UNIT 2 Section Ⅴ Using Language—Reading for writing-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义配套教参（人教版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Using Language—Reading for writing Read the passage and choose the best answers 1．What're the two texts mainly about? A．An introduction of the summer camp. B．Something about being sleepy. C．Something about some sports. D．Two students' letters to the editor about the changes of their lifestyles. 2．Before Wang Lu attended the summer camp，how did she feel? A．She felt energetic. B．She felt dynamic. C．She felt sleepy and dizzy. D．She felt passionate. 3．What did Wang Lu do after she made up her mind to eat nothing with sugar? A．She didn't go out to eat. B．When she went out with friends，she brought snacks that didn't have any added sugar. C.She only bought sweets once in a while. D．She made a survey about the dangers of sugar. 4．How did George relax himself when he felt stressed out after starting high school? A．By exercising. B．By climbing. C．By playing computer games. D．By meeting new friends. 5．Who are most likely to be interested in the letters? A．Young students who have similar problems. B．Young couples who have children attending school. C．Journalists who want to cover the latest events. D．Editors who want to change their own lifestyles. 答案：1－5　DCBCA …………………………………………………………………………………◎ Dear Editor， [1]After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices，I realised I hardly ever felt well，either physically or mentally.I often felt sleepy and dizzy，and lacked passion.Most worrying，though，I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches，too. [2]At the end of the camp I heard，“Change the world by changing yourself.” This stimulated my motivation.A dentist once examined me and told me that too much sugar in my meals had damaged my teeth and health.I made up my mind to change two things in my life：to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly. [3]After that I stopped buying all the sweets，biscuits，and sugary drinks that I used to have every day.Whenever I went out with friends，I brought snacks from home，things that didn't have any added sugar：fruit，nuts，dried meat，etc. [4]My exercise was very simple：I went outside every day for at least 30 minutes and did something active.Sometimes I played table tennis or badminton with my cousins.Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood，or just took a long walk. [5]The results have been fantastic.I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever，in both body and mind.I sleep soundly at night now.I no longer suffer from a flu virus or toothaches either.Best of all，in my opinion，is how I feel about myself.I feel like I'm in control of my own life.To make choices about myself is within my own power.I CAN change myself.I just need to try. Yours truly， Wang Lu Dear Editor， [1]As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices，I started to analyse my choices，especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life. [2]After starting high school，I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games.I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night.Playing was fun，but I felt even more worn out afterwards! So after the camp，I realised that it was very，very important to adjust my lifestyle.I decided to take control of my life and find other ways to relax. [3]It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I'm mad for them.However，I realised that to succeed in quitting，I had to replace it with something else.So I thought about what to try.Rock climbing，bowling，watching comedies，and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. [4]Now my dad and I go rock climbing together monthly! It has enhanced the quality of my life，improving my health and increasing my happiness.I get refreshed through climbing，spend more time with my dad，and get to meet new friends. [5]After six months of trying out new ways of relaxing，I feel much more energetic.I feel that I can change myself for the better.And if that's true for me，then it might truly be possible to change the world for the better.As Gandhi said，“Be the change you want to see in the world.” Sincerely， George Fielding ◎………………………………………………………………………………… 学语言 1．