2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从误解到关爱：杰森与流浪老人的故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从误解到关爱：杰森与流浪老人的故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 “Mom, I’m ready to go,” called Jason. Every Saturday, Jason looked forward to going to Chinatown to shop for food because his mom let him pick his favorite snacks: roast pork buns and bubble tea. The streets in Chinatown were crowded with cars and pedestrians. His mother could not find the same exotic vegetables in the local supermarkets, so they always came here to shop. What fascinated Jason was tasty roast pork, even the whole pigs hanging on big hooks in the windows, their skins roasted to a glistening brown. Jason’s mouth would water just looking at them. 4 4 续写原文 As they passed the newsstand carrying Chinese newspapers and magazines, Jason spotted an old man sitting on the sidewalk. His hair was long, white, and messy. The face beneath was lined, dirty, and unshaven. Frayed and torn clothing wrapped around his thin frame, and in this kind of cold weather, he even wore sandals, his feet blue with cold. He banged an empty can against the sidewalk. As Jason walked by, he could smell a musty odor and pinched his nostrils together. The old man reached out and touched Jason’s left leg. Instinctively, Jason gathered all his strength to jerk(猛拉) his leg away and kick the old man’s hand heavily. Frightened, he hurried to catch up with his mother without looking back. “Mom, the old man touched me,” he cried, “He touched me with his dirty hands. It’s disgusting! And he smelled too.” 5 5 续写原文 Jason’s mother glanced back at the man with a look of understanding and said gently, “Jason, he can’t help it. He’s homeless. He didn’t mean any harm.” Mom’s words made Jason look back at the old man with regret, who now was looking up at other passersby, still banging his can. On their way home, Jason asked, his voice filled with concern. “Why is that old man homeless? Where does he sleep?” “I don’t know. It’s tough to be homeless, especially in this cold weather. He did look quite weak,” his mother replied. Mom’s words made Jason’s regret deepened. He confessed his heavy kick to his mother, who reminded him that it was crucial to acknowledge his mistake and try to make up for it. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： The next day, with his mother’s help, Jason decided to do something. Paragraph 2： Hearing this, the old man looked at them with watery eyes. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 每周六杰森都期待和妈妈去唐人街买食物，他喜欢那里的小吃。一次去唐人街，杰森遇到一位流浪老人，老人碰了他的腿，他出于本能踢了老人。妈妈告诉他老人无家可归并非有意冒犯，杰森心生悔意。回家路上他向妈妈询问老人的情况，愧疚感加深。妈妈提醒他要承认错误并弥补。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： The next day, with his mother’s help, Jason decided to do something. 第二天，在妈妈的帮助下，杰森决定做点什么。他和妈妈一大早就来到了超市，精心挑选了厚实的袜子、保暖的手套，还买了面包、热汤等食物。杰森还特意让妈妈帮忙装了一大杯热气腾腾的咖啡。一切准备就绪后，他们再次来到了唐人街昨天遇见老人的地方。杰森的心跳不由自主地加快，内心充满了紧张和愧疚。他深吸一口气，紧紧地攥着手中的袋子，一步一步慢慢地走向老人。当老人那布满沧桑的眼睛看到他们时，眼中闪过一丝惊讶。杰森鼓起全部的勇气，微微颤抖着双手把袋子递向老人，声音小却坚定地说：“爷爷，对不起，这是给您的。” 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： Hearing this, the old man looked at them with watery eyes. 听到这话，老人泪眼汪汪地看着他们。他那瘦骨嶙峋、满是污垢的手颤抖着接过袋子，嘴唇不停地抖动，似乎有千言万语却难以说出口。过了许久，他才用沙哑得几乎听不清的声音说道：“谢谢你们，你们真是好人。” 杰森看着老人，眼眶也不禁红了起来，他深刻地意识到自己曾经的行为是多么的鲁莽和错误。而此刻，能为老人做些力所能及的事，让他的内心充满了温暖。从那以后，杰森每次来到唐人街，都会特意来看望这位老人，给他带来生活所需，老人脸上的笑容也渐渐多了起来，他们之间也建立起了一种特殊的情谊。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 The next day, with his mother’s help, Jason decided to do something. Early in the morning, he and his mother went to the supermarket. They carefully selected thick socks, warm gloves, and also bought some bread, hot soup and other food. Jason also asked his mother to help him fill a large cup of steaming coffee. After everything was ready, they came to the place in Chinatown where they met the old man yesterday again. Jason's heart was pounding and he was filled with nervousness and guilt. He took a deep breath, tightly held the bag in his hand, and walked slowly step by step towards the old man. When the old man's eyes full of vicissitudes saw them, there was a flash of surprise in his eyes. Jason summoned up all his courage, his hands trembling slightly as he handed the bag to the old man. He said in a soft but firm voice, "Grandpa, I'm sorry. This is for you." 14 14 范文呈现 Hearing this, the old man looked at them with watery eyes. His thin, dirty hands trembled as he took the bag. His lips were shaking, as if he had a lot to say but couldn't. After a long time, he said in a hoarse voice that was almost inaudible, "Thank you. You are really kind - hearted people." Jason looked at the old man and his eyes also became red. He deeply realized how reckless and wrong his previous behavior was. At this moment, being able to do something for the old man made his heart full of warmth. From then on, every time Jason came to Chinatown, he would specially come to visit the old man and bring him daily necessities. The smile on the old man's face gradually increased, and a special friendship was also established between them. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The next day, with his mother’s help, Jason decided to do something. At the break of dawn, Jason and his mother made their way to the supermarket. They meticulously picked out thick socks, warm gloves, along with bread, hot soup and other provisions. Jason even asked his mother to prepare a large cup of steaming coffee. Once everything was in order, they returned to the very spot in Chinatown where they had encountered the old man the previous day. Jason's heart raced wildly, and he was overcome with a mix of nervousness and guilt. Taking a deep breath, he clutched the bag tightly and edged closer to the old man, step by cautious step. As the old man's weather - beaten eyes fell upon them, a flicker of surprise flashed across his face. Summoning all his courage, Jason extended the bag with slightly trembling hands and said, in a soft yet resolute voice, "Grandpa, I'm sorry. This is for you." 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Hearing this, the old man looked at them with eyes brimming with tears. His emaciated, dirt - caked hands quivered as he accepted the bag. His lips twitched, as if struggling to give voice to a multitude of emotions. After a long moment of silence, he managed to rasp out, in a voice barely audible, "Thank you. You're truly kind - hearted souls." Jason's eyes welled up as he looked at the old man, acutely aware of how rash and wrong his earlier actions had been. At that moment, the simple act of helping the old man filled his heart with warmth. From then on, each time Jason visited Chinatown, he made it a point to check in on the old man, bringing him much - needed daily essentials. The old man's countenance gradually brightened with more frequent smiles, and a unique bond blossomed between them. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$