读后续写练习+加伦的寻书之旅：爱与成长的故事 课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 加伦的寻书之旅：爱与成长的故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Every morning before going to school, Galen would stand in front of their bookshelf in the living room, focusing his sights on one book titled “The Greatest Explorer That Never Was”. It was kept on the top shelf. His mom would always read it to him when he was feeling sad. And lately, he’d always been feeling sad. His mom died. He would try to think of a way to get the book. He’d thought about asking his dad for help but his dad had been spending more time in his office. Galen was on his own for this one and he saw it as a challenge he needed to overcome. This was his test. 4 4 续写原文 At school, he would draw up plans on how he would do it. First, he planned on using the ladder they kept in the shed(小屋). So when he got home, he threw his bag on the couch and carried out the plan. But when he had his hands on and tried to carry it, immediately he realized that the plan was a failure-the ladder was too heavy for him to carry to the living room. He left the shed, defeated. He took out the notebook that he’d written his plans on. He crossed out using a ladder. He went to bed that night determined to come up with a new plan that would work. His next plan was to use his mom’s old trampoline(蹦床). Using it would allow him to jump high enough, reach the top of the shelf, grab the book, and land on the ground. He did this about four or five times before deciding that this plan, like the one before, wouldn’t work. 5 5 续写原文 Galen started coming with other plans as the days went on. After the unsuccessful mop and broom plan, he stayed up late that night hatching a new plan, which had a higher success rate than the others. It was to climb to the top of the shelf until he could just take the book. He’d just have to hold on to the sides a little tighter so that he wouldn’t fall off. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：But it wasn’t the easy climb he expected. Paragraph 2： Down to the ground with the book, he turned around to see who the ally (同盟)was. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章围绕小男孩加伦在妈妈去世后，试图获取书架顶层那本妈妈常读给他听的书展开。通过一系列失败的尝试，如用梯子、蹦床、拖把扫帚等，展现了他的坚持与努力。最后爬书架时差点滑落，爸爸的及时出现，不仅揭示了爸爸一直在默默关注他，也为故事画上温暖的句号，体现了亲情的力量以及在困境中成长的主题。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1: But it wasn’t the easy climb he expected. 加伦开始攀爬书架，他小心翼翼地往上爬，双手紧紧抓住书架边缘，双脚努力寻找着力点。然而，书架比他想象中更难攀爬，表面光滑，他的手逐渐开始酸痛，汗水也浸湿了他的额头。随着高度的增加，他心中的恐惧也在加剧，但对那本书的渴望支撑着他继续向上。就在他快要接近目标时，突然脚下一滑，身体开始快速下滑，他惊恐地闭上双眼，以为自己要重重摔在地上。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Down to the ground with the book, he turned around to see who the ally (同盟)was. 钧一发之际，一双有力的大手稳稳地托住了他。加伦缓缓睁开眼睛，看到是爸爸，眼中满是惊喜与安心。爸爸将他抱到地上，轻声安慰着他。原来，爸爸这段时间虽然忙碌，但一直留意着加伦的举动。看着手中的书，加伦心中感慨万千。此后，加伦和爸爸的关系更加紧密，他们一起在对妈妈的回忆中，慢慢走出悲伤，相互扶持着继续前行。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 When Galen started climbing the bookshelf, he was extremely cautious. With his hands firmly grasping the edges of the bookshelf and his feet struggling to find stable points, he made his way up bit by bit. However, the bookshelf was much more slippery than he had expected. His hands began to ache, and sweat rolled down his forehead. As he climbed higher, fear welled up inside him. But his strong desire for the book kept him going. Just as he was about to reach the book, his foot slipped suddenly, and he started sliding down rapidly. He closed his eyes in horror, thinking he was about to fall heavily to the ground. 14 14 范文呈现 At the very moment, a pair of strong hands caught him firmly. Galen slowly opened his eyes and was overjoyed to see his dad. His dad carried him gently to the ground and comforted him softly. It turned out that although his dad had been busy, he had been paying attention to Galen's actions all the time. Looking at the book in his hand, Galen felt a flood of emotions. From then on, Galen and his dad became closer. They gradually healed from the grief in the memories of his mom, supporting each other and moving forward. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 But it wasn’t the easy climb he expected. As Galen started his arduous journey up the bookshelf, his hands gripping the sides tightly, he quickly encountered difficulties. The bookshelf, which was smooth and offered little grip, made the task far more challenging. With every inch he ascended, his hands ached unbearably, and sweat streamed down his face. Fear crept in as he got higher, yet it was the book, the very one that his mother used to read to him, that kept him motivated. Just when he was on the verge of reaching it, his foot slipped, and down he tumbled, eyes closed in despair, bracing for the impact. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Down to the ground with the book, he turned around to see who the ally was. It was his father, whose strong arms caught him in the nick of time. His father, who had been seemingly engrossed in work, had actually been watching over him all along. Only then did Galen realize how much his father cared. Holding the book close, Galen felt a sense of comfort and security. From that moment on, their bond grew stronger as they began to heal together, drawing strength from the memories of his mother. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$