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Reading for Writing
M1U4 Natural Disasters
Step 1 Warming up (Book1-Unit4 Natural Disasters)
What do you know about the following natural disasters?
What damage or losses can they cause to us humans?
Drought
Fire
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What is the main idea of the passage?
This text is about a 1 terrible earthquake in Tangshan. The text can be divided into 5 paragraphs.
Para.1 describes 2 strange things happening in the country -side. Para.2 tells us about what 3 happened when the earth began to shake. Para.3 tells us most of the city were 4 destroyed. Para.4 tells us that 5 rescue work or help came after the earthquake. Para.5 tells us Tangshan City began to 6 revive with the government’s 7 support and the 8 efforts of the citizens.
Step 2 Listening and reading for general idea
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1. What happened before the earthquake?
(1) The water in the village well ______ and ______.
(2) Deep cracks __________ in the well walls.
(3) Chickens and pigs didn’t _____and dogs didn’t ____the buildings.
(4) Mice ran out looking for ______ places and fish _______ out of the water.
(5) Bright lights were _____ in the sky outside the city of TS.
Step 3 Reading for detailed information
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Read the news report released(发行) the day after a tsunami and answer the questions.
1. When did the tsunami happen?
2. What caused the tsunami?
3. Why would it be difficult to deliver food and supplies?
on 26 December, 2004
An earthquake of 9.0 magnitude under the sea
dangerous conditions and damaged roads
文本体裁
这是一篇关于_____的_________。
海啸
专题新闻
This passage is most likely to be taken from______. (文章出处题)
A magazine.
A newspaper.
A textbook (课本 ).
An advertisement (广告).
title(标题)
1
2
3
海啸袭击亚洲:6500余人丧生
Read and find the main idea of each paragraph.
Summary: On 26 December 2004, a tsunami killed more than 6,500 tourists, fishermen, and other locals in Southeast Asia. Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow. The damage caused by the tsunami is making it difficult for rescue workers to help the survivors.
Read the summary of the news report.
Check the main points it includes.
一篇好的概要所具备的特点
What is a summary?
a short retelling of the main idea of a text or a topic.
Examples:
a news report
a description of a movie
a blurb on the back of a book
…
What makes a good summary?
a.
b.
c.
A good summary should include:
1. the main ideas
2. important details
A good summary is short, true and fair.
(客观、准确、公正;不渲染、不加入自己的主观评价或观点)
A good summary is written in your own words and
in a clear order that the original text is presented in.
List the main points above according to the time line.
Strange things happened in the countryside.
150,000 soldiers and more than 10,000 doctors and nurses and many workers were sent to do ruscue work.With support from the government and efforts of the city's people, a new Tangshan was built upon the ruins.
More than 400,000 people were killed or injured in the earthquake.Nearly everything in the city was destroyed.
before the quake
in the quake
after the quake
Organize the main points above and draft your summary. Pay attention to the following:
01
02
03
05
A summary should be around 60-70 words.
Write down the key supporting points for the topic.
Do not include unimportant details or examples
Summary
An earthquake hit Tangshan, China on 28 July 1976. Before the earthquake, strange things happened in the countryside. More than 400,000 people were killed or injured in the earthquake.Nearly everything in the city was destroyed. After the quake,150,000 soldiers and more than 10,000 doctors and nurses and many workers were sent to do ruscue work.With support from the government and efforts of the city's people, a new Tangshan was built upon the ruins.
title(标题)
1
2
3
海啸袭击亚洲:6500余人丧生
Read and find the main idea of each paragraph.
title(标题)
海啸袭击亚洲:6500余人丧生
Read and find the main idea of each paragraph.
1
2
3
lead (导入)
body (主体)
effect(影响)
Read the summary of the news report. Check the main points it includes.
Summary: On 26 December 2004, a tsunami killed more than 6,500 tourists, fishermen, and other locals in Asia. Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow. The damage caused by the tsunami is making it difficult for rescue workers to help the survivors.
date(日期)
cause(成因)
time(时刻)
place
event(事件)
effect
following event(后续活动)
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写新闻报道总结的七要素
Read the definition of summary on the textbook.
Discuss and summarize the features of summary in groups.
Definition:
Features:
length: 1/3
: key points
: details, examples
THE STORY OF AN EYEWITNESS (Adapted)
Jack LondonSan Francisco, May 5, 1906.The earthquake that hit SanFrancisco on April 18 shook down hundreds of thousands of dollars’ worth of walls and chimneys(烟囱) . But the fire that followed burned up hundreds of millions of dollars9 worth of buildings and homes. Never before in history has a city been so completely destroyed. San Francisco is gone. The factories, the great stores and newspaper buildings, the hotels, and the great houses of the rich are all gone. On Wednesday morning at a quarter past five came the earthquake. A moment later, the disaster was a fact. South of Market Street, in the working-class neighbourhoods and in the factories, fires started. Within an hour of the first quake, the smoke could be seen 100 miles away. The sun was red in the dark sky. There was no stopping the fires. The firefighters to whom the task was given did their best but there was no way to organise or communicate. The railway tracks were now useless and there was no water in water pipes. All of the ways man had made to keep the city safe were gone in the 30 seconds the earth moved. By Wednesday afternoon, half the heart of the city was gone. At that time, I watched the disaster from a ship on the bay (海 湾). Out at sea it was calm. No wind came up. Yet from every direction~east, west, north, and south—strong winds blew upon the unlucky city and those whose homes had once stood in its green hills.
key sentence?
Two thirds of the people who lived there were dead or injured. Thousands of children were left without parents. The number of people who were killed or badly injured in the quake was more than 400,000.
Everywhere survivors looked, there was nothing but ruins. Nearly everything in the city was destroyed. About 75 percent of the citys factories and buildings, 90 percent of its homes, and all of its hospitals were gone. Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away. Most bridges had fallen or were not safe to cross. The railway tracks were now useless pieces of metal. Tens of thousands of cows, hundreds of thousands of pigs, and millions of chickens were dead.
Wednesday night saw the destruction of the very heart of the city. Man himself had to make ruins of some of the city's best buildings so that they would not be a danger to those in the streets. Tens of thousands who had lost their homes left the city to look for shelter from the fires. Some were dressed only in blankets and carried the things that they had been able to rescue from the fires. But there were no fights and no pushing or shoving. Somehow this worst of disasters brought out the best in the survivors. Never in all of San Francisco's history were her people so kind as on this night of terror.
Never before in history has a city been so completely destroyed.
1.Firefighters had to destroy some buildings that weren’t completely damaged because they worried they would fall down and hurt or injure more people.
2.the disaster made people act more kindly and be willing to work together and help one anther.
Writing Task
假设你是李华,你校邀请李教授来校做了有关地震防灾知识方面的讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇100词左右的报道。
内容包括:
1.讲座的时间、地点、参与人员;
2.讲座的内容;
3.活动反响。
①Text type:
②Person:
③Tense:
④Outline:
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
A news report
The Third Person(第三人称)
Past tense mainly(过去式为主)
引出话题,介绍时间、地点、参与人员
叙述讲座内容
总结或反响
1. 非谓语动词
The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami that crashed into coastlines across Asia yesterday, _______ (kill) more than 6,500 people…
定语从句
主语
谓语动词
宾语
非谓语动词
doing(主动/正在进行)
done(被动/已经完成)
to do(将来/目的/特殊名词)
killing
Goodbye!
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