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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题
03-3(厉行节约)“同题异练”
所谓“同题异练”是指:要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说:针对同一个话题或题目,从不同的角度命题,要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题,积累更多的素材和灵感,提升思维的灵活性,激发写作的创造力,快速提高写作能力,以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。
本专题的话题是“厉行节约”,在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。
一是要弄清写作文体:认真审题,弄清写作文体,是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为:非书信体的演讲、倡议书、投稿、通知以及报道等。
二是要谋划篇章结构:一般来说,我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作):
三是要打开写作思路:这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用
能力的重要题型之一,近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而,许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外,思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题,笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路:①浪费现象的列举(常见的有水、电、粮食等的浪费<顺便谈谈其所带来的危害>);②厉行节约的措施(宣传发动,统一认识,强化意识;组织或开展有关活动,付诸行动);③活动后的总结、评价或反思。
另外,建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充
实与拓展)。
(整合学科网有关资源)假定你是李华,你校将举办以“Clear Your Plate Campaign”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿。
内容包括:1. 食物浪费的现状及危害;
2. 提出解决办法;
3. 呼吁大家共同行动。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【简析】
本篇属于非书信体的演讲稿的写作。要求考生以“Clear Your Plate Campaign”为主题写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:食物浪费的现状及危害;提出解决办法;呼吁大家共同行动。本篇写作的重点是对食物浪费的现状及危害的叙述和问题的解决办法(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就这两个方面提供不同的写作内容。
1.Wasting food has become a big concern all over the country. Based on a survey, We Chinese waste as much as 2000 billion yuan food a year, which equals to one year’s food of more than two billion people. We also witness serious food waste at our school dining room.
As a result, I think it necessary to popularize “Clean Your Plate” campaign and change our bad table culture. For example, we should order a proper amount of foods and try our best to eat up. What’s more, when the dinner is finished, we can take home almost all foods left.
2. Recently, we have noticed that food waste in our school is very serious. Many students leave a certain amount of food in their plates. What’s worse, some even leave the food untouched.
It is high time that we took measures to fight against wasting. Here is what we can do. Firstly, we might as well take active part in the activities our school carries out to arouse our awareness of saving. Therefore, we will form the habit of saving. Besides, relevant rules and regulations are supposed to be observed strictly such as “eating up all the food we take in our plates”.
3. It can’t be ignored that food waste commonly exists in the canteen of our school. Piles of leftovers are thrown away every day, which makes my heart ache terribly. However, many students are unconscious of their improper behaviour.
With the improvement of living standard, hunger appears to be far away from us, but we shouldn’t forget that millions of people are still starving in the world. In addition, for us civilized students, it’s a kind of respect for the farmers’ labour to eat up all food in our plates. Dear fellow students, we can’t allow precious food to be wasted. Let’s cherish every bite of food and refuse any form of waste.
4. As we all know, avoiding waste remains a hot topic. But I’m disappointed to find many students waste food in our school canteen. They fail to eat up the food they ordered and throw away the leftovers, saying it’s not delicious or they just need to stay slim.
Since the pandemic struck, we have witnessed people suffering from hunger to whom we need to lend a helping hand. Therefore, we’re supposed to raise our awareness of the importance of saving food.
5. It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. Here, I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
First, we should have the awareness of saving food. Besides, we ought to treasure grain wherever we are. Last but not least, we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.
6. Recently, I have noticed a horrible thing that astonished me. A number of classmates don’t cherish the food. They
buy much food and only eat a little. Then, they throw the rest into the dustbins.
What a shame! After all, every bite of the food you throw away contains the hard labor of the producers, including the farmers and the workers. Additionally, many people in the world still don’t have enough food to eat. If you can save the food, they will have more chances to have something to eat.
7. As we know, food is very important for human survival. However, wasting food is still seen. I often see many students in our canteen throw food away. Some restaurants always have a lot of food left on their tables. These are disappointing phenomena.
It’s time for us to take action to save food. By saving food, we can help people in the world who are facing food shortages. I call on everyone to pay attention to saving food. When we have dinner out in a restaurant, please remember to order appropriately. Our action will make a big difference.
【完整答案】
Good morning, everyone!
It is my honor to have this chance to deliver a speech on “Clear Your Plate” campaign and present my opinions
on food waste. Recently, we have noticed that food waste in our school is very serious. Many students leave a certain amount of food in their plates. What’s worse, some even leave the food untouched. It is high time that we took measures.
