主题2 读后续写（救人脱险）-2025年高考英语读后续写主题讲与练

读后续写（救人脱险） 一、救人脱险主题词汇积累 描述危险场景相关词汇 自然灾害类：flood（洪水）、earthquake（地震）、tsunami（海啸）、landslide（山体滑坡）、typhoon（台风）、hurricane（飓风）、blizzard 暴风雪；storm 暴风雨、 事故灾难类：car accident（车祸）、fire（火灾）、explosion（爆炸）、shipwreck（海难）、mine disaster（矿难） 险峻环境：precipitous 险峻的；steep陡峭的；rugged崎岖不平的；marshy沼泽的；turbulent/rapid 湍急的；foggy 雾蒙蒙的；muddy 泥泞的；whirlpool：n. 漩涡 事故：crash 碰撞，相撞；skid 打滑；侧滑；wreck n. 残骸；v. 破坏；使失事；lost one's way：迷路； fall into：掉进；be trapped by：被……困住 危险状况描述：destructive（毁灭性的）、chaotic（混乱的）、dangerous（危险的）、life - threatening（危及生命的）、hazardous（有危害的） 描述救援行动相关词汇 救援人员：rescuer（救援者）、firefighter（消防员）、nursing staff（护理人员）、lifeguard（救生员）、search - and - rescue team（搜救队） 救援设备：lifeboat（救生艇）、life-jacket（救生衣）、first - aid kit（急救箱）、helicopter（直升机）、ladder（梯子）、rope（绳子）、raft 木筏 救援动作：rescue（营救）、save（拯救）、clear off（疏散）、pull out（拉出）、carry（搬运）、first - aid（实施急救） 描述伤者状态相关词汇 受伤情况：wounded（受伤的）、injured（受伤的）、bleeding（流血的）、fractured（骨折的）、burned（烧伤的） 身体状况描述：unconscious（无意识的）、conscious（有意识的）、weak（虚弱的）、in pain（痛苦的）、shocked（震惊的）、pale（面色苍白的） 情感相关词汇 救援者：brave（勇敢的）、determined（有决心的）、selfless（无私的）、anxious（焦虑的）、relieved（宽慰的） 被救者及旁观者：grateful（感激的）、hopeful（有希望的）、terrified（惊恐的）、overwhelmed（不知所措的），at a loss, have no idea but to do; relieved 紧张恐慌：terrified 非常害怕的；panic - stricken 惊慌失措的；horrified 惊骇的； anxious 焦虑的；nervous 紧张的；tense 紧张的；tremble 颤抖的； 2、 万能句型 开头引入场景 1. In a heart - stopping moment, a disaster/accident happened without warning. （在令人心跳停止的瞬间，一场灾难 / 事故毫无征兆地降临。） 2. It was a day like any other until the ear - splitting sound of explosion pierced the air, signaling the onset of a life - threatening situation.（这本来是平常的一天，直到震耳欲聋的爆炸声划破空气，预示着一场危及生命的情况开始了。） 3. As far as the eye could see, the scene was one of utter chaos and destruction, and the district was in a fearful mess, with trees fallen everywhere.（在目之所及之处，一片狼藉，倒下的树木到处都是。） 救援的困难、决心和行动 1.The situation was full of difficulties. The thick smoke made it nearly impossible to reach the victims, but the rescuers' determination was unwavering.（情况充满了困难。浓烟使得接近受害者几乎不可能，但救援者的决心毫不动摇。） 2.Despite the difficulties, the rescuers persevered, their will to save lives stronger than any obstacle.（尽管困难重重，救援者们坚持不懈，他们拯救生命的意志比任何障碍都要强大。） 3.Without a moment's hesitation, the rescuers rushed towards the danger zone, determined to save every possible life.（救援者毫不犹豫地冲向危险区域，决心拯救每一个可能的生命。） 描述救援过程 1. The rescuers sprang into action like a well - oiled machine, making their way through the flames towards the victims.（救援者们像一台运转良好的机器一样迅速行动起来, 他们穿过火焰向受害者走去。） 2. Without a second thought, the rescuer dove into the danger zone. His only focus was on reaching those in need and bringing them to safety.（这个救生员不假思索地扎进危险区域。他唯一的关注点就是到达那些需要帮助的人身边，把他们带到安全的地方。） 3. Using all of their strength and skills, the rescue team carefully lifted the trapped victims from their dangerous positions. Each movement was calculated, as one wrong step could mean disaster.（救援团队用尽他们所有的力量和技能，小心地将被困的受害者从危险的位置抬起。每一个动作都是经过深思熟虑的，因为走错一步就可能意味着灾难。） 4.With the rope, they managed to pull the victims from the jaws of death.（他们使用绳子，将受害者从死亡边缘拉了回来。） 描写被救者状态和反应 1. Anxiety gnawed(啃噬) at their insides as they realized the gravity of their situation. Their minds raced with worry, and their hands trembled with nervousness as they tried to figure out a way to survive.（当他们意识到自身处境的严重性时，焦虑啃噬着他们的内心。他们忧心忡忡，在试图想出求生办法时，双手因紧张而颤抖。） 2. The victim was lying on the ground, with his face contorted with pain.（受害者躺在地上，他的脸因痛苦而扭曲。） 3. Bleeding so much, the injured person was in a critical condition.（大量出血，伤者情况危急。） 4. Summoning all their strength and courage, they set about trying to free themselves. They clawed at the rubble, dug through the debris, and fought with all energy they had to escape the clutches of danger.（他们鼓起所有的力量和勇气，开始设法自救。他们在瓦砾中挖掘，在废墟中掏洞，用尽每一分力气来挣脱危险的束缚。） 5. The rescued victims were in a state of shock and relief. Their eyes, wide with fear just moments ago, now filled with tears of gratitude as they realized they were safe.（被救的受害者处于震惊和宽慰的状态。他们的眼睛刚刚还因恐惧而瞪大，现在当他们意识到自己安全了，眼中充满了感激的泪水。） 6. Weak and trembling, the survivors clung to their rescuers, as if they were a lifeline in a stormy sea. Their voices, hoarse from screaming, managed to whisper words of thanks.（虚弱且颤抖的幸存者紧紧抓住他们的救援者，仿佛他们是狂风暴雨的大海中的生命线。他们因尖叫而沙哑的声音，勉强能说出感谢的话语。） 7. The rescued people were overcome with gratitude towards their saviors, their eyes brimming with tears of joy.（被救的人们对他们的救命恩人充满感激，眼中满是喜悦的泪水。） 结尾升华主题 1. This heroic rescue was a testament to the indomitable(不屈不挠的) spirit of humanity. In the face of danger and despair, the rescuers and the rescued alike showed that the will to survive and the power of helping others can shine through even the darkest of times.（这次英勇的救援是人类不屈精神的证明。面对危险和绝望，救援者和被救者都表明，生存的意志和帮助他人的力量即使在最黑暗的时刻也能闪耀光芒。） 