2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：沙滩上的欢乐与挑战：沙堡的故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 沙滩上的欢乐与挑战：沙堡的故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Once upon a time, in the midst of a fine summer, Tom and his younger brother Jack went on an amazing trip to a picturesque beach with their family. Excitement filled the air as Tom and Jack eagerly packed their buckets and shovels (铲子), ready to explore the sandy wonders that awaited them. The moment they arrived at the beach, they wasted no time and rushed directly towards the shoreline. With the wind brushing gently over their cheeks, Tom and Jack dug their hands into the soft grains of sand, laughing happily as they felt grains of sand passing through their fingers. Their laughter was echoing along the coast. 4 4 续写原文 Then the two little brothers decided to build a splendid sand castle that would leave everyone in awe. With the sound of seabirds singing in the background, they began their grand project. Side by side, they cupped their hands, dug into the soft beach, and started building their dream castle. With great care and precision, they sculpted and shaped the sand with their fingers, crafting each tower and wall. The boys were lost in their work, feeling the warmth of the sand beneath their fingers. They seemed to hear whispering tales of the distant, mysterious ocean. 5 5 续写原文 Time seemed to stand still as the boys poured their hearts into every detail of their sandy creation. With each passing moment, the sand castle grew in both size and beauty and it began to take shape. Together, they patiently decorated their dream castle with seashells and twigs, imagining a world of soldiers, princesses, and magical creatures. Seeing the castle stand proudly before them, the two little brothers breathed out a sigh of relief. Their eyes shone with excitement. They were like architects who were appreciating their masterpiece that expressed their extraordinary imagination. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： However, just before they knew it, the seawater began to rise. Paragraph 2： Jack nodded his head in agreement and they determined to rebuild it. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 在一个美好的夏日，汤姆和弟弟杰克随家人去美丽的海滩旅行。他们带着工具兴奋地奔向沙滩，在那里尽情玩沙，之后决定建造一座令人惊叹的沙堡。兄弟俩用心雕琢，用贝壳和树枝装饰，沙堡逐渐成型。他们看着自己的杰作满心欢喜。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： However, just before they knew it, the seawater began to rise. 然而，他们还没反应过来，海水就开始上涨了。起初，海水只是轻柔地漫过他们的脚背，带来一丝清凉。可转眼间，海风呼啸起来，海浪也变得汹涌澎湃。一个个巨大的浪头接连不断地拍打过来，如同一头头凶猛的野兽，无情地冲击着他们精心搭建的沙堡。汤姆和杰克眼睁睁地看着那些他们花费了无数心血建造的精美塔楼和坚固城墙，在海浪的肆虐下迅速崩塌，化作一堆堆散落的沙子。他们心急如焚，赶忙用手去阻挡海水，试图保住沙堡，但海浪的力量太过强大，他们的努力显得如此微不足道。望着即将消失的沙堡，他们的眼中充满了失落和沮丧，心情也如同这被海浪搅乱的沙滩一般，乱糟糟的。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： Jack nodded his head in agreement and they determined to rebuild it. 杰克点头表示同意，他们决定重建沙堡。尽管刚才的失落还萦绕在心头，但兄弟俩骨子里的坚韧让他们很快就振作起来。他们对视一眼，从彼此的眼中看到了坚定的决心。于是，他们再次弯下腰，用手捧起细腻的沙子，全神贯注地开始堆砌。这一次，他们汲取了之前的教训，不仅更加小心翼翼地塑形，还特意把沙堡建在了离海水更远的地方。他们一边忙碌着，一边互相鼓励，分享着彼此对于新沙堡的创意和想法。在温暖的阳光照耀下，兄弟俩的身影在沙滩上显得格外专注，仿佛周围的一切都与他们无关，他们的心中只有那个即将再次诞生的梦想沙堡。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 However, just before they knew it, the seawater began to rise. At first, the seawater gently lapped over their feet, bringing a touch of coolness. But in the blink of an eye, the sea breeze howled, and the waves turned rough. One huge wave after another crashed onto the shore, like fierce beasts, mercilessly pounding the sand castle they had painstakingly built. Tom and Jack watched helplessly as the exquisite towers and solid walls they had spent so much effort on quickly crumbled into piles of scattered sand. They were so anxious that they hurriedly used their hands to block the seawater, trying to save the sand castle. However, the power of the waves was too strong, and their efforts were in vain. Looking at the disappearing sand castle, their eyes were filled with loss and frustration, and their mood was as chaotic as the beach disturbed by the waves. 14 14 范文呈现 Jack nodded his head in agreement and they determined to rebuild it. Although the previous loss still lingered in their hearts, the tenacity in the two brothers quickly made them cheer up. They looked at each other and saw firm determination in each other's eyes. Then, they bent down again, cupped their hands to pick up the fine sand, and started building with full concentration. This time, they learned from their previous experience. Not only did they shape the sand more carefully, but they also deliberately built the sand castle farther away from the seawater. As they were busy, they encouraged each other and shared their creative ideas for the new sand castle. Under the warm sunlight, the figures of the two brothers on the beach were extremely focused, as if everything around them didn't matter. In their hearts, there was only the dream sand castle that was about to be born again. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 However, just before they knew it, the seawater began to rise. Initially, the seawater caressed their feet gently, imparting a sense of coolness. Yet, in an instant, the sea breeze roared, and the waves turned tumultuous. Wave upon wave crashed onto the shore, resembling ferocious beasts, mercilessly assaulting the sand castle they had painstakingly constructed. Tom and Jack watched in dismay as the elaborate towers and sturdy walls they had labored over so assiduously rapidly crumbled into heaps of scattered sand. So desperate were they that they hastily resorted to using their hands to fend off the encroaching seawater, in a futile attempt to salvage the sand castle. Alas, the might of the waves was insurmountable, rendering their efforts fruitless. Gazing at the vanishing sand castle, their eyes were suffused with dejection and disappointment, and their spirits were as disarrayed as the beach buffeted by the tempestuous waves. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Jack nodded his head in agreement and they determined to rebuild it. Despite the lingering sense of loss, the indomitable spirit within the two brothers quickly buoyed them up. They exchanged a glance, and in each other's eyes, they beheld unwavering resolve. Subsequently, they stooped once more, scooping up the fine sand with their hands, and set about rebuilding with unwavering concentration. This time, they drew lessons from their prior experience. Not only did they shape the sand with greater meticulousness, but they also deliberately positioned the sand castle at a greater distance from the encroaching seawater. As they toiled away, they spurred each other on and shared their innovative concepts for the new sand castle. Beneath the warm embrace of the sun, the two brothers' figures on the beach were a picture of unwavering focus, as if the world around them had ceased to exist. In their hearts, there was but one thing - the dream sand castle on the verge of rebirth. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$