UNIT 4 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇关于非现金支付的文章-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 4　Everyday economics Section Ⅴ　Writing—— 写一篇关于非现金支付的文章 内容索引 模仿写作　学范文 1 40分写作限时练 2 模仿写作　学范文 返回 原文呈现 Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular，with fewer and fewer people using cash.Instead，they are choosing to make their payments with cards，mobile phones and other electronic devices.What do you think of this? Non-cash payment is the best way to go.I pay for everything with my smartphone.It only takes a blink of the eye—just scan the barcode and click！And I never have to carry lots of heavy coins or dirty notes，or worry about losing my wallet—for the fourth time！Speaking of “dirty”，do you know that there are more germs on a coin than on a toilet seat? It might not be safe as you think，as computers and phones can be stolen or hacked easily.I also worry about over-consumption.If I have $20 in my purse，I can only spend up to that amount.But with electronic payments，I can spend again and again，just as long as my bank account has money in it！And what if you’re in a place without Internet access or your phone battery dies? I agree that there are problems in electronic payments.Despite their convenience people who don’t know how to use electronic payments might feel confused especially the elderly.Perhaps we could talk about using money less often，rather than replacing it for good? 名师圈点 学语言 亮点表达上，第一段使用with fewer and fewer people using cash从侧面表达了无现金支付越来越流行的现状。第二段尾句使用Speaking of...用于引入最近谈到的话题，以引起读者的关注。 写作手法上，第一段最后一句使用疑问句结尾，引起读者兴趣，激活读者的背景知识，同时引出下文。 知结构 本单元的写作项目是写一篇关于“无现金支付”的文章，主要分为三部分： 首段：开门见山，点出论述的话题为无现金支付； 主体：列举正反观点及其理由； 尾段：得出结论或给出自己的观点。 情境任务写作 假定你是李华，前几天你班就“非现金支付”这一话题展开了讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你们讨论的结果，并向你校英文报投稿。内容包括： 1．介绍讨论结果； 2．陈述你的观点。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：冲动消费impulsive consumption ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 明确体裁话题 议论文；非现金支付 确定时态人称 以一般现在时为主；以第三人称为主 布局文章架构 第一段：介绍讨论话题； 第二、三段：介绍讨论观点； 第四段：个人观点。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①非现金支付对客户来说非常方便。 Non-cash payments ________________________________. ②他们不必在购物时携带现金。 ____________________________ while going shopping. ③非现金支付有助于减少客户花费在支付上的时间。 Non-cash payments _____________________ that customers spend on paying. ④其他人认为，老年人用现金支付比用电子设备更容易。 Others think _____________________________________ than with electronic devices. ⑤最重要的是我们应该正确使用它。 ____________________________ we should make proper use of it. are very convenient for customers They don’t have to carry cash help to reduce the time it’s easier for senior citizens to pay with cash The most important thing is that 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑥用because连接句①和句②。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑦用what引导的主语从句改写句⑤。 ___________________________________________________ 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Non-cash payments are very convenient for customers because they don’t have to carry cash while going shopping. What matters most is that we should make proper use of it. 参考范文 Several days ago，our class had a discussion about non-cash payments. Opinions vary on this topic. Some students think non-cash payments benefit us greatly.First of all，non -cash payments are very convenient for customers because they don’t have to carry cash while going shopping.Besides，non-cash payments help to reduce the time that customers spend on paying. However，others think it’s easier for senior citizens to pay with cash than with electronic devices.What’s more，non-cash payments are more likely to cause impulsive consumption. In my opinion，non-cash payments are indeed very convenient for most people.But what matters most is that we should make proper use of it. 精彩素材积累 首段： 1．As for non-cash payments，different people have different opinions. 对于“无现金支付”，不同的人有不同的观点。 2．With the development of economy，non-cash payments have been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. 随着经济的发展，“无现金支付”在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用。 3．Mobile phones are everywhere and sometimes they can be very annoying. 手机到处都是，有时候它们会令人非常烦恼。 主体： 1．①70% of the people(who were) surveyed are satisfied with the non-cash payments. ②Those who are satisfied with the non-cash payments account for 70% of the people surveyed. 在调查中有70%的人对“无现金支付”满意。 2．There are some people who think that cash payments are safer than non-cash payments. 有些人认为现金支付比“无现金支付”更安全。 3．The advantages of non-cash payments are obvious. “无现金支付”的优势很明显。 4．As far as I am concerned，I am in favor of the first view.就我个人而言，我支持第一种观点。 结尾： 1．I believe with the development of non-cash payments，our life will be more convenient. 我相信随着“无现金支付”的发展，我们的生活将会更加便利。 2．Non-cash payments have greatly changed people’s lives in China. 在中国，“无现金支付”极大地改变了人们的生活。 3．With artificial intelligence，travelling in China will be an unforgettable experience.利用人工智能技术，在中国旅行将会是一次难忘的经历。 