In order to put an end to this phenomenon, we should do as follows. We should behave ourselves only buying what we need, which is of great importance. Besides, each class is expected to arrange for a person to supervise dining situation. Once spotted wasting, he/she will be given an immediate warning.
As we know, thrift is a traditional virtue of our country, so we should carry it forward. We hope that all the
students can take an active part in the “Clean Your Plate” campaign. Let’s try our best together.
Thank you!
1
(江西省部分学校2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考)习近平总书记一直提倡“厉行节约,反对浪费”的社会风尚,多次强调要制止餐饮浪费行为。假设你是学生会主席,请你给校园英语广播写一封“节约粮食,反对浪费”的倡议书。
内容包括:1. 做爱粮、节粮的倡导者;
2. 爱粮节粮的具体措施。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:厉行节约,反对浪费 practice strict economy and combat waste
Dear friends,
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(宁夏固原市隆德县中学2023-2024学年高三上学期第一次月考)你校将以“节约粮食,减少浪费”为主题举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 浪费粮食的现象;
2. 节约粮食的做法;
3. 节约粮食的倡议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Say NO to Food Waste
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(湖南省邵阳市第二中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中)假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部(English Club)正在举办以“节约粮食,反对餐饮浪费”为主题的征文活动。就此,请你写一篇英语短文参赛。
内容包括:1. 描述严重的餐饮浪费现象;
2. 给出减少餐饮浪费的建议;
3. 呼吁节约粮食。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Save Food and Oppose Food Waste
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4
(陕西省宝鸡市宝鸡中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中)最近,某国际学校学生浪费粮食现象严重,假如你是该校学生李华,请你用英文向全校同学发起以“杜绝校园浪费”为主题的倡议,要求同学们在日常生活中珍惜粮食,减少浪费。
内容包括:1. 介绍现状;
2. 杜绝校园浪费的必要性;
3. 提出倡议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80 左右:
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5
(2024年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试<九省联考>)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知。
内容包括:1. 介绍活动目的;
2. 说明参赛要求。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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(河南省TOP二十名校2023-2024学年高三上学期调研八)“世界水日”(World Water Day) 即将到来,请你写一篇英语短文呼吁同学们节约用水。
内容包括:1. 表明意图;
2. 日常做法;
3. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear classmates,
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7
(湖南省益阳市安化县2023-2024学年高二下学期7月期末)假如你是校英文报主编李华,为积极响应节能号召,共建绿色家园,请用英语写一封以“节约用电,珍惜能源”为主题的倡议书。
内容包括:1. 节约用电的意义;
2. 日常节电的措施;
3. 对大家的呼吁。
注意:1. 词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and students,
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The School Newspaper
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(湖北省部分高中联考协作体2022-2023学年高二下学期期中)2023年4月22日是第54个世界地球日(The World Earth Day),旨在呼吁民众重视环境保护。为此,你校正开展“节约能源从我做起”活动。请你以学生身份写一份家庭生活中节约能源的倡议书。
内容包括:1. 家庭浪费现象;
2. 采取的措施;
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students.
Energy waste is a big issue in our life. _______________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li hua
9
(改编自海南省海口嘉勋高级中学2023-2024学年高一上学期开学考试)“节约”是我们中华民族的传统美德。请根据下列提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你身边的浪费现象,介绍你生活中的节约行为,并号召大家一起传承和发扬这一美德。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(湖南省常德市一中2023-2024学年高三上学期第六次月考)上周你校开展了一次为期五天的光盘行动,请你关于此事为学校广播站“The Voice of English”专栏组写一篇报道。
要求如下:1. 这次活动的目的;
2. 这次活动的开展情况;
3. 这次活动的收获。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
“Clean Plate” Campaign
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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题
03-3(厉行节约)“同题异练”
所谓“同题异练”是指:要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说:针对同一个话题或题目,从不同的角度命题,要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题,积累更多的素材和灵感,提升思维的灵活性,激发写作的创造力,快速提高写作能力,以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。
本专题的话题是“厉行节约”,在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。
一是要弄清写作文体:认真审题,弄清写作文体,是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为:非书信体的演讲、倡议书、投稿、通知以及报道等。
二是要谋划篇章结构:一般来说,我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作):
三是要打开写作思路:这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用
能力的重要题型之一,近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而,许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外,思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题,笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路:①浪费现象的列举(常见的有水、电、粮食等的浪费<顺便谈谈其所带来的危害>);②厉行节约的措施(宣传发动,统一认识,强化意识;组织或开展有关活动,付诸行动);③活动后的总结、评价或反思。
另外,建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充
实与拓展)。
(整合学科网有关资源)假定你是李华,你校将举办以“Clear Your Plate Campaign”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿。
内容包括:1. 食物浪费的现状及危害;
2. 提出解决办法;
3. 呼吁大家共同行动。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【简析】
本篇属于非书信体的演讲稿的写作。要求考生以“Clear Your Plate Campaign”为主题写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:食物浪费的现状及危害;提出解决办法;呼吁大家共同行动。本篇写作的重点是对食物浪费的现状及危害的叙述和问题的解决办法(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就这两个方面提供不同的写作内容。
1.Wasting food has become a big concern all over the country. Based on a survey, We Chinese waste as much as 2000 billion yuan food a year, which equals to one year’s food of more than two billion people. We also witness serious food waste at our school dining room.
