高中英语续写作文万能公式 课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

续写作文万能公式 句式一：情绪描写公式 句式1. (A wave/sense of + )情感的名词+有灵动词(seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over)+ sb.（无灵主语句） 句式2. One's heart pounded/ thumped/raced with +情感名词 (excitement/nervousness/fear/terror/horror)等. (某人激动/紧张/害怕得心怦怦跳。) 例句： （1）When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. （2）A wave of excitement and delight swept over me. 例句：Her heart was racing with anticipation as she waited for the results.她心怀期待,心脏怦怦直跳,等待着结果。 操练1 1.恼怒的神色从她脸上掠过。 2.一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身,迈克一个字也说不出来。 3.她先前的泰然自若已变为惊恐。 4.在登上舞台之前,他紧张得心脏怦怦直跳。 A look of annoyance crossed her face. A strong wave of fear was sweeping over him, and Mike couldn't utter a single word. Her previous calm gave way to/was swept away by terror. His heart was pounding with nervousness before he stepped onto the stage. 句式二：动作描写公式 1.三连动作链:Sb. + V, V and V. 2.主语+V ,非谓语动词 , 或者是非谓语动词 ，主语+V. 3.主 语+V, with+名词+非谓语动词/形/副/介词短语. The coach stepped forward, patted him on the shoulder, and reminded him softly. (1)Looking around cautiously，my seven-year-old son slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window. (2)Seeing his figure, she rushed to him with excitement and fell into his arms. Mrs. Cook stood there and didn’t dare to move an inch, shivering /trembling /shaking with fear. The boy dressed in dirty clothes looked up at me with tears welling up in his eyes . 操练2 1.她醒了,溜下床,踮着脚走到门口。 2.约翰把手指放在嘴唇上，指着猫咪，轻轻摇了摇头。 3.它用头碰了碰我们的手，好像在说，它要感谢我们。 4.他靠在厨房的操作台上，双臂交叉在胸前，怒视着我。 She woke up, slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the door. John pressed his finger against his lips, pointed to the cat, and shook his head gently. Using its head, it touched our hands, seemingly saying that we were to be thanked. He leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms folded across his chest, glaring at me. 句式三：语言描写公式 1.“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone. 某人以…的声音、 语气说到 2.“……,”sb said in/with+心情类名词. 某人以…的心情说道…… 3.“……,”sb said +adv..+doing.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作) 例句：“All that we have suffered will eventually make us better. Don't give up until the blessing happens,” he said in a firm voice. 例句：“I hate you!”she screamed in anger. 例句：“I don't believe you anymore.”He yelled angrily, slamming the door. 句式四：主题升华公式 1. 留白式结尾: floated in the air/filled +地点/…was bathed in“飘在空中/充满/沉浸在” 2. 强调句:It is+名词+that+谓语(count/matter/bring...)“正是…” 3. From then on, “从那时起, ……” 例句： (1)The golden sun light streaming in, laughter lingered around the yard and happiness floated in the air. (2)Bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way home happily.  例句：It is love and care that make the world go around. 例句：From then on, I was determined to try my best to help the family. Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future. 句式四：主题升华公式 4. Only then did sb. realize that…“直到那时某人才意识到…” 5. Many years have passed, but I will never forget ...“许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记…” 6.格言警句结尾 例句：Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful. 例句：Many years have passed, but I will never forget the special gift.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记那份特别的礼物。 例句：Whatever happens in our lives, we can’t give up or lose our faith and hope. Hard work pays off .Love can break down the barriers. 操练3 1.随着凉爽的微风，整个家庭沐浴在幸福和爱中 2.从那时起，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。 3.从那时起，友谊在我们两人的心中绽放。 4.直到那时我才意识到，我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。 5.许多年过去了，但这段经历仍深深地铭刻在一个人的脑海里。 With the cool breeze, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love. From then on, I always give others a helping hand if possible. From then on friendship bloomed in both of our hearts. Only then did I realized that we should never take love for granted. Many years have passed, but the experience is still deeply engraved in one's mind. 句式五：环境描写 句式1：排比：意象1+动词1，意象2+动词2，and 意象3+动词3. 句式2：形容词+意象+动词+介词短语·位置+副词（扩写） 例句：The sun shone, the wind blew, and the tree waved. 例句： （1）The glaring morning sunlight shone on the ground brightly. 耀眼的晨光明亮地照在大地上 （2）The biting night wind howled ruthlessly through the forest 刺骨的夜风在森林间无情地呼啸 句式五：环境描写 句子操练： 1. 阳光温暖地洒在树叶上，清新的空气环绕着大卫和他的同学，森林中洋溢着兴奋的笑声。 2. 暖阳洒在大卫的脸上，树木随风摇曳，整座森林都为大卫的勇气喝彩 3. 树叶在微风中颤动，愉悦的空气笼罩着整个森林，周围的一切都在庆祝着大卫的勇敢。 借景抒情：前两个意象写景，第三个意象写事情，抒发感情 The sunlight shone warmly on the tree leaves, the crisp air surrounded David and his classmates, and the forest was filled with laughter of excitement. The warm sun shone on David’s face , the trees swayed with the wind, and the whole forest applauded David’s courage. The leaves were trembling in the breeze, the pleasant air was enveloping the entire forest, and everything around was celebrating David’s bravery. 环境词汇梳理 形容词 意象 动词 副词 炽热的 耀眼的 微弱的 逗留不走的 sun sunlight sunshine 发光，照耀 燃烧 明亮地 耀眼地 充满活力地 温和地 微弱的 白色的 银色的 moon moonlight 发光 发微光 微弱地 轻轻地 柔和地 闪闪发亮的 stars 闪烁，闪耀    隐约地闪烁 生动地 安静地 平静地 劲(风） 大/小（风） 冷（风） 刺骨的，凛冽的 wind breeze 微风 吹 呼啸 减弱 猛烈地 无情地 逐渐地 笔直的 tree leaves branches 树枝 摆动，起伏 摇动 摇摆 颤动 猛烈地 无法控制地 blazing glaring lingering  weak shine (shone) burn(burnt) brightly dazzlingly lively mildly  gentle/soft/mildweak white silvery shine（shone） glow（glowed） weakly  lightly  gently/softly  glittering  twinkle/sparkle glimmer vividly  quietly  peacefully  strong high/light  chill/cold  biting  blow（blew） howl/roar drop(dropped)  fiercely  ruthlessly  gradually  green/yellowtall/largestraight  wave shake(shook) sway(swayed) tremble fiercely  uncontrollably 12 环境词汇梳理 形容词 意象 动词 副词 凉爽的，清新的 新鲜的 使人凉爽的 冷的 air 流动 笼罩  环绕 完全地，彻底地 小（雨） 大（雨） rain drizzle毛毛雨 落下 倾泻而下 大地 浓（云） 薄（云） 乌（云） cloud 扩散 移动 聚集 遮盖 笼罩 rapidly 快速地 浓（雾） fog 雾 mist 薄雾 扩散 笼罩 笼罩 吞没 rapidly completely totally crisp  fresh  refreshing  chill/cold  surround  flow(flowed)  envelop totally /completely  light  heavy  fall（fell）  pour down heavily  thick /heavy thin  black  thick/dense  spread（spread） enveloped the sky  hung in the air  swallowed the land  spread（spread） move gathered in the sky  covered the sky  enveloped the forest  13 谢谢观看 $$