学以致用 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom听说在中国通过扫描二维码就可以实现非现金支付，他感到不可思议，请你写一封邮件告知他非现金支付在中国的一些情况，内容包括： 1．非现金支付的定义； 2．非现金支付的优点； 3．非现金支付的缺点； 4．你的结论。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Tom， I’m glad to tell you something about non-cash payments in China.______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Non-cash payments are making payments with cards，mobile phones and other electric devices.Some think it provides us with more convenience.What’s more，we can save much time when purchasing on the Internet platform. Besides，we don’t have to worry about getting the fake cash. Others think despite their convenience，it will take more risks protecting your private possessions.For example，we might be monitored while paying for what we have bought.Meanwhile，what if we are in a place without Internet access or our phone battery dies? _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回 In conclusion，non-cash payments are under construction，so it will be more popular in the years to come. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 40分写作限时练 返回 Ⅰ.应用文写作(共15分) (2024·安徽省宿州市高二下期中) 假定你是校学生会主席李华，现在你的家乡正在争创全国文明城市，请你围绕“从自身做起，共创文明城市”这一主题，在你校英文报上发一封倡议书，要点如下： 1．倡议目的； 2．具体内容。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：全国文明城市 National Civilized City ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Dear friends， As we all know，our hometown is bidding for the title “National Civilized City”.This is not only a great honor but also a responsibility that each one of us shares.So it is strongly advocated that we start from ourselves and create a civilized city. First，we are supposed to treat others politely and behave in a civilized way. Besides，participate in litter cleanups and ensure that our school and surrounding areas are kept tidy.Dispose of waste properly and recycle whenever possible. Moreover，we must follow traffic rules at all times to keep safe. Let’s commit ourselves to making our hometown a better place.Your participation counts. The Students’ Union Ⅱ.读后续写(共25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·福建省福州市高二下期中) My mother believed in using things up.Last year，our cornfield had a bad harvest because birds feasted on the crops.It was probably then that Mom’s frugality(节俭) became even more extraordinary.She began keeping everything that seemed useless in the attic(阁楼)—worn-out clothes，old sheets，broken umbrellas，and some other old items.Mom’s favorite saying was “waste not，want not”.My brother Josh and I weren’t sure what that meant until the “Affair of the Scarecrow(稻草人)”，which，as it later became known，left a lasting impression on us. The story began with a pretty hat that Mom received as a gift to protect her from the sun.However，Josh and I could see that Mom’s frugal nature and fashion sense were in battle.Mom really didn’t want to get rid of the hat—it was new and had a lot of use left in it—but neither could she stand wearing it.She tried to take off the fancy decorations，but they were stuck on tight.She’d have to find some other solution. Josh and I watched as Mom headed upstairs to the attic with the hat. “Waste not，want not，”she called back down.We heard boxes being moved around.Moments later，Mom leaned out，holding a flour bag full of straw，and with a mysterious smile，she placed the hat on it. “What is that for？” I asked，confused.“A scarecrow！” Mom exclaimed.“But not a good one yet.It needs a strong body to stand firm in the field，” she said with a frown.“And it doesn’t look scary enough，” Josh remarked.I had to admit that Josh，though younger than I was，could sometimes be more imaginative.Josh and I turned to each other，searching for a good idea.Soon enough，Josh’s eyes lit up with inspiration. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 “Come with me！”Josh called out.______________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next instant，he raced upstairs with lightning speed.I hurried to follow him into the attic，where we began a thorough search.Mom was amused by our excitement when we found the broken umbrellas and used them as the backbone of the scarecrow.After that，we sorted out some old sheets and tied them on.The scarecrow now looked even scarier.We dragged our creation to the cornfield and planted it firmly in the mud，our hearts full of hope. 返回 In the days that followed，the scarecrow stood tall.__________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Serving as a silent guardian，it successfully scared the birds away.Under its watchful eyes，our cornfield flourished this year.To our amazement，Mom’s useless things from the attic had come together to create something extraordinary.As we enjoyed a good harvest，her favorite saying，“waste not，want not”，echoed in our hearts.The “Affair of the Scarecrow” has taught us the value of creatively transforming seemingly useless items into treasure，making us aware that frugality is a good quality after all. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $$