2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：考试困境：珍妮的艰难抉择与成长 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 考试困境：珍妮的艰难抉择与成长 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was a typical Monday morning for Jenny, a diligent high school senior. The sound of her alarm clock woke her up, a rude awakening from her sweet dreams. She unwillingly opened her eyes, knowing what waited for her-another 5 long days at school. Dragging herself out of bed, Jenny went through her usual morning routine. She hurriedly got dressed, grabbed her backpack, and rushed to the kitchen for breakfast. Her mother had prepared a nutritious meal, but Jenny had no appetite. She was too occupied with thoughts of an upcoming exam in her most challenging subject, mathematics. As Jenny walked to school, her mind wandered back to the countless hours she had spent studying and practicing equations (方程式). She had put in lots of effort, hoping to improve her grades. However, despite her dedication, she was struggling to achieve the desired results. Doubts started crawling in, and anxiety stayed in her mind like dark clouds. 4 4 续写原文 As students settled into their seats, Mr. Johnson, their math teacher, announced that the exam would take place that afternoon. Jenny started to feel afraid. She suddenly realized that she had forgotten her calculator at home, an essential tool for the exam. Panic turned into hopelessness, as she knew that borrowing one during the test would be strictly prohibited. Jenny’s friends, Emma and David, noticed her worry and approached her after class. They offered their help. Emma suggested that Jenny be honest to Mr. Johnson and explain her situation. David, however, had a different plan. He proposed sneaking (偷偷给) his calculator to her during the exam, risking punishment for cheating. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： Jenny’s heart sank. Paragraph 2： The exam started. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 周一早晨，高三学生珍妮被闹钟叫醒，满心不情愿地开启新一周的学校生活。她因即将到来的数学考试而焦虑，尽管努力学习但成绩仍不理想。考试当天，她忘带计算器，而考试中借计算器是被禁止的。朋友艾玛和大卫发现她的担忧，艾玛建议她向老师如实说明情况，大卫则提议考试时偷偷递给她计算器。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. 珍妮的心一沉。她没想到会面临这样艰难的抉择。接受大卫偷偷递计算器的提议，虽然可能会在考试中取得好成绩，但这是不诚实的行为，违背了她的原则，一旦被发现，不仅自己会受到严厉的惩罚，还会连累大卫。而听从艾玛的建议，向老师坦白，又担心老师不会通融，自己依然会在考试中处于劣势，成绩也会受到影响。她内心十分纠结，眉头紧锁，双手不自觉地揪着衣角。在一番激烈的思想斗争后，珍妮想到一直以来父母和老师对自己品德的教导，她终于下定决心，要做一个诚实的人。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：The exam started. 考试开始了。珍妮深吸一口气，平复了一下紧张的心情，然后起身走向老师。她鼓起勇气，诚恳地对老师说：“老师，我忘记带计算器了，非常抱歉。” 老师看着她，眼中闪过一丝惊讶，但很快露出了理解的神情。老师说：“这次我可以借给你，不过下次一定要记得。” 珍妮感激地接过老师递来的计算器，回到座位上开始认真答题。虽然考试过程中遇到了不少难题，但她凭借着扎实的知识和努力，尽力完成了试卷。考试结束后，珍妮感到无比轻松，因为她坚守了自己的原则，也收获了成长。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Jenny’s heart sank. She never expected to face such a tough decision. Accepting David's proposal of secretly passing the calculator might help her get good grades in the exam. However, it was dishonest and against her principles. Once discovered, not only would she be severely punished, but David would also be implicated. On the other hand, following Emma's advice and being honest with the teacher, she was worried that the teacher might not be lenient, and she would still be at a disadvantage in the exam, which would affect her grades. She was extremely conflicted, frowning tightly and unconsciously tugging at the corner of her clothes with her hands. After a fierce internal struggle, thinking of the moral teachings from her parents and teachers, Jenny finally made up her mind to be an honest person. 13 13 范文呈现 The exam started. Jenny took a deep breath to calm her nerves, then stood up and walked towards the teacher. She summoned up her courage and said sincerely, "Teacher, I'm so sorry that I forgot to bring my calculator." The teacher looked at her, a flash of surprise in his eyes, but soon a look of understanding appeared. The teacher said, "I can lend you mine this time, but remember to bring it next time." Jenny gratefully took the calculator from the teacher and returned to her seat to start answering the questions carefully. Although she encountered many difficult problems during the exam, she tried her best to complete the paper with her solid knowledge and hard work. After the exam, Jenny felt extremely relieved because she had adhered to her principles and also gained growth. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Jenny’s heart sank. Never had she anticipated being confronted with such a formidable decision. Accepting David's offer of surreptitiously slipping her the calculator might secure her good marks in the exam. Nevertheless, it was a blatant act of dishonesty, running counter to her deeply - held principles. Were they to be caught, not only would she be subject to severe punishment, but David would also be dragged into the quagmire. Conversely, heeding Emma's counsel and coming clean to the teacher filled her with trepidation. She feared that the teacher might not show mercy, leaving her at a distinct disadvantage during the exam and thus adversely affecting her grades. Torn between the two options, she furrowed her brows, her hands unconsciously clutching the hem of her clothes. After a protracted internal battle, recalling the moral lessons instilled by her parents and teachers, Jenny finally steeled her resolve to uphold her integrity. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The exam started. Taking a deep breath to steady her nerves, Jenny rose from her seat and made her way towards the teacher. Summoning all her courage, she said earnestly, "Teacher, I'm terribly sorry, but I've forgotten my calculator." The teacher's eyes widened in momentary surprise, which was swiftly replaced by an expression of understanding. "I'll lend you mine this time," the teacher said, "but don't forget next time." Gratefully, Jenny accepted the calculator and returned to her desk, where she began to tackle the questions with meticulous concentration. Despite encountering numerous thorny problems, she managed to complete the paper to the best of her ability, relying on her solid knowledge and dedicated efforts. As the exam concluded, Jenny felt an overwhelming sense of relief. By sticking to her principles, she had not only overcome the immediate challenge but also experienced personal growth. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$