多种时态的综合运用，充分体现了文章的层次感，凸显了事件发展的先后顺序，如第一封书信中的前四段使用了一般过去时，呈现了过去发生的事情；第五段首句使用了现在完成时，体现了作者采取措施后 学生用书第58页 的效果；同时该段中较多地使用了一般现在时，叙述了作者现在的状况。 2．两封书信中都含有较为复杂的句式。作者借用这些句式准确地描述了事件的发生、发展及结果。例如第二封书信的第一段就是一个复合句，as引导从句表示事件发生的时间，动词analyse后接三种不同形式的宾语。 3．两封书信中大量的修饰语让文章血肉丰满，如Most worrying，especially，at least，very，very important等。 4．though，or，however，then，instead等词汇的使用让文章的过渡衔接自然。 5．第二封书信最后一段借助名人名言结尾是一个显著的亮点。 知结构 1．这两篇文章兼具书信和记叙文的体裁特点。首先，它具备书信的基本构成要素，包括称呼(salutation，即Dear Editor)、正文(body，均为五段)、信尾敬语(complimentary close，即Yours truly和 Sincerely)和署名(signature，即 Wang Lu和 George Fielding)。 2．这两封信正文部分的五段均为记叙文写法。两位作者以第一人称的方式详述了自己曾面临的问题、为解决问题做出的决定、实施的举措以及产生的积极结果。作者以时间为主线叙述事件发生的经过，即从过 学生用书第59页 去的不健康或亚健康状态，经过积极的调整，达到现在的身心健康状态。在正文部分的结尾，作者都写了自己的感悟，总结起来就是：做自己的主人，改变自己，我做，我能！这些内容能够激励读者勇于改变自己，追求美好的生活。 3．正文中还有两条暗线，第一条是作者改变前后的身心状态的对比，第二条是前后两种不同生活方式的对比。这两种对比能够让读者感受改变带来的好处，从而下定决心去改变自己的不良生活方式。 [情境任务写作] 假定你是李华，请你给某报社编辑写一封信，介绍你改变某个不良生活方式的过程及其带来的影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Editor， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua [仿写程序步骤] 一仿结构布局合理 第一段：写信的目的 第二段：自己前后的变化 第三段：表达祝愿 二仿语言规范美观 1．根据提示写出写信的目的 (1)我写信是想告诉你我生活方式的变化。(现在进行时；change；lifestyle) I_am_writing_to_tell_you_the_changes_of_my_lifestyle. 2．根据提示使用一般过去时介绍以前存在的问题 (2)过去我喜欢垃圾食品。(junk food) In_the_past_I_liked_junk_food. (3)我过去超重。(overweight) In_the_past_I_was_overweight. 3．根据提示使用恰当的修饰语表达针对问题的决定 (4)我对匀称身材的热情驱使我改变我的生活方式。 My great passion for a_well­shaped_body drove me to change my lifestyle. (5)我的计划是改变不合理的饮食和定期锻炼。 My plan is to change my improper diet and exercise regularly． 学生用书第60页 4.根据提示介绍针对问题采取的行动 (6)在健身房锻炼是我的惯常做法。(动词­ing形式短语作主语；work out；routine) Working_out_in_the_gym_is_my_routine. (7)保持均衡的饮食对我来说是必须做的事情。(形式主语it；a must) It_is_a_must_for_me_to_keep_a_balanced_diet. 5．使用不同的时态介绍现在的状况 (8)我的计划仅仅进行了几个月。(现在完成进行时；carry out one's plan) I_have_only_been_carrying_out_my_plan_for_several_months. (9)我现在开始感觉好多了。(现在进行时) I'm_now_starting_to_feel_better. (10)我有信心达到我的目标。(一般现在时；一般将来时) I_feel_confident_that_I_will_reach_my_goal. 三仿句式高级表达 (11)用and therefore连接句(2)和句(3) In_the_past_I_liked_junk_food_and_therefore_I_was_overweight. (12)用while连接句(6)和句(7) Working_out_in_the_gym_is_my_routine_while_it_is_a_must_for_me_to_keep_a_balanced_diet. (13)用but连接句(8)和句(9) I_have_only_been_carrying_out_my_plan_for_several_months，but_I'm_now_starting_to feel_better. 四仿教材连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Editor， I am writing to tell you the changes of my lifestyle. In the past I liked junk food and therefore I was overweight.My great passion for a well­shaped body drove me to change my lifestyle.My plan is to change my improper diet and exercise regularly.Working out in the gym is my routine while it is a must for me to keep a balanced diet.I have only been carrying out my plan for several months，but I'm now starting to feel better.I feel confident that I will reach my goal. Best wishes. Yours sincerely， Li Hua [精彩素材积累] (一)话题优词 1．overweight　　　　　　 超重 2．stay up late 熬夜 3．keep away from 远离 4．keep fit 保持健康 5．take exercise 锻炼身体 6．build up 增强 7．on diet 节食 8．have a balanced diet 均衡饮食 9．under stress 在压力下 10．relax oneself 自我放松 11．form a habit of 养成……的习惯 12．be beneficial to 对……有益 (二)话题亮句 首段：点明写信的目的 1. Learning that you are worried about your health，I'd like to write to tell you something about how to keep healthy. 得知你担心自己的健康，我想写信告诉你关于如何保持健康的事情。 2．I'm writing to tell you how to live a healthy life. 我写信想告诉你如何过健康的生活。 中段：具体介绍如何过健康的生活 1. It would be a good idea if we could take meals regularly and slowly. 如果我们可以有规律地、慢慢地吃饭，这会是个好主意。 2．Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body. 多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果对我们的身体很有好处。 3．You can do some morning exercises or only take a short walk in the morning. 你可以做一些晨练，或者只是在早晨散散步。 4. To keep healthy，we should try to be in good mood each day. 为了保持健康，我们应该尽量每天保持好心情。 学生用书第61页 5.Having a balanced diet is of great benefit to us. 均衡饮食对我们有很大益处。 6．Only by having a healthy lifestyle can you stay away from illnesses. 只有拥有健康的生活方式，你才能远离疾病。 尾段：表达期望和祝愿 1．I hope that you can have a healthy body. 我希望你能拥有一个健康的身体。 2．I hope that my advice will be of help to you. 我希望我的建议对你能有帮助。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$