UNIT 2 Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一篇关于外星人的故事-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义配套教参（译林版2020）

Section Ⅲ　Integrated skills——写一篇关于外星人的故事 [文体感知] 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于外星人的故事。此类写作中，必须通过细致的观察和丰富的想象进行生动形象的描写，以给读者留下深刻的印象。在进行背景描写时，可使用一些形容词来烘托心情。情节是此类故事的核心，务必注意故事中的人物及各种冲突设置。 [写作素材] I was having supper when I caught sight of a shining UFO flying in the sky. 我正在吃晚饭，突然看见一个发光的不明飞行物在天空中飞行。 Out of the UFO came a strange creature with a big head and eyes. 从不明飞行物里出来一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛的奇怪生物。 Frightened by the strange creature，I ran away as fast as I could. 我被那个奇怪的生物吓坏了，飞快地跑开了。 Hardly had he seen me when he smiled and walked toward me. 他一看见我就微笑着向我走来。 It flew so fast that I was almost scared to death. 它飞得那么快，差点把我吓死了。 So fascinated was I by the beautiful scene of space that I forgot to return to the earth. 我被太空美丽的景色迷住了，以至于我忘记了回到地球。 What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was! 这是一次多么美好和难忘的经历啊！ Hope you can have a knowledge of the life in space. 希望你能了解太空生活。 As far as I am concerned，life in space is inconvenient but interesting. 在我看来，太空生活很不方便，但很有趣。 In my opinion，living in space will be turned into reality one day. 在我看来，太空生活总有一天会变成现实。 [典题示例] 假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇周记，记述你遇到外星人的一次经历。内容如下： 1．周四晚遇到一个外星人(个子矮、头和眼睛很大、棕色皮肤)； 2．乘坐飞碟，遨游太空，欣赏夜景； 3．你的感受。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　学会审题谋篇 写作类型 记叙文 人称时态 以第一人称为主；以一般过去时为主 写作要点 第一段：简述事件 第二段：详述过程 第三段：表达感受 第二步　保基础分——会写基本句 1．我正在做作业的时候，突然看到一个闪闪发光的UFO在天空中越来越近，最终降落在地面上。 I_was_doing_my_homework_when_suddenly I caught sight of a shining UFO in the sky coming nearer and nearer and eventually landed on the ground. 2．然后一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛，棕色皮肤的很矮的外星人从里面出来了。 Then a very short alien_with_a_big_head_and_eyes_and_brown_skin came out of it. 3．他一看见我，就向我挥手，邀请我乘飞碟去旅行。 As_soon_as_he_saw_me，he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO. 4．它飞得如此之快，以至于我们很快就进入了太空。 It flew so_fast_that we were in space in a short time. 5．从不明飞行物向外看，我看到了我们生活的美丽的蓝色地球和其他闪亮的星星在黑暗的空间里转动。 Looking_out_of_the_UFO，I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space. 6．大概过了一个小时，我请求外星人把我送到地球上去。 After_what_seemed_an_hour，I asked the alien to send me to the earth. 7．这是一次多么美好和难忘的经历啊！ What_a_wonderful_and_unforgettable_experience_it was! 第三步　创设亮点——试写高级句 8．将句2升级为倒装句 Then_out_of_it_came_a_very_short_alien_with_a_big_head_and_eyes_and_brown_skin. 9．将句3用hardly...when...升级为倒装句 Hardly_had_he_seen_me_when_he_waved_to_me_and_invited_me_to_go_travelling_in_the_UFO. 第四步　衔接成篇得高分 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 On Thursday evening，I was doing my homework when suddenly I caught sight of a shining UFO in the sky coming nearer and nearer and eventually landed on the ground.Then out of it came a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin. Hardly had he seen me when he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO and I agreed.Then we hurried into the UFO and then it took off from the ground.It flew so fast that we were in space in a short time.Looking out of the UFO，I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space.What a fantastic scene! After what seemed an hour，I asked the alien to send me to the earth. What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was！ 课时精练(七)　Section Ⅲ　Integrated skills——写一篇关于外星人的故事 (本栏目内容，在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订！) Ⅰ.完形填空 For thousands of millions of years the moon has been going round the earth.During this time，the moon has been the only satellite of the earth.Today，__1__，the earth has many other satellites all __2__ by man.These man­made satellites are very much smaller than the moon.However，some of them will still be going __3__ the earth thousands of years from now. Man­made satellites do not __4__ because they are going too fast to do so.As they speed along，they __5__ to go straight off into space.They __6__ out of the earth，or its gravity，which __7__them from doing this.As a result，they travel in an orbit round the earth. If a man­made satellite travels about at a certain height，it can keep going __8__ round the earth，just like the moon.This is __9__ it is above the atmosphere，and there is nothing to __10__ it down.If it travels __11__ than that，it will be slowed down so much that it will __12__ the earth. Men have launched spaceships to the moon and to the two nearest planets：Mars(火星) and Venus(金星).By putting a camera on __13__ the spaceship to the moon，men have been able to take photographs of the other side of the moon.This side is always __14__ from us as the moon circles the earth.The __15__ were later transmitted by radio to the earth.They showed that the other side of the moon is very much the same as the side that turns towards us. 语篇解读　本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了在人造卫星出现之前，月亮是地球唯一的卫星。人造卫星能在太空中正常运转的原因是它位于大气之上，如果运行高度下降的话，卫星就会掉下来。 1．A．besides　 B．however C．though　 D．therefore B　[上文说月亮是地球唯一的卫星，而下文说后来有了很多别的卫星，所以是转折关系。