2. The act of saving lives that day was like a beacon（灯塔）of hope in a world often filled with chaos and tragedy. It reminded us all that there are always heroes among us, ready to risk everything to bring light to those in the darkest of situations.（那天拯救生命的行为就像是在一个常常充满混乱和悲剧的世界里的希望灯塔。它提醒我们所有人，我们身边总是有英雄，他们随时准备冒一切风险为那些处于最黑暗处境的人带来光明。） 3.Relief washed over them like a tidal wave as they emerged from the jaws of danger. They were filled with gratitude towards the universe, towards each other, and towards any unseen force that might have helped them survive.（当他们从危险的边缘脱险时，如潮水般的宽慰涌上心头。他们对宇宙、对彼此以及任何可能帮助他们幸存的无形力量充满了感激之情。） 练习： Mark Gayowski, a 34-year-old carpenter, was determined to ski in the western Canadian province of British Columbia. He told his plan to his parents, Cindy Reich and Raymond, and headed to nearby Red Mountain, one of North America’s oldest ski resorts. Reich asked him to call or text her when he finished the run. “I will,” he replied. Then he glided towards the ravine(溪谷). Soon there was no way for him to ski around the logs and downed branches that boxed him in. He could feel the weather starting to change. Reich wondered why her son hadn’t texted or called. She began to worry. She called him but couldn’t get through. Reich began to panic and called for help. Mike Hudson, a 41-year-old search-and-rescue manager in the neighbouring village of Fruitvale, was just going home when his phone rang. It was a call from the Emergency Coordination Centre, asking if he could lead a mission to find a missing skier. After 12 hours in the ravine, Gayowski’s phone battery died, and he’d abandoned his skis after struggling. He dressed lightly that day. He knew he had to keep moving or risk death. Through the night he climbed By late afternoon, his legs were beginning to give out, his feet blistering after more than 30 hours of hard walking in ski boots. Hudson dispatched two teams of four rescuers into the ravine. But as the hours slipped by , it became clear that none of his rescuers located Gavowski. Hudson knew that there was only a 30 per cent chance that Gayowski would survive the night. They prepared for another push. Gayowski’s parents sat home, feeling desperate. Sunlight came through the trees in the ravine. Gayowski was grateful to be alive. He struggled to move forward through knee-deep snow. He had to wrap his hands to lift his legs. At some point. he stopped and screamed out in anger. Then he heard some shouts coming back in his direction. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 It took moments for Gayowski to realize that they were just echoes(回声). _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Reich picked up the phone with anxiety. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 It took moments for Gayowski to realize that they were just echoes(回声).When he learned the truth, he felt very disappointed. The prolonged coldness and hunger made his progress even more difficult. But every time he recalled his parents’ expectations and waiting, he once again strengthened his determination to go on. At that moment, Hudson's two rescue teams were also approaching to the depths of the ravine from different directions. They shouted out the name of Gayowski as they walked, hoping that he would respond upon hearing it, even though they thought that his chance of survival was very slim. Just as they were about to give up, they discovered the exhausted Gayowski sitting under the tree! Reich picked up the phone with anxiety. Gayowski’s weak voice came from the other end of the phone, “Dear mom, I’m still alive”. Excited tears slid down from Reich’s face. Then she learned from Hudson that her son had entered the hospital for treatment. When Reich and her husband Raymond arrived at the hospital, they expressed gratitude to Hudson's rescue team. 练习2 A Reason to Run Justin and his friend David had known each other before they became classmates. David didn’t seem to mind that Justin was small for his age. But on the first day of school, when David and Justin had lunch with the rest of the fifth- grade boys, Steven asked when David had started playing with babies. David laughed out loud and Justin felt uneasy. Several weeks later, David called to invite Justin to his birthday party at his grandfather’s farm. Justin didn’t want to go. He had wanted to spend the day running. When he ran, the problems at school didn’t matter, and being the smallest kid in his class didn’t matter, either. So every day after school he practiced. And Saturday morning was the best time to run. This Saturday, however, he reached the farm with Steven and the rest of David’s friends. David’s mother suggested that David show the boys around, so David asked his