 ② play an important role起重要作用 ③ take part in参加 [高分句型] When the buying stops, the killing can stop, too.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2. 假设你是一名七年级学生李华，你的学校将举行保护动物环保周活动。请根据以下要点提示，完成一篇保护动物的演讲稿，号召大家一起行动起来，保护动物。 动物对人类的重要性如何做？ 1.动物能帮助人类。 2.动物让人们感觉不再孤单。 如何做？ 1.保护动物。 2.不猎杀动物。 3（自己补充至少一点） 号召大家保护动物 …… 要求： 1.必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear students, Hello, I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear students, Hello, I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is how to protect animals. Animals are important for us. They can help us in many ways. For example, dogs can help us watch our homes. In addition, animals help people, especially the old feel no longer lonely. So we must protect them. We should stop people from killing animals, selling or buying wild animal products. We should build more natural reserve for them, so they will have enough room to live in. What’s more, the government should enact laws to protect animals. If we try our best, we will live in harmony with them in the future. Let’s take action from now on. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍动物对人类的重要性； 第二步，介绍如何保护动物； 第三步，号召大家从现在做起。 [亮点词汇] ①be important for对……重要 ②in many ways在许多方面 ③in addition另外 [高分句型] ①If we try our best, we will live in harmony with them in the future.（if引导条件状语从句） ②Let’s take action from now on.（祈使句） 3 书面表达 “Animals are our friends.”请你以“My Favorite animal”为题目，根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 1.What is your favorite animal? 2.What is he/she like? 3.Why do you like him/her? （注：英语中，我们可以用she或he指代动物，将它拟人化） 要求： 1.短文必须包括提示所有要点，可以适当发挥； 2.短文中不要出现真实的人名及校名； 3.词数60—80词左右。 My Favorite Animal ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My Favorite Animal My favorite animal is Tuantuan that is a panda. She is from China. She is black and white. She has two black eyes. She likes eating bamboo. And she eats a lot of bamboo every day, so she is fat. She is kind of shy. Pandas are one of the symbols of China. I like Tuantuan best because she is cute and friendly. We should love animals because they are our friends. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。要求根据英文提示内容，以“My Favorite animal”为题目，写一篇英语短文，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文主要用第三人称来描写，可以用she或he将动物拟人化。时态采用一般现在时。在描写动物时，应该围绕给出的标题，把要求表达的要点表达齐全，条理清晰。 4. 动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛，请根据下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。 动物名称： 我最喜欢的动物是…… 动物外貌： 它的颜色，外形与主要特征…… 生活特性： 喜欢吃什么东西，喜欢在什么地方睡觉，是否喜欢晚上活动，是否喜欢发出噪音。 喜欢的原因： 至少两点…… 要求： 1. 字数60左右； 2. 要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节使文章连贯通顺。 My favourite animal ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite animal I have a lovely dog, and it’s my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It’s black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It’s two years old. It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog! I love my dog and it loves me too! 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“My favourite animal”为题，结合表格内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称行文；时态以一般现在时为主；本文可分为三段式：第一段主要介绍最喜欢的动物是什么，以及颜色、外形和主要特征。第二段介绍它的生活特性。第三段介绍对它的喜欢。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误。 5. 旅外大熊猫的“回家之旅”屡上热搜，又一次提高了人们对大熊猫保护工作的关注。假如你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为主题的英文手抄报评选活动。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制，而你负责文本的撰写。请根据如下提示，完成一篇英语短文。 注意： 1. 短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数 60 左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Giving Pandas a Good Life What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Giving Pandas a Good Life What animal has 6 fingers and wears a black and white coat? Yes, it’s the panda! Pandas are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo and sleeping. It is known that pandas are endangered. Many people cut down lots of trees so they may have terrible living conditions. What’s more, they may die of illnesses easily because many of them are out of protection. I hope the government can build more natural panda homes. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文 是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中熊猫的个性、生活习惯、危险以及保护措施等内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。以猜谜语的形式开头，并介绍熊猫的个性和生活习惯； 第二步，从熊猫的危险及措施等方面具体介绍； 第三步，从保护措施方面，书写结语，表达自己的感受，提出倡议。 [亮点词汇] ① be friendly to sb. 对某人友好 ② endangered 濒危的 ③ cut down 砍伐，减少 ④ die of 死于 [高分句型] ① Pandas are so popular because they are cute and shy. (because引导原因状语从句) ② I hope the government can build more natural panda homes. (宾语从句) 6. 某英文杂志向中学生征稿，请同学们以“My Favourite Animal”为题，根据以下提示，介绍一下自己最喜欢的动物。（语篇类型：应用文  人称：第三人称为主） 1. What animal do you like best? 2. Why do you like it? 3. … （时态：一般现在时） 要求： 1.词数60左右； 2.短文意思连贯、符合逻辑； 3.所给提示词仅供选用。 提示词：cute, clever, helpful, friendly _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My Favourite Animal Of all the animals, dogs are my favourite animal. I like dogs best because they can be not only friendly but also loyal. They are so clever. They can understand you when you talk to them. And some dogs can help blind people in many ways. In a word, dogs are my favourite animal, and they are our friends in my heart. 【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍自己最喜欢的动物； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：文章至少要包括最喜欢的动物的名字和喜欢的理由这两个方面。 【写作步骤】第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的动物的名字； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢的理由； 第三步，总结。 【亮点词汇】① favourite最喜欢的 ② animal动物 ③ friendly友好的 ④ loyal忠诚的 ⑤ clever聪明的 ⑥ understand理解 ⑦ talk交谈 【高分句型】① I like dogs best because they can be not only friendly but also loyal. (原因状语从句) ② They can understand you when you talk to them. (时时间状语从句) 7. 假如你是李华，最近养了一只宠物猫。请根据下面单词提示，用英文下一篇短文，介绍一下你的新宠物。 Mimi   six months   black and white   China   shy  cute   fish   ball 要求： 1、短文中不得出现真实的人名及相关信息； 2、短文须包括所有提示单词，可适当发挥，词数50左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： 　Hello, I am Li Hua. I have a pet cat. It has a beautiful name. Its name is Mimi. Mimi is 6 months old, so it is very young. Mimi is from China. It is very shy but cute. It is black and white. I like the color very much. Mimi is friendly to people and it loves playing balls. It likes fish very much. I like fish too. Mimi is my best friend. I love it very much. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己的新宠物的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与提示词汇相结合，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 8. 请你就以上材料，以“A Visit to the zoo”为题写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）请你谈谈动物园里看到的动物； （2）请你描述一下当时的心情； （3）呼吁人们保护动物。 要求： 1.字数60 词左右； 2.文章中不能出现真实的姓名、学校等信息。 A visit to the Zoo! A visit to the Zoo! Every year, my parents take me to Shenzhen Safari Park to watch the animals. I like to go there because I can see so many wonderful animals. I see monkeys jumping up and down the trees. I see pandas eating bamboo. I see giraffes eating grass. I see elephants playing tricks with their long nose. I see birds flying freely in the sky. When I see the animals, I feel excited. I think everyone should take good care of the animals. They are our friends. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容包括”中的关键信息，写短文介绍到深圳野生动物园游玩的经历及心情。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己每年都会去深圳野生动物园及在动物园能看到的动物们，并描述自己看到动物们时的心情； 第二步，呼吁人们保护动物。 [亮点词汇] ①like to do sth. 喜欢做某事 ②up and down 上上下下 ③see ... doing sth. 看到……正在做某事 ④take good care of 好好照顾 [高分句型] ①I like to go there because I can see so many wonderful animals.（because引导原因状语从句） ②When I see the animals, I feel excited.（when引导时间状语从句） 9. 假设你是李冬，你的英国笔友Bob给你发了一封英文邮件，请结合以下邮件内容，给Bob回一封邮件。词数：80词左右，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Li Dong, How are you? I know the panda is a symbol of China and I like the pandas very much. But I’m so sorry to hear that they are in danger. Can you tell me something more about pandas? For example, where do they live? What’s their favourite food? Why are they in danger and how to save them? I’m looking forward to your email. Best wishes. Yours, Bob ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Bob, I am so glad to hear from you. And I will tell you more about panda.      As we all know, the panda is one of the best-known animals in the world. There are about 1,000 pandas living in nature reserves today. Pandas live in the forests and mountains of Southwest China. They mainly live on bamboo, and each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day. However, they are in danger. The reason why the pandas are in danger is that the area of bamboo is becoming smaller, so pandas have less and less land to live on. We should set up more nature reserves to protect them and plant more bamboo for them to eat.      