UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇推荐旅游景点的文章-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义配套教参（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇推荐旅游景点的文章 ◎ Dear Jiang， Great to hear you’re coming to the US！I hope I can convince you to stop by and visit us in New York.There’re so many things to see and do here in the Big Apple.It would take a lifetime to list them all! But knowing you as I do，I’d suggest walking through Midtown Manhattan.It’s one of the most popular tourist attractions in the US and just can’t be missed! Broadway district with its cafés，street performers and enormous and colorful signs really captures New York’s loud spirit! As Broadway is the heart of the American theater industry，it’s at night when it truly comes alive.Broadway is famous for its big theaters，showing Shakespeare，modern drama，dance shows or musicals—take your pick! With your love of singing and interest in amateur dramatics，I’d recommend a musical.It’s a moving and intense experience that I’m sure you would love—a bit like Peking Opera! Quite a few musicals are based on classic stories like Les Misérables or Peter Pan，and they might even inspire you to read the books，too! My big news is that we’re all thinking about doing a big trip in China in the winter vacation.We’re looking for a combination of fun and traditional culture.Can you recommend a place of cultural highlights? See you soon！(Fist bump！！) Selena ◎ 学语言 表达上knowing you as I do，showing Shakespeare，modern drama，dance shows or musicals为现在分词短语作状语；that we’re all thinking about doing a big trip in China in the winter vacation为that引导的表语从句。写作手法上，文章多次使用感叹句，直观表达了作者极力推荐上文的强烈情感。 知结构 本单元的写作任务是推荐或介绍一个城市的文化亮点。文章主要分为三部分： 开头：说明写信的背景和目的； 主体：介绍推荐内容，阐述推荐理由或给出你的观点； 结尾：表达愿望或希望对方接受建议。 [情境任务写作] 假如你是李华，你的朋友Selena发邮件说想要来中国旅游，请你给她推荐一次“泰山行”，内容包括： 1．泰山简介； 2．推荐泰山的原因； 3．盼望她的到来。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：Mount Tai 泰山 学生用书第85页 Dear Selena， Hearing that you will come to China for a travel，I am quite excited._____________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 明确体裁话题 说明文；推荐旅游景点 确定时态人称 一般现在时；第三人称 布局文章架构 第一段：关于泰山的总体介绍； 第二段：说明推荐它的原因及对其进一步介绍； 第三段：发出邀请，盼望对方到来。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①泰山位于山东省中部。 Mount Tai is located in the middle of Shandong Province. ②它是黄河流域古代文化的发祥地之一。 It is one of the birthplaces of the ancient culture along the Yellow River basin. ③泰山被誉为“五岳”之首。 Mount Tai is regarded as the head of the Five Great Mountains. ④泰山风景区有多处古遗址。 There are a lot of ancient historic sites． ⑤它们为研究中国古代历史提供了重要而丰富的资料。 They provide plenty of important material evidences to make researches on ancient Chinese history. ⑥泰山不只是一座风景山，更是一座文化山。 Mount Tai is not only a mountain of scenery，but also a mountain of culture. 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑦把句①和句②合并成含有分词作状语的句子。 Located in the middle of Shandong Province，Mount Tai is one of the birthplaces of the ancient culture along the Yellow River basin. ⑧把句④和句⑤合并成含有定语从句的句子。 There are a lot of ancient historic sites，which provide plenty of important material evidences to make researches on ancient Chinese history. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Selena， Hearing that you will come to China for a travel，I am quite excited.Taking the weather condition into account，I strongly advise you to climb Mount Tai. Located in the middle of Shandong Province，Mount Tai is one of the birthplaces of the ancient culture along the Yellow River basin.Mount Tai is regarded as the head of the Five Great Mountains.There are a lot of ancient historic sites，which provide plenty of important material evidences to make researches on ancient Chinese history.Mount Tai is not only a mountain of scenery，but also a mountain of culture. I am sure that you will be amazed at the splendid scenery the moment you arrive there. Yours， Li Hua [精彩素材积累] 首段： 1．Knowing that you have a great interest in learning Chinese and are in need of a helpful APP，I’m writing to recommend to you an APP called Hi-Chinese. 知道你对学习中文很感兴趣，需要一个有用的应用程序，我写信给你推荐一个名为Hi-Chinese的应用程序。 2．Having learnt that you are coming to visit Beijing，I’d like to recommend a place of interest—the Great Wall to you. 得知你要来北京参观，我想向你推荐一个旅游胜地——长城。 主体： 1．Talking about the local food，Xi’an enjoys a great reputation for its various snacks all over China.I do hope you can come and enjoy yourself to the fullest here! 说到当地的食物，西安的小吃在中国享有很高的声誉。我真心希望你能来这里尽情享受！ 学生用书第86页 2．Well-known as a historic city in China，Xi’an is really an ideal destination.First of all，Xi’an is not only a city with a long history but also a place with many tourist attractions，among which the Terracotta Warriors and Horses is what you can never miss. 西安被誉为中国历史名城，是一个理想的目的地。首先，西安不仅是一个历史悠久的城市，也是一个有许多旅游景点的地方，其中兵马俑是你永远不能错过的。 3．People in Xi’an are friendly，kind and willing to offer anyone in need，which can really make your visit comfortable and pleasant. 西安人民友好、善良，愿意为有需要的人提供帮助，这真的可以让您的访问舒适愉快。 结尾： 1．I hope you will find it beneficial and sincerely wish you a pleasant journey of Chinese learning. 我希望你能从中受益，并衷心祝愿你有个愉快的汉语学习之旅。 2．Hope my recommendation will be of help.Wish you a good time/journey. 希望我的推荐能有所帮助。祝你玩得高兴/旅途愉快。 [学以致用] 假定你是李华，你收到美国笔友Tom的来信，他和他的朋友下个月要来参观你的家乡——昆明，请根据以下内容回信。 1．地理位置：我国的西南部； 2．面积：约21 473平方公里； 3．人口：多于619万； 4．推荐景点：滇池、西山森林公园和官渡古镇等，昆明文化旅游资源丰富，气候宜人，游客既可欣赏美景，又可品尝各种风味食品； 5．其他：乐意充当导游。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Tom， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Tom， How’s it going？Knowing that you are coming to my hometown—Kunming soon，I’m more than delighted to introduce it to you. Kunming，which lies in the southwest of China，is a beautiful city with long history.Covering an area of about 21，473 square kilometers，the city has a population of over 6.19 million.Known as pleasant weather，rich cultural tourism resources and the convenience of the means of transportation，it attracts millions of visitors from all around the world.There are a lot of places of interest such as Kunming Lake，West Hill Forest Park and Guandu Old Town，where you can enjoy the wonderful scenery and kinds of delicious food. I feel honored to be your guide when you come.Wish you a pleasant journey here. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$