As a result, I think it necessary to popularize “Clean Your Plate” campaign and change our bad table culture. For example, we should order a proper amount of foods and try our best to eat up. What’s more, when the dinner is finished, we can take home almost all foods left.
2. Recently, we have noticed that food waste in our school is very serious. Many students leave a certain amount of food in their plates. What’s worse, some even leave the food untouched.
It is high time that we took measures to fight against wasting. Here is what we can do. Firstly, we might as well take active part in the activities our school carries out to arouse our awareness of saving. Therefore, we will form the habit of saving. Besides, relevant rules and regulations are supposed to be observed strictly such as “eating up all the food we take in our plates”.
3. It can’t be ignored that food waste commonly exists in the canteen of our school. Piles of leftovers are thrown away every day, which makes my heart ache terribly. However, many students are unconscious of their improper behaviour.
With the improvement of living standard, hunger appears to be far away from us, but we shouldn’t forget that millions of people are still starving in the world. In addition, for us civilized students, it’s a kind of respect for the farmers’ labour to eat up all food in our plates. Dear fellow students, we can’t allow precious food to be wasted. Let’s cherish every bite of food and refuse any form of waste.
4. As we all know, avoiding waste remains a hot topic. But I’m disappointed to find many students waste food in our school canteen. They fail to eat up the food they ordered and throw away the leftovers, saying it’s not delicious or they just need to stay slim.
Since the pandemic struck, we have witnessed people suffering from hunger to whom we need to lend a helping hand. Therefore, we’re supposed to raise our awareness of the importance of saving food.
5. It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. Here, I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
First, we should have the awareness of saving food. Besides, we ought to treasure grain wherever we are. Last but not least, we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.
6. Recently, I have noticed a horrible thing that astonished me. A number of classmates don’t cherish the food. They
buy much food and only eat a little. Then, they throw the rest into the dustbins.
What a shame! After all, every bite of the food you throw away contains the hard labor of the producers, including the farmers and the workers. Additionally, many people in the world still don’t have enough food to eat. If you can save the food, they will have more chances to have something to eat.
7. As we know, food is very important for human survival. However, wasting food is still seen. I often see many students in our canteen throw food away. Some restaurants always have a lot of food left on their tables. These are disappointing phenomena.
It’s time for us to take action to save food. By saving food, we can help people in the world who are facing food shortages. I call on everyone to pay attention to saving food. When we have dinner out in a restaurant, please remember to order appropriately. Our action will make a big difference.
【完整答案】
Good morning, everyone!
It is my honor to have this chance to deliver a speech on “Clear Your Plate” campaign and present my opinions
on food waste. Recently, we have noticed that food waste in our school is very serious. Many students leave a certain amount of food in their plates. What’s worse, some even leave the food untouched. It is high time that we took measures.
In order to put an end to this phenomenon, we should do as follows. We should behave ourselves only buying what we need, which is of great importance. Besides, each class is expected to arrange for a person to supervise dining situation. Once spotted wasting, he/she will be given an immediate warning.
As we know, thrift is a traditional virtue of our country, so we should carry it forward. We hope that all the
students can take an active part in the “Clean Your Plate” campaign. Let’s try our best together.
Thank you!
1
(江西省部分学校2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考)习近平总书记一直提倡“厉行节约,反对浪费”的社会风尚,多次强调要制止餐饮浪费行为。假设你是学生会主席,请你给校园英语广播写一封“节约粮食,反对浪费”的倡议书。
内容包括:1. 做爱粮、节粮的倡导者;
2. 爱粮节粮的具体措施。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:厉行节约,反对浪费 practice strict economy and combat waste
Dear friends,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear friends,
On behalf of the students Union, I’m here to call on everyone to pay attention to the phenomenon of food waste. As President Xi advocates, it is supposed to be a new fashion for all Chinese people to practice strict economy and combat waste. We must bear it in mind that food is a precious resource on our planet and wasting food goes against the basic moral principles.
