内容正文:
Unit 1
Reading for Writing
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Have you ever had such proplems?
What did or will you do?
talk to friends
turn to parents
ask teachers for help
problem
advice
Who has a problem?
What’s the problem?
Who gives advice?
What’s the advice?
1.
2.
3.
Chen Lei
Internet Addiction
Susan Luo
talk to your friend
try new hobbies
discuss the problem together
Reading for details
1.Spend too much time online
Difficult to focus on others
2.Become addicted to the Internet
Unable to concentrate on school and family life
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei.
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2
3
4
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not… Why not discuss the problem together?
I think my advice will help.
I understand how you feel.
This is my advice and reasons.
I know what the problem is.
What does each part mainly talk about?
pre-writing
1. What expressions does susan Luo use to make suggestions? Circle them in the letter.
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2. Can you show me more expressions of making suggestions?
1. I am glad to receive your letter asking for...
很高兴收到你的来信询问
2. I have learned that you have some trouble in...and I would like to give you the following suggestions.
我知道你在...方面有困难,因此我想给你如下一些建议
3. When it comes to...,the following are my suggestions.
当涉及...,我的建议如下。
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Group work(three of you work together)
What're their problems?
Date
British English: day, month, year
American English: month, day, year
Greeting
Dear + object (friend / Sir / Mr.Smith)
Close
All the best
Good luck
Best wishes for you
Looking forward to your early reply
... ...
Reading
How to write
a letter of advice
Reading for Writing
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Name Suggestion Reason
Eric
Activity 1: Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
1. Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
• Try listening to your parents.
• Invite them out for something to eat.
• That they aren’t listening to you is perhaps because you don’t listen to them.
• This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions(不分心地;专心致志地)
Writing
I understand quite well that anyone of us will like a girl to a certain degree. As a result, Someone who's quite self-confident will speak it out to her, then perhaps they will go on making friends. Maybe, more often, the girl will refuse him.
Anyone who is too shy to let out the secret will keep it to himself or herself alone. Actually, most people have already chosen to do so. I think such is very necessary to us young Chinese students, because we have to study hard at our lessons and do some more amusements or practical activities during the three-year precious period.
Write a letter of advice to one of them
Dear peter,
How’s everything going? I am sorry to hear that ______________________
so I’m writing to offer you some advice.
There are some tips to change the situation. First of all, I recommend that _____________________________________________, which can help you____________________________________. Besides, it is a good idea to _______________________________________________. Most importantly, _____________________ will also be beneficial.
Hopefully, you will find the suggestions practical. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Lihua
描述问题
建议一 (should+V原形)
建议一的具体作用
建议二
建议三 Doing sth
Writing Practice
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要点如下:
1.交中国朋友
2.看中文电视节目、报纸、杂志等;
3.学唱中文歌曲;
4. ...
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信说他最近很焦虑,向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点用英语写一封回信。
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Four steps of writing a letter of advice
A State the _________ / writing purpose
B Express ______________
C Give ____________________
D Express __________________
understanding
advice and reason(s)
confidence/ wishes
problem
Letter of Advice
常用句式 useful expressions
A. 陈述问题/写作目的(State the problem / writing purpose)
You wrote that...
It is common for teenagers to do...
I am sorry that you have trouble in doing...
B. 表示理解(Express understanding)
I understand how you feel.
I know...
I can imagine...
As far as I’m concerned, I recommend that you should go to after-school class for there are a lot of children like you in the class. You can discuss with them or play some computer games in the free time.
If you still feel lonely, I think you should arrange some study tasks for yourself. Why not make up for your courses? I'm sure you won't feel lonely then.
For example
Discussion
Thank you
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