UNIT 2 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇概要-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义配套教参（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇概要 ◎ The Blue Bird is a six-act fairy play written by Maurice Maeterlinck.It’s a story about Tyltyl and Mytyl’s adventures as they search for the Blue Bird of Happiness.As the children of a poor woodcutter，they are secretly observing a party at the home of their wealthy landlords when a fairy appears.She uses a magic diamond to bring animals (their dog and cat)，objects (sugar and bread) and elements(light，fire，water) in their home to life.Together，they set off on a dangerous journey in search of the Blue Bird. Tyltyl and Mytyl go to many magical places.They encounter numerous characters such as their departed grandparents，trees that hate mankind，the greedy and ugly Luxuries，and children waiting to be born.Although they try very hard to find the Blue Bird，the birds they find either change colour or die.The children return home at last，and Tyltyl discovers the Blue Bird has been there all the time! He gives the bird to the neighbour’s little girl，curing her illness.But in the end，the bird flies away，and Tyltyl asks the audience to search for it.The central idea of the play is that happiness is to be found not in luxuries such as wealth，but in simple things that are found in family life，and in acts of friendship and kindness. ◎ 学语言 表达上，第一段第一句作者使用过去分词短语作定语；第二句使用as引导时间状语从句；第二段倒数第三句curing her illness使用现在分词短语作状语；最后一句使用that引导表语从句。 写作手法上，第一段，作者开门见山点明作品主题；第二段第一句为承上启下的过渡句，并在第二段中使用although，but，and等，一步步将故事的发展推向高潮，并在最后一句概括本书的中心思想。故事情节层层推进，环环相扣。 知结构 本单元的写作任务是写一篇文学作品的概要。一般来说，分为三部分： 开头：点明主题或介绍相关背景； 主体：简要介绍故事梗概； 结尾：对作品的评论。 学生用书第55页 [情境任务写作] 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Many years ago，when I was fresh out of school，I was driving to my parents’ home in Missouri for the Spring Festival.I stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from Oklahoma City.While I was standing in line at the cash register (收款台)，I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas. I took off，but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car.I stopped and wondered what I should do.A car pulled up behind me.It was the couple.They said they would take me.We chatted and when I got out of the car，the husband gave me his business card.I wrote them a thank-you note.Soon afterward，I received a Spring Festival present from them.Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful. Years later，I drove to a meeting in the morning.In late afternoon I found that I’d left the lights on all day，and the battery was dead.Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership was right next door.I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom. “Just how friendly is Friendly Ford？” I asked and explained my trouble.They quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.They would accept no payment，so later，I wrote them a note to say thanks.I received a letter back from one of the salesmen.No one had ever written him and said thank you，and it meant a lot，he said. “Thank you”—two powerful words.They’re easy to say and mean so much. [仿写程序步骤] 第一步　布局结构 明确体裁 记叙文 确定时态人称 以一般过去时为主；第一、三人称 布局文章架构 开头：介绍背景； 主体：简要介绍故事； 结尾：作者的感想。 第二步　细读全文 who I，an older couple，two salesmen when many years ago，years later where a gas station，on the way to a meeting what the author accepted others’ help and wrote thank-you notes to them why the author’s car broke down and had to ask others for help how the author learned a lot from sending thank-you notes to others 第三步　初步成文 ①In this passage，the author told us his two experiences of being helped by the strangers.②And during the two experiences，the author wrote thank-you notes to the strangers.③They had given him a hand when there was something wrong with his car.④Through the two experiences，he realized that saying “thank you” was easy and meant so much. 第四步　创设亮点 ⑤把初步成文中第①句中的told us替换成“描述”。 told us→ described ⑥把初步成文中第①句中的of being helped by the strangers升级成定语从句。 In this passage，the author told us his two experiences where he was helped by the strangers. ⑦把初步成文中的第②③句合并为一个含定语从句的句子。 