It’s high time that we took action now. When we have dinner out in a restaurant, please remember to order appropriately, and try to eat up. It’s recommended to promote food saving actions on social media. What’s more, clean plate campaign must be launched on campus to encourage students to clean up their plates.
So, don’t hesitate to join us. Small actions make a big difference.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给校园英语广播写一封“节约粮食,反对浪费”的倡议书。
要点如下:1. 做爱粮、节粮的倡导者;2. 爱粮节粮的具体措施。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
珍贵的:precious→valuable
建议:recommend→suggest
记住某物:bear sth. in mind→keep sth. in mind
另外:what’s more→in addition
2. 句式拓展
原 句:What’s more, clean plate campaign must be launched on campus to encourage students to clean up their plates.
拓展句:What’s more, clean plate campaign, which encourages students to clean up their plates, must be launched on campus.
【高分句型】
1. We must bear it in mind that food is a precious resource on our planet and wasting food goes against the basic
moral principles.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2. It’s high time that we took action now.(运用了虚拟语气)
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(宁夏固原市隆德县中学2023-2024学年高三上学期第一次月考)你校将以“节约粮食,减少浪费”为主题举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 浪费粮食的现象;
2. 节约粮食的做法;
3. 节约粮食的倡议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Say NO to Food Waste
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【答案】
Say No to Food Waste
As we all know, food is very important for human survival. However, wasting food is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which is so disappointing that I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
First, we should have the awareness of saving food. Next, it’s time for us to take action to save food. We ought to treasure grain wherever we are. What is most important is that we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.
I call on everyone to say no to food waste. Saving food is a virtue. Please remember to order appropriately, starting with ourselves as early as possible.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给的内容提示,以“节约粮食,减少浪费”为主题举写一
篇英语征文比赛投稿。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
建议:advice→ suggestion
珍惜:treasure→ cherish
斗争:fight→ struggle
合适地:appropriately→ suitably
2. 句式拓展
原 句:First, we should have the awareness of saving food.
拓展句:First, we should have the awareness that we should save food.
【高分句型】
1. However, wasting food is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even
throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which is so disappointing that I’d like to give some advice on
reducing food waste.(运用了that引导的同位语从句;which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. What is most important is that we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.
(运用了what引导的主语从句;that引导的表语从句)
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(湖南省邵阳市第二中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中)假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部(English Club)正在举办以“节约粮食,反对餐饮浪费”为主题的征文活动。就此,请你写一篇英语短文参赛。
内容包括:1. 描述严重的餐饮浪费现象;
2. 给出减少餐饮浪费的建议;
3. 呼吁节约粮食。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Save Food and Oppose Food Waste
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【答案】
Save Food and Oppose Food Waste
It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. Here, I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste. .
First, we should have the awareness of saving food. Besides, we ought to treasure grain wherever we are. Last but not least, we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.
Just as the saying goes, “Saving is earning.” Saving food is a virtue. So let's act now to save food as much as possible.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“节约粮食,反对餐饮浪费”为主题写一篇征文参加比赛。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
常见的:common→general
导致:cause→lead to/result in/contribute to
减少:reduce→decrease
意识:awareness→understanding
2. 句式拓展
原 句:So let’s act now to save food as much as possible.
拓展句:Therefore, let’s do whatever we can to save food.
原 句:First, we should have the awareness of saving food.
拓展句:We should have the awareness that we should save food。
【高分句型1】
It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. 使用了it形式主语,that引导主语从句,which引导定语从句
【高分句型2】
Just as the saying goes, “Saving is earning.”使用了as引导的定语从句
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(陕西省宝鸡市宝鸡中学2023-2024学年高二上学期期中)最近,某国际学校学生浪费粮食现象严重,假如你是该校学生李华,请你用英文向全校同学发起以“杜绝校园浪费”为主题的倡议,要求同学们在日常生活中珍惜粮食,减少浪费。
内容包括:1. 介绍现状;
2. 杜绝校园浪费的必要性;
3. 提出倡议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80 左右:
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
As we all know, avoiding waste remains a hot topic. But I’m disappointed to find many students waste food in our school canteen. They fail to eat up the food they ordered and throw away the leftovers, saying it’s not delicious or they just need to stay slim.