Let’s take some action to protect the panda. Yours, Li Dong 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的所有要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对Bob的来信表达开心； 第二步，详细介绍关于熊猫的一些具体信息； 第三步，呼吁大家一起保护熊猫。 [亮点词汇] ①live on以……为生 ②be in danger处于危险之中 ③set up建立 ④take some action采取行动 [高分句型] ①As we all know, the panda is one of the best-known animals in the world.（句型：one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数） ②The reason why the pandas are in danger is that the area of bamboo is becoming smaller, so pandas have less and less land to live on.（句式：The reason why+句子+is that……） 10. 动物是我们人类的朋友，请你以“My favourite animal”为题，写一篇短文，80词左右。 写作要点： 1. What does it look like? 2. What’s its lifestyle? 3. Why do you love it? 4. … 注意事项： 1. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥。 My favourite animal _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite animal I am Li Hua. I study at Hong Xing Middle School. I want to introduce my favourite animal to you. My favourite animals are dogs. I have a lovely dog. Its name is Wangwang. It is a yellow one. It is tall and strong. It likes sleeping and eating bones. Last Sunday, I went to the park with it. We had a good time near the lake. When I decided to go home, I couldn’t find my key. I was very worried. At last, my dog helped me find the key. What a helpful dog! 【总体分析】题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My favourite animal”这一话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点阐述清楚它的可爱之处； 第三步，书写结语。表达对它的喜爱。 【亮点词汇】had a good time玩得很开心 introduce ... to sb.向某人介绍 decided to do sth.决定做某事 【高分句型】When I decided to go home, I couldn’t find my key. （When引导时间状语从句） What a helpful dog!（感叹句） 11. 假如你是上海动物园的志愿讲解员，请你根据以下信息提示，写一篇英文讲解词来介绍明星动物多多。 名字：多多 年龄：21岁 物种：亚洲象 (Asian elephant) 家乡：缅甸 (Myanmar) 喜欢的活动：洗淋浴 用象鼻 (trunk) 和大家打招呼 喜欢的食物：青草 (grass) 各种水果和蔬菜 观赏注意事项：请勿投喂 (feed) 要求：1.讲解词须包含所有信息提示，可适当发挥； 2.语言表达要准确，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3.词数不少于60，讲解词的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Welcome to Shanghai Zoo. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to Shanghai Zoo. I’d like to introduce an elephant to you. Its name is Duoduo. It is 21 years old. It is an Asian elephant. Its hometown is Myanmar. It likes taking a shower and saying hello to everyone by its trunk. It likes eating grass. It also likes eating all kinds of vegetables and fruit. Please don’t feed anything to the elephant. Thanks for your cooperation! 【写作分析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍多多的相关信息； 第三步，介绍观赏注意事项。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to 想要 ②take a shower 洗淋浴 ③all kinds of 各种各样的 [高分句型] ①It likes taking a shower and saying hello to everyone by its trunk.（并列结构） ②Please don’t feed anything to the elephant.（祈使句） 12. 假定你是Tony，是Star Middle School的一名七年级学生。上星期天你从报纸上看到野生动物保护俱乐部 (Friend of Wildlife) 的招聘广告。请你写封简短的申请信，介绍自己的情况并说明申请理由及期盼的心情。 姓名 Tony 年龄 15 性格 外向；乐于助人 爱好 阅读；旅游；拍各种动物照片 相关经历 经常照顾无家可归的动物；曾就保护野生动物给报纸写信 空闲时间 每周日上午 申请理由 ……(自拟2条加入俱乐部的理由) 提示词： 保护野生动物：protect wild animals 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括所有的信息，并作适当地发挥； 2.90词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I read your advertisement in the newspaper last Sunday, I’d like to become a member of Friend of Wildlife. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Sir/Madam,   I read your advertisement in the newspaper last Sunday, I’d like to become a member of Friend of Wildlife. I’m a 15-year-old student in Grade 8. I am outgoing and helpful. I have a good sense of humor. I have many hobbies, like reading and travelling. Besides, I like taking photos of all kinds of animals. I once wrote to the newspaper, talking about what we can do for wildlife. I want to learn more about wildlife and do something by telling people the importance of protecting the wildlife. I can take part in club activities every Sunday morning. I will be very happy if I can join your club. I hope to get your reply as soon as possible. Yours, Tony 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封申请信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图是想成为野生动物保护俱乐部的成员； 第二步，介绍自己的基本信息，讲述自己的相关经历、空闲时间以及申请理由； 第三步，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①a sense of humor幽默感 ②talk about谈论 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①I once wrote to the newspaper, talking about what we can do for wildlife. (what引导的宾语从句) 20 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 19 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$