2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：轮椅上的归家路：独自奔赴圣诞之约 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 轮椅上的归家路：独自奔赴圣诞之约 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Stranded (困住) far from family, I refused to give up The date had been circled on my calendar for months — Friday 18 December 2013. Mum was coming to pick me up from university and bring me home for the Christmas holidays. There was nothing that made me happier than Christmas with my family. Our small celebrations were the same every year. I could picture it. Mum, my younger brother and me all dressed up and opened presents on Christmas morning by the tree, the same festive CD sound tracking our day. The call came at 10am that Friday. I was dressed and packed, Christmas presents divided into carrier bags. I’d made sure the fridge in my shared student kitchen was empty, everything eaten or chucked away, and my live-in carer was leaving at lunchtime. 4 4 续写原文 “We are not going to make it,” my mum said on the phone. “Ken was blanketed overnight, with up to 20cm falling in three hours. We’ve crawled as far as Detling, but they’ve closed the motorway because it was dusted in a thick layer of snow. There’s no way we can get to you.” I was stranded. Alone in my student bedroom, I burst into tears. “What am I going to do?” My life was different from that of other students. Without my carer, I had no one to help me cook, wash and get into bed. My friends had already left and the halls of residence were eerily (怪异地) quiet. Suddenly, a crazy idea came across my mind, “How about going home independently using the wheelchair?” Anyway, I decided to have a try. After calling multiple firms in the hope that their one wheelchair-adapted vehicle was available, I was lucky to get an accessible one to the train station. One hour later, I arrived, but found myself stranded on the bustling platform, feeling helplessly at the steps leading up the train. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： Just then a few young men noticed my struggle in the wheelchair and came to help me. Paragraph 2： When I finally arrived home, making it indoors, mum was shocked to see me. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 2013 年 12 月 18 日，作者满心欢喜地等待母亲来大学接自己回家过圣诞节，可母亲因大雪被困，无法前来，作者顿时陷入困境。没有护工帮忙，朋友也都已离开，作者决定独自坐轮椅回家。好不容易联系到一辆适配轮椅的车到达火车站，却在站台上车时犯了难。就在这时，转机出现了。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： Just then a few young men noticed my struggle in the wheelchair and came to help me. 就在这时，几个年轻人注意到了坐在轮椅上挣扎的我。他们看起来朝气蓬勃，像是刚放假的大学生。其中一个高个子快步走到我身边，温和地询问我是否需要帮助。得知我要上火车回家过节后，他们立刻行动起来。两个人小心翼翼地抬起轮椅的后轮，另外两人稳稳地扶住前轮，一步一步缓慢而坚定地往台阶上走。每走一步，他们都会留意我的状况，确保我安全舒适。在他们齐心协力的帮助下，我顺利登上了火车。他们还贴心地帮我找到一个靠窗的座位，放好行李，让我安心等待发车。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：When I finally arrived home, making it indoors, mum was shocked to see me. 当我终于到家，走进屋里时，妈妈看到我，惊讶得合不拢嘴。她原本以为我会被困在学校，没想到我竟然独自坐着轮椅回来了。我笑着向她讲述一路上的经历，从艰难地联系车辆，到在火车站遇到困难，再到这些好心人的帮助。妈妈听得眼眶泛红，既为我的艰辛感到心疼，又为我的勇敢感到骄傲。这个圣诞节，因为这段特别的经历，变得更加难忘。我们一家人围坐在一起，享受着温馨的节日时光 ，而我也深深体会到了坚持和陌生人善意的力量。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Just then a few young men noticed my struggle in the wheelchair and came to help me. They seemed energetic and were likely students on their way home for the holidays too. A tall guy stepped forward first and asked me gently if I needed assistance. After learning that I was trying to board the train to go home for Christmas, they got into action right away. Two of them carefully lifted the back wheels of my wheelchair, while the other two firmly held the front wheels. They moved slowly and steadily up the steps, paying close attention to my situation with each step to ensure my safety and comfort. With their joint efforts, I successfully got on the train. They even helped me find a window seat, put away my luggage, and told me to relax before the train departed. 13 13 范文呈现 When I finally arrived home, making it indoors, mum was shocked to see me. Her eyes opened wide in astonishment as she couldn't believe that I had returned home alone in my wheelchair. I smiled and started to tell her about my journey, from the difficult process of contacting the vehicle, to the trouble I met at the train station, and then the help from those kind - hearted strangers. Mum listened with tears in her eyes. She was both upset for my hardships and proud of my courage. This Christmas, because of this special experience, became even more memorable. Our family sat around, enjoying the warm holiday time, and I deeply felt the power of perseverance and the kindness of strangers. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Just then a few young men noticed my struggle in the wheelchair and came to help me. Looking energetic, they were probably students like me, on their way back home for the holidays. A tall young man approached me first and inquired gently whether I needed any help. Having learned that I was attempting to board the train to return home for Christmas, they sprang into action immediately. Two of them carefully hoisted the back wheels of my wheelchair, while the other two held the front wheels firmly. They ascended the steps slowly and steadily, keeping a close eye on my condition with each step to guarantee my safety and comfort. Thanks to their combined efforts, I managed to get on the train smoothly. They even helped me find a window seat, stowed away my luggage, and told me to take it easy before the train pulled out. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 When I finally arrived home, making it indoors, mum was shocked to see me. Her eyes widened in disbelief, for she never expected that I would come back home alone in my wheelchair. With a smile on my face, I began to recount my journey to her, from the arduous process of arranging transportation, to the difficulties I encountered at the train station, and finally the assistance from those kind - hearted strangers. Mum listened attentively, her eyes brimming with tears. She felt both upset for the hardships I had endured and proud of my courage. This Christmas, due to this special experience, became even more unforgettable. Our family sat around, relishing the warm holiday atmosphere, and I truly realized the power of perseverance and the kindness of strangers. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$