2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：流浪猫的陪伴：点亮绝望者的生命之光 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 流浪猫的陪伴：点亮绝望者的生命之光 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 One night, sitting on the cold steps at the back of my apartment in Kansas, I’d been staring out into the darkness. The only light came from my cigarette. Rain soaked (浸湿) through my pants, but I didn’t care. Back in my room, there was a knife on the bedside table and a note on my computer screen. I hoped that whoever read it first would understand why I had the plan to end it all. Six months before that night, a car accident caused a brain injury in me. I lost my job and had to live on my savings in my lonely apartment. Since then, I had been suffering from depression and struggling to get through each day. I sat there on those cold steps just wanting to end it all. “Tonight. I will,” I thought as I took another drag of my cigarette. “Meow?” 4 4 续写原文 I looked up. A black and white cat with round green eyes looked back at me. He meowed again. Then, walking out from his hiding spot, he jumped at me. He was tiny and damp, but he rubbed up against my legs. When I reached down to pet him, he leaned into my touch, purring (发出呼噜声). That was all it took. I cried. The cat just watched me. I didn’t scare him away. In fact, he stood there as if he knew how desperately I needed a companion right at that very moment. I looked into his big green eyes and he looked back. Clearly a stray (流浪的) cat. “When was the last time you ate?” I said. My plan to end it all was put on hold, at least until I found this cat some food. It became a routine: Every day, I’d go to the back steps with some cat food. Usually, the cat, whom I named Scout, was already waiting for me. He became more than something to live for. Over time he inspired me to get help for my depression and even gave me the confidence to get into a serious relationship with Becky in Pittsburgh, whom I had known for years. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1：Scout became my constant companion. Paragraph 2： I was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first approached in the rain, but I still needed to make a few more changes. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 主人公因车祸脑部受伤，失去工作后独居，患上抑郁症并打算自杀。在一个雨夜，一只流浪猫出现，蹭他的腿并发出呼噜声，这让他放弃了自杀计划。此后，主人公每天给猫喂食，猫的陪伴让他有了生活的动力，还促使他积极寻求帮助，甚至有了勇气与匹兹堡的贝基发展一段认真的感情。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：Scout became my constant companion. 斯考特成了我形影不离的伙伴。每天清晨，它会准时跳上我的床头，用脑袋蹭我的脸，催我起床。我走到哪儿，它就跟到哪儿，就连我去厨房准备食物，它也会紧紧跟在我的脚边，时不时发出 “喵喵” 的叫声，仿佛在和我聊天。夜晚，它会安静地趴在我的枕边，我能感受到它温暖的身体，这让我在漫长的黑夜里不再感到孤单。它还会在我情绪低落时，用它柔软的爪子轻轻抓我的手，似乎在安慰我。在斯考特的陪伴下，我逐渐走出了抑郁症的阴影，重新找回了生活的乐趣。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：I was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first approached in the rain, but I still needed to make a few more changes. 我早已不是斯考特在雨中初次遇见的那个孤独又抑郁的人了，但我仍需要做出一些改变。我深知，为了拥有更好的生活，我必须迈出新的一步。于是，我决定离开堪萨斯，前往匹兹堡与贝基一起生活。在出发前，我精心为斯考特准备了舒适的猫包。一路上，斯考特安静地待在包里，偶尔探出头来看看外面的世界。到了匹兹堡后，我迅速投入到新的工作中，努力适应新环境。斯考特也很快和贝基熟悉起来，它在我们的新家里快乐地玩耍，见证着我们生活的每一个美好瞬间。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Scout became my constant companion. Every morning, it would jump onto my bedside punctually, rubbing its head against my face to wake me up. Wherever I went, it would follow closely. Even when I walked to the kitchen to prepare food, it would stick to my feet, meowing from time to time as if chatting with me. At night, it would lie quietly beside my pillow. I could feel its warm body, which made me no longer feel lonely in the long nights. When I was in low spirits, it would gently scratch my hand with its soft paws as if to comfort me. With Scout's company, I gradually stepped out of the shadow of depression and regained the joy of life. 13 13 范文呈现 was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first approached in the rain, but I still needed to make a few more changes. I was well aware that I had to take a new step for a better life. So, I decided to leave Kansas and move to Pittsburgh to live with Becky. Before setting off, I carefully prepared a comfortable cat carrier for Scout. Along the way, Scout stayed quietly in the carrier, occasionally poking its head out to look at the outside world. After arriving in Pittsburgh, I quickly devoted myself to my new job and tried hard to adapt to the new environment. Scout also got familiar with Becky soon. It played happily in our new home, witnessing every wonderful moment of our lives. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Scout became my constant companion. Each morning, with unfailing punctuality, it would leap onto my bedside, nuzzling my face with its soft head to rouse me from slumber. Wherever my footsteps led within the apartment, it trailed close behind. Even as I made my way to the kitchen to prepare a meal, it clung to my heels, meowing softly as if engaged in a gentle conversation. At night, it nestled quietly beside my pillow, its warm presence a reassuring comfort that chased away the long - night loneliness. Whenever I was engulfed in melancholy, it would tenderly scratch my hand with its delicate paws, as if offering silent solace. With Scout by my side, I gradually emerged from the depths of depression, reclaiming the pleasures of life. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I was far from the lonely and depressed man that Scout had first encountered in the rain, but I still had a few changes to make. Acutely aware that a new step was essential for a brighter future, I resolved to leave Kansas and join Becky in Pittsburgh. Prior to our departure, I meticulously readied a cozy cat carrier for Scout. Throughout the journey, Scout remained calmly in the carrier, occasionally peeking out to explore the passing scenery. Upon arriving in Pittsburgh, I promptly immersed myself in my new job, striving to acclimatize to the new surroundings. Scout, too, swiftly befriended Becky. It frolicked merrily in our new abode, bearing witness to every beautiful moment of our lives. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$