副词though表示“可是，然而”，放在句中时，其前后没有逗号。however“然而”放在句中时，前后可以有逗号。] 2．A．assumed　 B．discovered C．made　 D．foreseen C　[从下文中的“These man­made satellites...”可知，这些卫星是人造的，也就是“made by man”。] 3．A．through　 B．round C．behind　 D．after B　[联系关键词still“仍然”，再联系上文中的“going round the earth”可知，这些人造卫星仍然会绕着地球转。] 4．A．fall　 B．rise C．burst　 D．pause A　[从下文内容可知，此处是讲述人造卫星不会落下来的原因。] 5．A．decide　 B．wish C．plan　 D．tend D　[当卫星加速时，卫星的运动趋势就是冲入太空。] 6．A．pull　 B．reach C．bring　 D．launch A　[它们会冲出地球，也就是脱离地球引力。pull out意为“冲出，离开”。] 7．A．protects　 B．prevents C．keeps　 D．discourages B　[地球引力的作用是阻止人造卫星冲出地球。] 8．A．in and out　 B．on and on C．to and from　 D．up and down B　[从上文内容可知，如果卫星在一定高度运行，就能持续运转。on and on“一直，持续”，符合文意。] 9．A．because　 B．how C．where　 D．when A　[本句讲述的是卫星正常运转的原因。] 10．A．hand　 B．pass C．slow　 D．bring C　[卫星正常运转的原因就是在大气层之上，没有东西会降低卫星的运行速度，下一句中的“it will be slowed down”是很好的提示。] 11．A．higher　 B．longer C．farther　 D．lower D　[从上文我们知道卫星正常运转，不会落下来就是因为它的运行高度，所以，如果运行高度下降，卫星就不能正常运转。] 12．A．search for　 B．fall to C．go after　 D．knock at B　[从本段我们可以看出，如果运行高度下降的话，卫星就会掉下来。] 13．A．board　 B．average C．earth　 D．end A　[通过把照相机安装在飞船上可以拍照。on board在船(火车、飞机等)上，符合文意。] 14．A．holy　 B．hidden C．different　 D．stable B　[根据常识可知月亮有一面是永远背对着我们的，所以不被我们看到。hidden隐藏的，难以看见的。] 15．A．rocks　 B．speeches C．sounds　 D．photos D　[上文提到了在飞船上安装照相机，所以传回来的是照片。] Ⅱ.应用文写作 请你根据下列提示写一篇关于遇到外星人的经历。 1．在学校后面的山上玩，发现了一个飞碟； 2．外星人非常矮，没有头发，有两只长耳朵； 3．外星人看见我们非常吃惊，我们对他们微笑，并做了一个拥抱的动作。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 I，together with my classmate，went to the hill behind our school after class yesterday.To our surprise，we found a UFO.Two aliens stood beside.Different from our imagination，aliens were really short.They didn’t have hair but two long ears.Their puppy eyes made them look cute and kind.They seemed shocked，but we were not scared.We smiled at them and tried to hug them.They smiled back. Though we don’t understand their language，I think we still could communicate with them. Ⅲ.读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As I was coming into Middle School，Grade Six，I was really excited because my friend Jennifer was going to be in the same Middle School as me! At first things were great，she introduced me to her friend，Amy and we had lots of fun together.Then things started to change.Jennifer was very controlling: I couldn’t make new friends，because if I hung out with different people，she would decide that I was “mad at her and Amy”．So I didn’t make new friends，and pretty soon being Jennifer’s friend became a battle between Amy and me. Jennifer wanted to be the “leader” of our little group.Amy and I were never partners in class projects or gym；it was always，“Who gets the privilege(荣耀)of being Jennifer’s partner.” It was either Jennifer liked me and she left Amy out or Jennifer liked Amy and she left me out.Amy and I both wanted to be Jennifer’s number one.Being Jennifer’s friend became the most important thing in the world. I always waited for Jennifer and Amy after classes，so we could walk together to our next class.Amy and Jennifer chatted by Jennifer’s desk as Jennifer packed her books up and I waited by the door.Sometimes when they left，they’d walk right past me.No “Thanks for waiting”．No “Sorry we took so long”．It was as if they couldn’t even see me.Yet I still waited after every single class. Most of the time we gossiped(传播流言蜚语)about people，and I soon realized that nobody was good enough for Jennifer.Jennifer had a list of bad things about everybody，even Amy.And I’m sure she had a list of bad things about me，too.After months of living through school this way，I had really changed.I was moody，depressed，lonely，and I didn’t smile much.I spent lots of days trying not to cry.I felt so left out. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1： Finally，near the end of the school year，I got sick of being treated so poorly._________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： I’m in Grade Seven now，and I have tons of friends.______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Paragraph 1： Finally，near the end of the school year，I got sick of being treated so poorly.I was sick of getting into battle for friendship.I stopped sitting with Jennifer at lunch and waiting for her after class.It didn’t take long: Jennifer quickly announced that I was “mad at her”．I said，“I’m not mad，I just think I need to make some more friends.” But with Jennifer it’s all or nothing.If you didn’t worship her，she was convinced you were mad at her.So our friendship fell to pieces. Paragraph 2： I’m in Grade Seven now，and I have tons of friends.I’ve found many girls Jennifer classified as “mean” were the sweetest people in the world.We have fun together and I love them all to bits.It amazes me how easy our friendship is.There’s no struggling to be on top—we’re all equal.It doesn’t hurt my feelings or make me feel alone.I wish Jennifer could understand.I still want to be friends with her，but I can’t limit myself to one friendship.It’s better to have ten or twenty friends than just one best friend. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$