grandfather, Mr. Hamilton, to drive them to the foot of a hill. Mr. Hamilton left to prepare for the party. The boys decided to enter a cave, go out from a hole at its top, climb the hill and then hike back. The entrance to the cave was a big stone room with huge wooden beams (梁) bordering the doorway. About thirty feet in was a wall of rocks blocking further entrance. From the hole in the ceiling, light sh one on the back wall. David started to show the boys how to climb up the ha ck wall. “Let me go first,” Steven demanded. He grabbed David’s belt and pulled him off the rock, throwing him into Rafael. “Watch it!” shouted David. But it was too late. He and Rafael fell hard against a beam and the wood started to crack. A second later the beam fell. Then part of the ceiling collapsed. Dust filled the air. When the dust finally settled, the six boys found themselves trapped in the cave and the only exit was the hole in the ceiling, which became smaller — too small for anyone to go out. Worse still, a stream of water was flowing into the cave. Paragraph 1： Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文1: Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” His companions' eyes lit up with hope upon hearing this. Despite his fear, Justin took a deep breath and prepared to face the challenge. The boys quickly got to work. The taller ones crouched down, allowing others to step on their shoulders to form an unsteady human ladder. Justin stepped on it carefully, trying his best to keep his balance. The ladder swayed slightly with his movements, making his heart pound in his chest. The air in the cave was stuffy and filled with dust, making it difficult for him to breathe with every upward step. The rough rocks scratched his hands and feet, causing him great pain, but he never gave up. His friends below kept encouraging him, cheering him on and giving him the strength to persevere. Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. A surge of joy and hope welled up in his heart. Ignoring the pain in his body, he sprinted towards the farmhouse with all his might. Along the way, he shouted for help at the top of his lungs, and his voice echoed across the open farm. Mr. Hamilton, who was preparing for the party, heard the cries for help and rushed out of the house immediately. Justin, gasping for breath, described the situation of his trapped friends to him. Mr. Hamilton wasted no time in gathering the nearby villagers and taking rescue tools to rush to the cave. With the joint efforts of everyone, they found the trapped boys. The boys were successfully rescued. Although they were all frightened, fortunately, there were no life - threatening injuries. This experience deepened the friendship between Justin and his friends and made Justin understand the power of courage and unity. 参考范文2： Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” At his words, a glimmer of hope sparkled in the eyes of his companions. Despite the trepidation gnawing at his insides, Justin steeled himself, inhaling deeply to steady his nerves. Swiftly, the boys sprang into action. The taller among them knelt down, offering their shoulders as a platform for others, constructing a precarious human ladder. Justin gingerly ascended, every muscle tensed in an attempt to maintain equilibrium. With each shift of his weight, the ladder trembled, sending his heart racing. The cave's air, thick with dust and stifling heat, constricted his throat, making each breath a struggle. The jagged rocks, like claws, scraped at his hands and feet, eliciting sharp pangs of pain. Yet, buoyed by the unwavering encouragement of his friends below, their voices a chorus of support, he pressed on, determined not to Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. A wave of elation and hope surged through him, overpowering the pain coursing through his body. With a burst of speed, he hurtled towards the farmhouse, his lungs straining as he bellowed for help, the sound echoing far and wide across the expanse of the farm. Mr. Hamilton, engaged in party preparations, immediately abandoned his tasks upon hearing the desperate cries. Justin, breathless and wild - eyed, relayed the dire situation of his trapped friends. Without hesitation, Mr. Hamilton rallied the neighboring villagers, hastily assembling essential rescue gear, and they all rushed towards the cave. Through their collective efforts, the trapped boys were located and, to everyone's relief, safely extricated. Shaken but unharmed, the experience forged an even stronger bond among the boys. Justin, in particular, emerged with a profound understanding of the indomitable power of courage and unity. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$