2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：一份特殊礼物：开启大学友谊的 “钥匙” 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 一份特殊礼物：开启大学友谊的 “钥匙” 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 More Than a Medical Kit “Anybody have a bandage?” a voice rang down the dorm hallway. It was our first week at college and we were all experiencing nervousness. I had forgotten to bring snacks for late nights but would never ask any of my roommates to share theirs. I was shy, always worried about fitting in a new situation and meeting people. Several months before, I sat at my high school graduation party admiring my gifts and battling waves of post-high school sentimentality (多愁善感). Books were scattered around my feet. Laundry items, desk supplies — all well-intentioned and well-received. They would demonstrate their givers’ thoughtfulness over and over during my college career. 4 4 续写原文 But one gift struck me as strange. I frowned when I opened it. Medicine? A small packet of pills and creams, ointments and so on lay within the wrappings. Who would give that as a gift? I turned and Jenny, my best friend, grinned (露齿而笑). “You’ll need that once you’re at school,” She pointed out. “You won’t have to chase down the campus nurse for every cough. Besides, that might bring you luck and chance.” Hugging me tightly, she added. Good point. She knew how anxious and frightened I felt about stepping onto a new journey, without her for company. 5 5 续写原文 Not long after, in August, I packed my life into a borrowed truck and slipped the bag of medicine in with all my necessities. I hardly thought about it once I reached campus, caught in the whirlwind of unpacking, book-buying, scheduling, and meeting new people. When “anybody have a bandage?” rang out in the dormitory hall that day, I remembered my little medicinal package. I swallowed self-consciously. “Actually,” I gave a little wave, “I have one.” “Great,” the girl jumped off her bed and walked toward me. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：As I dug out the kit, we began to chat. Paragraph 2： The little gift I had questioned now led me toward new friendships. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 大学第一周，作者因性格内向，在新环境中有些拘谨。回忆起几个月前高中毕业时，好友珍妮送了一份奇怪的礼物 —— 医药包，当时作者很疑惑。到了大学后，作者忙于各种事务，几乎忘了这个医药包。直到有一天宿舍走廊有人喊着要创可贴，作者想起自己的医药包，便拿出创可贴给对方。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：As I dug out the kit, we began to chat. 我翻找急救包的时候，我们开始聊天。我一边在包里翻找，一边关切地询问她受伤的经过。她无奈地笑了笑，说自己在整理行李时，一个不小心，被箱子锋利的边角划破了手指。不一会儿，我找到了创可贴，小心翼翼地递给她。她接过创可贴，眼中满是感激，笑着夸我的急救包很实用。随后，她饶有兴致地问起这个急救包的来历。我便向她讲述了这是好友珍妮送的毕业礼物，还倾诉了我初入大学时内心的种种不安和对未来的迷茫。她耐心地倾听着，不时点头，然后分享了自己初入大学时的忐忑经历，告诉我大家都一样，只要勇敢迈出第一步，慢慢就能适应。在交谈中，我们的距离逐渐拉近，原本的陌生感也慢慢消散。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：The little gift I had questioned now led me toward new friendships. 曾经让我质疑的小礼物如今引领我走向了新的友谊。从那之后，我和这个女孩的关系日益亲密，我们一起穿梭在校园的各个角落，一起去食堂吃饭，一起在图书馆学习。她还热情地把我介绍给她的朋友们，我们一同参加社团活动，在各种活动中互相帮助、共同成长。随着时间的推移，我的生活变得丰富多彩，我也不再像刚入学时那样胆小怯懦，逐渐变得开朗自信起来。每当看到那个医药包，我都会想起和她的初次相遇，心中满是对珍妮的感激。这个小小的医药包，成为了我大学生活中珍贵友谊的起点，让我在这个陌生的校园里找到了温暖的归属感。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 As I dug out the kit, we began to chat. While rummaging through the bag, I asked her about how she got injured with great concern. She gave a helpless smile and said that she accidentally cut her finger on the sharp edge of the box when she was unpacking. Soon, I found the Band - Aid and handed it to her carefully. She took it, with gratitude in her eyes, and praised my medical kit for being so practical. Then, she asked me with great interest where I got the kit. I told her that it was a graduation gift from my best friend Jenny and also poured out my inner uneasiness and confusion about the future when I first entered college. She listened patiently, nodding from time to time, and then shared her own nervous experiences when she first came to college. She told me that everyone was the same and that as long as we took the first step bravely, we could adapt gradually. During the conversation, the distance between us gradually shortened, and the original strangeness slowly dissipated. 14 14 范文呈现 The little gift I had questioned now led me toward new friendships. After that, the girl and I became closer day by day. We walked around every corner of the campus together, had meals in the cafeteria together, and studied in the library together. She also introduced me to her friends warmly. We participated in club activities together, helping and growing together in various activities. As time went by, my life became colorful, and I was no longer as timid as I was when I first entered school. I gradually became outgoing and confident. Whenever I saw that medical kit, I would think of my first encounter with her and be full of gratitude to Jenny. This small medical kit became the starting point of precious friendships in my college life, making me find a sense of warmth and belonging in this strange campus. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 As I dug out the kit, we began to chat. While rummaging through the bag, I inquired about her injury with genuine concern. She flashed a helpless smile and explained that she'd accidentally sliced her finger on the sharp edge of the box during unpacking. Before long, I located the Band - Aid and proffered it to her with care. She accepted it, her eyes brimming with gratitude, and commended my medical kit for its practicality. Subsequently, she quizzed me curiously about the origin of the kit. I recounted that it was a graduation gift from my best friend Jenny and unburdened my initial trepidations and uncertainties about college life. She listened intently, nodding occasionally, and then shared her own nerve - wracking experiences upon first arriving at college. She assured me that everyone was in the same boat and that with a bold first step, adaptation would follow. During our conversation, the gap between us narrowed steadily, and the initial awkwardness melted away. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 The little gift I had once questioned now paved the way for new friendships. From then on, the girl and I grew ever closer. We roamed every nook and cranny of the campus together, dined in the cafeteria side by side, and hit the books in the library as study partners. She graciously introduced me to her circle of friends. Together, we plunged into club activities, supporting and evolving together. As the days rolled by, my life blossomed with color, and I shed my initial timidity, gradually transforming into an outgoing and self - assured individual. Each time I laid eyes on that medical kit, memories of our first encounter flooded back, along with a deep - seated gratitude to Jenny. This unassuming medical kit had become the cornerstone of precious friendships in my college years, endowing me with a sense of warmth and belonging in this unfamiliar campus. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$