Since the pandemic struck, we have witnessed people suffering from hunger to whom we need to lend a helping hand. Therefore, we’re supposed to raise our awareness of the importance of saving food.
Why not make your contributions to our country and stop wasting food, money and resources?
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于英文。要求考生就“杜绝校园食物浪费”写一篇倡议书。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
学校餐厅:school canteen → school dining room
可口的:delicious → to one’s taste
应该:be supposed to → ought to
做贡献:contribute to → make contributions to
2. 句式拓展
原 句:They fail to eat up the food they ordered and throw away the leftovers saying it’s not delicious or they just need to stay slim.
拓展句:They fail to eat up the food they ordered because they find it’s not to their taste or they just want to lose weight.
【高分句型】
1. Since the pandemic struck, we have witnessed people suffering from hunger whom we need to lend a helping
hand.(运用了since 引导的时间状语从句,现在分词作后置定语,以及介词+关系代词引导定语从句)
2. They fail to eat up the food they ordered and throw away the leftovers, saying it’s not delicious or they just
need to stay slim.(运用了省略that的定语从句,现在分词作状语)
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(2024年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试<九省联考>)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知。
内容包括:1. 介绍活动目的;
2. 说明参赛要求。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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【答案】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文
比赛写一则活动通知。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
集中:focus on→concentrate on
鼓励:encourage→hearten
主题:theme→topic
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing
how we can contribute to its reduction.
拓展句:Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, which should focus on the theme of food waste
and show how we can contribute to its reduction.
【高分句型】
1. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了动名词作宾语)
2. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how
we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
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(河南省TOP二十名校2023-2024学年高三上学期调研八)“世界水日”(World Water Day) 即将到来,请你写一篇英语短文呼吁同学们节约用水。
内容包括:1. 表明意图;
2. 日常做法;
3. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear classmates,
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【答案】
Dear classmates,
With World Water Day approaching, I am writing to appeal to us students to save water.
As is well known, water resources are limited and we can’t live without water. Therefore, we should take action to save water in our daily life. To begin with, after washing our faces and hands, turn off the water tap. Additionally, it’s a great idea to collect used water to water flowers or other plants.
Obviously, it’s time for us to protect water resources from being wasted. I believe we can make a difference no matter how small our acts are.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。“世界水日”(World Water Day)即将到来,请你写一篇英语短文呼吁同
学们节约用水。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
临近:approach→around the corner
首先:to begin with→first of all
采取措施做某事:take action to do→take measures to do
显然:obviously→apparently
2. 句式拓展
原 句:With World Water Day approaching, I am writing to appeal to us students to save water.
拓展句:Since World Water Day is drawing near, I am writing to appeal to us students to save water.
【高分句型】
1. With World Water Day approaching, I am writing to appeal to us students to save water.
(运用了with的复合结构)
2. I believe we can make a difference no matter how small our acts are. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
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(湖南省益阳市安化县2023-2024学年高二下学期7月期末)假如你是校英文报主编李华,为积极响应节能号召,共建绿色家园,请用英语写一封以“节约用电,珍惜能源”为主题的倡议书。
内容包括:1. 节约用电的意义;
2. 日常节电的措施;
3. 对大家的呼吁。
注意:1. 词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and students,
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The School Newspaper
【答案】
Dear teachers and students,
There is no denying that electricity plays a great role in our life. However, it is being consumed too much, which is a waste of money and contributes to global warming. Therefore, as the chief editor of our school newspaper, I am writing to call on everyone to save electricity.
First of all, the simplest way to save electricity is to turn off lights whenever you leave a room. Besides, open up your curtains and let the sun shine in. Using natural light whenever possible instead of artificial light can greatly reduce the amount of electricity you use during the day. Last but not least, it is advisable to replace outdated energy-consuming appliances with energy-efficient ones, which saves more in the long run.
Every little bit counts. Let’s make joint efforts to save energy and live a green low-carbon life.
The School Newspaper
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封以“节约用电,珍惜能源”为主题的倡议书。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
毫无疑问:there is no denying that→there is no doubt that
然而:however→nevertheless
关闭:turn off→switch off
从长远来看:in the long run→in the long term
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Every little bit counts.
拓展句:It counts that every little bit counts.
【高分句型】
1. However, it is being consumed too much, which is a waste of money and contributes to global warming.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. Using natural light whenever possible instead of artificial light can greatly reduce the amount of electricity you
use during the day. (运用了动名词作主语和省略关系代词的定语从句)
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(湖北省部分高中联考协作体2022-2023学年高二下学期期中)2023年4月22日是第54个世界地球日(The World Earth Day),旨在呼吁民众重视环境保护。为此,你校正开展“节约能源从我做起”活动。请你以学生身份写一份家庭生活中节约能源的倡议书。
内容包括:1. 家庭浪费现象;
2. 采取的措施;
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students.
