2025届高考英语读后续写练习 恐惧阴影下，与狗的艰难相处 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 恐惧阴影下，与狗的艰难相处 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 “Mary! Come and see what I have brought home!” My father opened the door and shouted cheerfully. “Is it a dog?” I asked when I saw him hugging a huge creature in his arms. My father nodded and put the dog on the floor. When it ran toward me, I pressed my hands tightly over my mouth to hold back a scream. I turned around and rushed back to my room. I locked up the door as soon as I could. Since I was attacked by a wild dog two months ago, I had been living in constant fear of dogs. I was confused why my father was so happy to bring home such a scary thing. So I decided to stay in my room until the dog was gone. After what seemed like ages, I heard the door open and shut. 4 4 续写原文 “Finally!” I breathed in relief and opened the door cautiously. To my shock, I felt something wet touching my foot. It was the dog! I froze there, as if my feet were rooted to the ground. When I regained my senses, I screamed, “Daddy! It is the dog! Help! It wants to bite me! Get it away from me!” My father was standing by the other side of the door，folding his arms and encouraged me,“It is not going to eat you! Mary, don’t be so scared. Go on! Touch it!” I tried my best to control my fear and bent down to touch the dog. But I could not do it due to my constant and uncontrollable shaking. “Never! I will never touch that dirty thing! Take it away!” I shouted. My father turned a deaf ear to my request. In despair, I picked up a tennis ball that happened to be on the floor and threw it at the dog. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1：The ball missed the target. Paragraph 2： But the next moment I was reminded of the awful experience. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 两个月前被野狗袭击后，“我” 对狗充满恐惧。一天，父亲兴高采烈抱回一只狗，“我” 惊恐万分，躲进房间。以为狗离开后开门，却发现狗还在，“我” 尖叫求助，父亲鼓励 “我” 触摸狗，“我” 因恐惧无法做到。绝望之下，“我” 捡起地上的网球朝狗扔去。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1: The ball missed the target. 球没有击中目标。那只狗被球滚动的声音吸引，兴奋地追逐着球，在客厅里跑来跑去，嘴里还发出欢快的叫声。看到狗这副模样，我心中的恐惧稍稍减轻了一些。它看起来似乎并没有恶意，只是对这个球充满了好奇。父亲在一旁看着，微笑着说：“你看，它很友善，不会伤害你的。” 我鼓起勇气，慢慢地向客厅走去，眼睛一直盯着那只狗。狗玩累了，停下来，嘴里叼着球，摇着尾巴看向我，仿佛在邀请我一起玩。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：But the next moment I was reminded of the awful experience. 但下一刻，我就想起了那次可怕的经历。那只野狗凶狠的眼神和尖锐的牙齿仿佛又出现在我眼前，我的身体开始不由自主地颤抖起来。我往后退了几步，差点摔倒。父亲见状，赶紧走过来扶住我，轻声说：“宝贝，别害怕，这只狗和那只不一样。” 我深吸一口气，努力让自己镇定下来。我看着眼前这只狗，它正无辜地看着我，眼神里充满了友善。我决定再给它一次机会，也给自己一次机会，试着去克服内心的恐惧。于是，我再次缓缓地向狗伸出了手 。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 The ball missed the target. The dog, attracted by the sound of the rolling ball, chased after it excitedly, running around the living room with a happy bark. Seeing the dog's behavior, my fear subsided a bit. It seemed that it had no ill - intention and was just curious about the ball. My father, standing aside, smiled and said, "You see, it's friendly and won't hurt you." Gathering my courage, I walked slowly towards the living room, keeping my eyes fixed on the dog. The dog got tired of playing and stopped, holding the ball in its mouth and wagging its tail at me, as if inviting me to play with it. 13 13 范文呈现 But the next moment I was reminded of the awful experience. The fierce eyes and sharp teeth of the wild dog seemed to appear before my eyes again, and my body began to tremble uncontrollably. I stepped back a few paces and almost fell. My father, noticing this, quickly came over to support me and said softly, "Honey, don't be afraid. This dog is different from that one." Taking a deep breath, I tried my best to calm myself down. Looking at the dog in front of me, it was looking at me innocently with friendly eyes. I decided to give it another chance, and also give myself a chance, to overcome my fear. So, I slowly reached out my hand to the dog again. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 The ball missed the target. Instantly, the dog, lured by the sound of the rolling ball, dashed after it with enthusiasm, dashing around the living room, its jubilant barks filling the air. Witnessing such a scene, my hitherto overwhelming fear began to wane slightly. Evidently, it harbored no malicious intent, merely being captivated by the allure of the ball. My father, standing idly by, wearing a warm smile, remarked, "You see, it's gentle and poses no threat to you." Summoning up my courage, I inched my way towards the living room, my eyes riveted on the dog. Eventually, the dog, fatigued from its energetic pursuit, came to a halt, gripping the ball firmly in its jaws and wagging its tail vigorously, as if beckoning me to engage in a playful interaction. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 But the next moment, memories of that dreadful experience came flooding back. The wild dog's menacing eyes and razor - sharp teeth seemed to materialize right before me, triggering an uncontrollable tremor throughout my body. I stumbled backward a few steps, teetering on the verge of collapse. My father, observing my distress, hastened to my side, offering support and consoling me in a soft voice, "Honey, don't be petrified. This dog is nothing like that ferocious one." Taking a deep, steadying breath, I exerted every effort to compose myself. Gazing intently at the dog before me, I noted its innocent expression and kind eyes. Resolved to give it another chance, as well as to conquer my own fear, I steeled myself and slowly extended my hand towards the dog once more. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$