And during the two experiences，the author wrote thank-you notes to the strangers who had given him a hand when there was something wrong with his car. 学生用书第56页 第五步　妙笔成篇 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] In this passage，the author described his two experiences where he was helped by the strangers.And during the two experiences，the author wrote thank-you notes to the strangers who had given him a hand when there was something wrong with his car.Through the two experiences，he realized that saying “thank you” was easy and meant so much. [精彩素材积累] 首段： 1．Since the novel was published，it has been popular among children as well as adults. 自从这部小说出版以来，就受到了孩子们和成年人的欢迎。 2．Robinson Crusoe is a novel written by the English author Daniel Defoe，which is a widely influential literary masterpiece. 《鲁滨逊漂流记》是英国作家丹尼尔·笛福的一部小说，是一部影响广泛的文学杰作。 3．It has been popular all over the world and has been read by generations all over the world. 这本书在全世界都很受欢迎，全世界几代人都在阅读。 主体： 1．Having read the first four chapters of Great Expectations by Charles Dickens，I’m glad to share part of the story here with you. 读完了查尔斯·狄更斯的《远大前程》的前四章，我很高兴在这里与大家分享故事的一部分。 2．This novel tells the story of Huckleberry，a boy who lost his parents when he was very young. 这部小说讲述了哈克贝利的故事，这个小男孩在很小的时候就失去了父母。 3．The novel The Boy in the Striped Pajamas talks about the friendship between two eight-year-old boys during World War Ⅱ. 小说《穿条纹睡衣的男孩》讲述了二战期间两个八岁男孩之间的友谊。 结尾： 1．I liked the story so much that my mother always read it to me before I went to sleep every night during my childhood. 我非常喜欢这个故事，小时候每天晚上睡觉之前我母亲总是读给我听。 2．In a word，Jane Eyre is one of the works that all women in the world should read，and I definitely recommend it! 总之，《简·爱》是一部全世界女性必读的作品之一，我强烈推荐它！ 3．The central idea of the play is to look for what’s good for you even in desperate situations and always be optimistic and enthusiastic about life. 该剧的中心思想是，即使在绝望的情况下，也要寻找对你有利的东西，并始终对生活保持乐观和热情。 [学以致用] 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Your hunger doesn’t necessarily mean you are really hungry.It is an important sign of what is happening in your body—physically，emotionally and mentally.Sounds strange? It is true and here in this article we shall discuss certain things that your hunger is trying to tell you. When you feel hungry，try to figure out if you are really hungry.Sometimes when you think that you are hungry，you might be thirsty.It is possible that you have been dehydrated(脱水) for a long time and your body is sending a signal through your hunger.So instead of eating，go for water and quench your thirst at the earliest. If you feel hungry all the time，it could mean that you are depriving(剥夺) yourself of certain foods and 学生用书第57页 hence the body is craving for these.If you are on a strict diet，then go for foods and legumes rich in protein along with complex carbohydrates(碳水化合物) like quinoa and brown rice that will take you a long time to digest and will keep you full for a long period of time. You might get hungry for a certain kind of food only at times.This is because you become emotional about certain foods.For example，if you are happy and celebrating your anniversary，you might end up having a desire for the cake that you bought to celebrate the special occasion.This is called emotional eating. Sometimes your hunger might mean that you need to take a break.When you end up working at a stretch，and you do not realize that your body needs rest，you can end up feeling hungry as it is a way your body is telling you to break free from work. Sometimes when you are bored or stressed out，you might feel hungry.It is the body’s way of telling you that you need a change of scene.Go out，take a walk，talk to your dearest friend or simply take some deep breaths.Even after this，if you feel hungry，do eat. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Many factors can explain why your hunger doesn’t necessarily mean you are really hungry.(要点1) First，when you are thirsty and having a desire for a certain food，you will feel hungry.(要点2) Besides，you might be hungry when you become emotional about certain foods on some special occasions.(要点3) Moreover，lack of rest or feeling bored and stressed out can also lead to your hunger.(要点4) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$