Energy waste is a big issue in our life. _______________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
Energy waste is a big issue in our life. Wasting electricity at home is something many of us do without realizing it, such as leaving your electronics and appliances plugged in. Besides, do you always take long showers, wash dishes or brush your teeth with water running? Most of us take it for granted that we have plenty of fresh and drinkable water. These are harmful to our environment.
So, let’s start saving energy today. We can improve the reuse rate of household water. Install a low flow shower head and avoid having to use a heater in our home. Instead, we could use solar water heaters. This will definitely help us reduce energy waste and save our money.
Every effort matters. Please take action now.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生以学生身份写一份家庭生活中节约能源的倡议书。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
此外:besides→in addition
对……有害:be harmful to→do harm to
节省:save→economize
帮助:help→assist
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Instead, we could use solar water heaters. This will definitely help us reduce energy waste and save our
money.
拓展句:Instead, we could use solar water heaters, which will definitely help us reduce energy waste and save our money.
【高分句型】
1. Most of us take it for granted that we have plenty of fresh and drinkable water.
(运用了it作形式宾语,that引导宾语从句)
2. Wasting electricity at home is something many of us do without realizing it, such as leaving your electronics
and appliances plugged in.(运用动名词作主语和宾语)
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(改编自海南省海口嘉勋高级中学2023-2024学年高一上学期开学考试)“节约”是我们中华民族的传统美德。请根据下列提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你身边的浪费现象,介绍你生活中的节约行为,并号召大家一起传承和发扬这一美德。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Saving is the traditional virtue of our Chinese nation. However, all kinds of waste in life can be seen at times.
Some students around me don’t like saving things. When they eat out, some always order more food than they need. What’s worse, they don’t take leftovers home. When they go shopping, they always get plastic bags. Others even forget to turn off the lights when they leave.
I’m against wasting. I always eat up all the food. I just order the food according to my need. When I go shopping, I always use cloth bags instead of plastic bags and buy what I really need. I always remember to turn off the tap after washing hands. Besides, reusing old things in daily life is also a good idea.
Saving things is necessary and important. I hope there will be more and more people saving from very little things.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈身边的浪费现象,介绍你
生活中的节约行为,并号召大家一起传承和发扬这一美德。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
关闭:turn off →switch off
反对:be against →be opposed to
购买:buy →purchase
此外:besides → what’s more
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Besides, reusing old things in daily life is also a good idea.
拓展句:Besides, it is also a good idea that we should reuse old things in daily life.
【高分句型】
1. When I go shopping, I always use cloth bags instead of plastic bags and buy what I really need.
(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
2. I hope there will be more and more people saving from very little things.(运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从
句和现在分词短语作后置定语)
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(湖南省常德市一中2023-2024学年高三上学期第六次月考)上周你校开展了一次为期五天的光盘行动,请你关于此事为学校广播站“The Voice of English”专栏组写一篇报道。
要求如下:1. 这次活动的目的;
2. 这次活动的开展情况;
3. 这次活动的收获。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
“Clean Plate” Campaign
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【答案】
“Clean Plate” Campaign
To raise public awareness of valuing food and educate people to save food, the “Clean Plate” Campaign was held in our school last week.
The campaign lasted five days, which was embraced wholeheartedly by us students. Our school hosted activities to highlight the “Clean Plate” campaign and issued proposals that encourage every one of us to support the campaign both at school and at home. Many students went to the communities to encourage the residents to adopt the concept of food conservation in the daily lives.
We all thought highly of the campaign, through which we practised the well-known Chinese tradition of appreciating the value of food.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周你校开展了一次为期五天的光盘行动,请你关于此事为学校广播
站“The Voice of English”专栏组写一篇报道。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
意识:awareness→consciousness
强调:highlight→emphasize
支持:support→favor
传统的:traditional→conventional
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Many students went to the communities to encourage the residents to adopt the concept of food conservation in the daily lives.
拓展句:Many students went to the communities to encourage the residents to adopt the concept that we should conserve food in the daily lives.
【高分句型】
1. The campaign lasted five days, which was embraced wholeheartedly by us students.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. To raise public awareness of valuing food and educate people to save food, the “Clean Plate” Campaign was
held in our school last week. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
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