2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：深山困境中的无人机 “救援使者” 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 深山困境中的无人机 “救援使者” 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 37-year-old Casey Ryan felt very comfortable in the mountains of the Willamette National Forest in Eugene, Oregon. He knew its roads and hiking trails well from his time as a volunteer in a roadside clean-up crew. These days, he was often there photographing wildlife, and he almost always had his lightweight drone(无人机) with him. It was one of his favorite cameras. Though weather conditions weren’t great that morning, Ryan decided to go on a short hike with his friend. Snow was common and Ryan felt he knew the area well enough. Still, as they drove along, the roads became icy. Ryan thought he might turn back, but after a truck passed them coming from the opposite direction, he felt safe enough to keep going. The roads must still be passable in that direction, he reasoned. 4 4 续写原文 But it wasn’t long before the two men came across a woman who was stranded(滞留) along the mountain road. Ryan and his friend stopped to help her. Ryan tried to line up his truck’s rope to pull the woman’s car out —and ended up stuck in the same place. The three tried for hours to dig the cars out, but the sun was setting fast. The temperature was dropping and the snow was turning to ice blocks around the tires. It was impossible to dig out. Thirty miles from the closest town, their phones had no signal in such a low-lying(低洼的)area. Their car radio and walkie-talkies couldn’t transmit any signal far enough. The three travelers prepared to spend the night in their cars. The hikers had survival gear(装备) and food to share, so they weren’t terribly worried. It was Ryan’s friend who, jokingly perhaps, brought up a news report he had seen about a man using a drone to send roses to his girlfriend living on the 10th floor to make a proposal (求婚). 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1：Looking at his drone, Ryan suddenly came up with an idea. Paragraph 2： Ryan’s wife received his phone message and contacted a rescue team. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 37 岁的凯西・瑞安熟悉俄勒冈州尤金市威拉米特国家森林的山路，他常在此拍摄野生动物。一天，他和朋友在天气不佳时进山徒步，途中遇到一位被困女子，帮忙救援时他们自己也被困。因地处偏远低洼地区，手机、电台等都没信号，他们准备在车中过夜。此时，瑞安朋友提及用无人机求婚的新闻，让瑞安有了主意。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：Looking at his drone, Ryan suddenly came up with an idea. 看着他的无人机，瑞安突然有了一个主意。他灵机一动，想到可以利用无人机把手机送到高处，那里或许有信号，这样就能发送求救信息了。他马上把这个想法告诉了朋友和被困的女子，两人听后都觉得虽然冒险，但值得一试。尽管寒风呼啸，给操作无人机增加了极大的难度，瑞安还是凭借着以往操作的经验，小心翼翼地操控着。他目不转睛地盯着无人机的飞行轨迹，时刻调整着方向和高度。每一次无人机的晃动都让他的心跟着悬起来，他不断在心中祈祷着无人机能顺利抵达有信号的区域。在他的努力下，无人机慢慢朝着高处飞去。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：Ryan’s wife received his phone message and contacted a rescue team. 瑞安的妻子收到了他的手机信息，立即联系了救援团队。救援团队接到消息后，迅速行动起来，他们准备好救援设备，驾驶着车辆向山区进发。然而，由于山路结冰严重，车辆行驶得十分艰难，好几次都差点打滑失控。但救援人员没有丝毫退缩，他们凭借着专业的技能和坚定的决心，一步步靠近被困地点。经过漫长的几个小时，终于找到了瑞安他们。此时，三人在寒冷中已经等待得十分疲惫，看到救援人员的那一刻，激动的泪水夺眶而出。救援人员迅速帮助他们把车从雪中拖出，在大家的共同努力下，成功安全下山。这次经历让瑞安深刻明白，在困境中创新思维和团结协作是多么重要。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Looking at his drone, Ryan suddenly came up with an idea. A thought flashed through his mind that he could use the drone to carry his phone to a higher altitude where there might be a signal, thus enabling him to send out a distress call. He immediately shared this plan with his friend and the stranded woman. They both thought it was a risky but worthy attempt. Despite the howling wind, which made the operation of the drone extremely difficult, Ryan, relying on his previous experience, carefully controlled it. His eyes were fixed on the flight path of the drone, and he adjusted the direction and altitude constantly. Every shake of the drone made his heart race, and he kept praying that the drone could reach the area with a signal smoothly. With his efforts, the drone gradually flew towards the higher place. 13 13 范文呈现 Ryan's wife received his phone message and immediately contacted a rescue team. Upon receiving the news, the rescue team sprang into action. They prepared the rescue equipment and drove towards the mountain area. However, due to the severely icy mountain roads, the vehicle moved forward with great difficulty. It skidded several times, almost getting out of control. But the rescuers didn't flinch at all. With their professional skills and firm determination, they got closer to the trapped location step by step. After several long hours, they finally found Ryan and the others. By then, the three of them were exhausted from waiting in the cold. When they saw the rescuers, excited tears welled up in their eyes. The rescuers quickly helped them tow the car out of the snow. With the joint efforts of everyone, they managed to go down the mountain safely. This experience made Ryan deeply understand how important innovative thinking and teamwork were in difficult situations. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Looking at his drone, Ryan suddenly came up with an idea. A brilliant thought occurred to him that he could employ the drone to ferry his phone to a higher elevation where there was a possibility of getting a signal, thereby facilitating the sending of a distress message. Without hesitation, he imparted this plan to his friend and the stranded woman. Both of them deemed it a risky yet promising endeavor. In spite of the blustery wind, which posed a formidable challenge to the operation of the drone, Ryan, drawing on his prior expertise, skillfully manipulated it. His gaze was riveted on the drone's flight trajectory, and he made constant adjustments to its direction and altitude. Every tremor of the drone set his heart pounding, and he incessantly prayed that it could reach the signal - covered area smoothly. Through his arduous efforts, the drone steadily ascended towards the heights. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Ryan's wife received his phone message and immediately contacted a rescue team. The moment the rescue team got the news, they swung into action. They readied the rescue gear and set off for the mountainous region. Nevertheless, the severely icy mountain roads rendered the vehicle's progress arduous. It skidded on numerous occasions, teetering on the verge of losing control. But the rescuers remained undaunted. Armed with their professional acumen and unwavering determination, they inched closer to the trapped site step by step. After what seemed like an eternity of several hours, they finally located Ryan and the others. By then, the trio was fatigued from enduring the cold. The instant they laid eyes on the rescuers, tears of excitement welled up in their eyes. The rescuers promptly assisted in towing the car out of the snow. Through the concerted efforts of all, they successfully made their way down the mountain safely. This experience impressed upon Ryan the profound significance of innovative thinking and teamwork in the face of adversity. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$