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Unit 4
Reading for Writing
What is your first impression of Ireland?
blue sky
beautiful coastline
rolling green hills
occasional cottages
sheep/cattle
fascinating landscape
The Cliffs of Moher County Clare
克莱尔摩尔县的悬崖
coast line
listen to the roar of the ocean waves
the Emerald Isle
Everywhere you go in the Ireland, you will find yourself surrounded by green.
What is the text mainly about according to the title and the given picture?
Ireland’s beautiful scenery and traditions.
Prediction.
Introductory sentence
Ending sentence
Body(details)
Read for structure
Transitional Sentences
Read for details
What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring?
Its beauty and the way it offers something for each of the senses.
“The author uses ‘___________’ to describe the sense of sight/hearing/touch/smell/taste”
Prediction
From the title, we can know that the passage mainly talks about the beautiful scenery and traditions of Ireland.
The sentences talks different senses
The peaceful landscape of … is a true feast for the eyes, with sth. dotted with ….
…宁静的景色是一场视觉盛宴,…点缀着…
1. 公园宁静的景色真是一场真正的视觉盛宴,花园里点缀着五颜六色的花朵。
The peaceful landscape of the park is a true feast for the eyes, with its garden dotted with colorful flowers.
2. 花园迷人的景观是一场真正的视觉盛宴,湖中点缀着睡莲。
The fascinating landscape of the garden is a true feast for the eyes, with its lake dotted with water lily.
3. 景点引人注目的景色是一场真正的视觉盛宴,湖中点缀着小船。
The striking scenery of the attraction is a true feast for the eyes, with its lake dotted with little boats.
BEAUTIFUL IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONS
美丽的爱尔兰及其传统
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses.
Have a great influence on…对…有极大的影响
Poet 诗人 poem 诗歌 poetry 诗集
给人以激情和灵感
BEAUTIFUL IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONS
美丽的爱尔兰及其传统
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIe” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
County 郡,县
一场真正的视觉盛宴
Rolling 起伏的
Be dotted with被…点缀着
牛
咆哮
海浪
鸣叫
组成
BEAUTIFUL IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONS
美丽的爱尔兰及其传统
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining.
吸入
气味
问候
菜肴
It’s not surprising that… …不足为奇
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On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin,
and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
Reading for Details – sentence 6
在山里宁静的早晨,感受阳光洒落在你身上,呼吸着鲜花的芬芳,而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天的到来。
feel the sun on your skin 感受阳光照在脸上的感觉
breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers 闻鲜花香甜的气息
greet...with...以...来欢迎/迎接
personification
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一场真正的视觉盛宴
起伏的绿色山丘
被……点缀着
海岸交响乐
海浪的咆哮声
海鸟的叫声
感受阳光照在脸上的感觉
闻鲜花香甜的气息
用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天
品尝传统美食爱尔兰炖牛肉
欣赏传统的音乐舞蹈
a true feast for the eyes
rolling green hills
be dotted with
music of the coast
the roar of the ocean waves
the cries of the seabirds
feel the sun on your skin
breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers
greet the new day with their morning song
enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew
enjoy traditional music and dancing
Present to readers your topic in the ____________ and a summary/suggestion in the ________.
Use _______________ to make the description more lively
Use ______________________ to make your writing cohesive
sensory details
Summary: How to describe a place
transitional sentences
introduction
ending
sight 宁静的风景是一场真正的视觉盛宴,伴随着A被B点缀着。
The peaceful landscape is a true feast for the eyes, with A dotted with B.
hearing 海浪的咆哮声和海鸟的鸣叫声构成海岸的音乐。
The roar of the ocean waves and the cries of seabirds make up the music of the coast.
孩子们的笑声 the laughter of children
小鸟的啾啾声 the twitter of the birds
风的咆哮声 the roar of the wind
孩子的叫喊声 the cries of baby
smell 呼吸鲜花的香味 breath the scent of fresh flowers
雨后呼吸新鲜空气 breath the fresh air after raining
沉浸在新割的草的香味中 be lost in the smell of fresh-cut grass
taste 在乡村酒吧停下来,喝杯葡萄酒或当地啤酒放松一下。
Stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or local beer.
更好的是,享受美味的传统菜肴。
Better yet, enjoy a delicious tradition dish.
touch 感受阳光照在皮肤上的感觉 feel the sun on your skin
沐浴在温暖的阳光下 be bathed in the warm sunshine
温柔的风吻着我的脸。 Gentle wind kissed my face.
Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses.
美丽的乡村给人以激情和灵感,满足各种感官享受。
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