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Unit 4 Reading for Writing
structure
leadline
lead
body
conclusion
when
where
who
what
why
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
details
10 月25日,你校学生会组织了为某地震灾区捐款的活动。同学们踊跃参加,共筹得善款35000元。假如你是校英语报的记者李华,请按以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道。
内容包括:
1.时间、地点、任务、活动;
2.同学们的反应。
注意: 1.词数 80左右;
2.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计人总词数);
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
1.donate...... to .....
2.disaster area
3.Students'Union
4. a big earthquake struck this area
5.show our concern to
6.the victims
7.a great number of
8. take part in
捐献…………
灾难区
学生会
一场大地震袭击了这个地区
表示我们的关心
被害人
大量的,许多的
参加,参与
一、短语积累
作者 (A) -
structure
leadline
lead
body
conclusion
when
where
who
what
why
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
details
10 月25日,你校学生会组织了为某地震灾区捐款的活动。同学们踊跃参加,共筹得善款35000元。假如你是校英语报的记者李华,请按以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道。
内容包括:
1.时间、地点、任务、活动;
2.同学们的反应。
注意: 1.词数 80左右;
2.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计人总词数);
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
1.donate...... to .....
2.disaster area
3.Students'Union
4. a big earthquake struck this area
5.show our concern to
6.the victims
7.a great number of
8. take part in
捐献…………
灾难区
学生会
一场大地震袭击了这个地区
表示我们的关心
被害人
大量的,许多的
参加,参与
一、短语积累
作者 (A) -
Sentence patterns(3) 无灵主语式
时间+witnessed a (…) competition/activity which was organized/held by sb+地点+目的
December 13 witnessed an activity ________ was held by the students’Union in our school in order to donate money to the disaster area.
Para.1活动简要概述(when/where/who/what/why)
为了向灾区捐款,学生会于12月13日在我校举行了一次活动。
which
Sentence patterns(1) At the beginning, sb did(环节一)…, after which sb did(环节二)…
Part 2 详细叙述事件的经过
首先,学生会主席就地震的具体情况发表了讲话,随后,大批学生参加了捐赠活动。最终,共筹得善款35000元。
At the beginning, the chairman of the students’Union gave a speech on the details of the earthquake, after which a great number of students took part in the donation activity.
In the end, 35,000 yuan were collected.
Activity 1 Lead-in
A tsunami is an extremely large ____ in the sea. It is often caused by an ____________, landslide or volcanic eruption. It is very _________ and can cause great _______.
wave
earthquake
dangerous
damage
Now, let's read a news report to know more about tsunami.
Activity 1 Lead-in
Headline
(tells what the story is about)
Body
(contains more information and details)
Ending
(gives something to think about)
Byline
(shows who wrote the story and when it was written)
Lead
(includes who, what, when, where, why and how)
Read the news report and find out the structure.
Activity 2
While-writing
Step 4: Exchange your drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft:
Step 5: Get your draft back and revise it.
Post-writing
For several days, strange things occurred in the countryside of the northeastern Hebei. Then, on 28 July 1976, an earthquake hit Tangshan city. The city was greatly affected and nearly destroyed. Many people were killed or injured. The rescue work began soon after the quakes. Soldiers and medical workers arrived to find survivors and help the people who had lost everything. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the people, a new Tangshan was built.
Sample writing
Strange things happened in the countryside before the earthquake.
An earthquake hit _________ China on 28 July 1976.
______________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________
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Tangshan
The number of people who were killed or badly injured in the quake was more than 400,000.
Nearly everything in the city was destroyed.
Soldiers and medical workers came to help the people who had had great loss and to try and find survivors.
With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city's people, a new Tangshan as built upon the earthquake ruins.
Suggested Answers:
Students Donate Money to Disaster Area
With the purpose of donating money to the disaster area, the students’Union held an activity in our school on December 13.
The detailed information is listed as follows.The activity started at 3 p.m. and lasted 2 hours, which was made up of two parts. At the beginning, the chairman of the students’Union gave a speech on the details of the earthquake, after which a great number of students took part in the donation activity. In the end, 35000 yuan were collected and given to the Red Cross in our city.
The activity turned out a great success, which can help us realize that we should unify in times of disaster.
假定你是学校英语杂志社记者, 上周你校开展了给贫困地区学生捐赠 “爱心包裹”的活动。请写一篇新闻报道。内容包括:
1. 活动时间与地点;2. 活动过程;3. 活动意义。注意:① 词数80词左右;②可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
Loving Parcels for Students in Need
Writing
Loving Parcels for Students in Need (标题)
Last week (时间或地点) witnessed our “Loving Parcels” donation activity at our school(活动). Aimed at helping the students in the poverty-stricken areas (活动目的), this activity was well received in the whole school.
All of the teachers and students (参与者) took an active part in the activity. The activity (活动) provided a platform for all the students to donate their clothes, books and schoolbags to the students in need (活动内容一). Most impressively, they also wrote down the best wishes on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools in the poor areas (活动内容二).
With the students' active participation and teachers' enthusiastic support, the donation (活动) was undoubtedly a success.
Quotes—original words of the local resident and officials.
Authentic (真实的)
A large number of figures to explain the losses and casualties.
Accurate and concise (简要)
Picture
Verbs: crashed into, were swept away, struck, had been killed, were found dead, were missing, and so on.
Vivid (生动的)
Language features (语言特点)
第 5 页
Yesterday—the second day after the tsunami.
Instant/Timeliness (时效性)
Post-writing
Sample Writing
For several days, something abnormal/ strange occurred in the countryside of northeastern Hebei. In the early morning, on 28 July, 1976, an earthquake hit/ stuck Tangshan city, which was greatly/ severely/ seriously affected and nearly destroyed. Hundreds of thousands of people were killed or injured. The rescue work began soon after the quakes. Soldiers and medical workers arrived to find survivors and help the people who had lost everything. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the people, a new Tangshan was rebuilt.
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