八省联考读后续写深度分析及配套练习 导学案-2025届高三上学期英语二轮复习专项

八省联考读后续写深度分析及配套练习 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. 人物 I, co-worker 场景 in Philadelphia, a conference, hotel, theater, street 事件 a documentary about animal shelters 伏笔 1. Others saved abandoned dogs;2. I went to the fundraising event;3.I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. 语言风格 主谓宾结构,配简单从句。第一人称陈述,and用语较多。语言相对平实,情绪稳定。 I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. 人物 I 场景 hotel room, theater 事件 How I persuaded myself to take a step forward. 伏笔 1. I felt restless and bored. 2. It didn’t seem particularly dangerous. 3. I decided to go. 语言风格 依旧以简单句行文,但在心理活动描写上加了笔墨。brave it是点睛之笔,可在续写处再次提及。 It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. 人物 I, bikers 场景 street, in front of the theater 事件 I happened to meet some unexpected guys who bothered me a lot. 伏笔 1. deserted streets; 2. in shock; 3. very big, tough-looking bikers 语言风格 本段主要以描写场景、心理状态以及人物外貌的形容词,不断烘托故事的情绪氛围。 I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? 人物 I, bikers 场景 in front of the theater 事件 I thought about the past experience, but what I saw in front of the theater left me disturbing. 伏笔 1. the comparison between the past and present; 2. insignia and some sort of club; 3.something happened in my head and heart 语言风格 本段以心理活动为主,作者本人在面对某种“危险”时,脑海里一阵翻江倒海,各种天人交战,通过介词短语的插入语成分,以一顿一顿的方式,不断将某种紧张气氛烘托到嗓子眼。 A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 人物 I, bikers 场景 in front of the theater 事件 After thinking for a while, I decided to continue my “adventure”. 伏笔 1. the sign; 2. crowd of bikers; 3. safe or dangerous 语言风格 本段继续以心理活动为主,且并未和机车手产生互动,这为后文埋下了伏笔。 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. _ When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. _ 续写的建议: 1.续写需要在文字风格上保持一定的一致性【本文续写:心理活动和场景的细节描写应该摆在首位】; 2.续写应符合一定的人设【本文作者心理活动较多,则明显属于内向之人,具有一定的“社恐”属性,续写时不应过度以对话或互动形式渲染】; 3.续写还要将前文的坑一一填上【本文的坑如上所述的伏笔】; 4.切勿刻意升华主题【本文可着眼于机车手的前后反差对比】。 5.句式结构选择:①简单句以主谓宾为主,加简单的从句或并列句;②心理描写以具体细节为主,如手、脑、眼神等等表现自己的紧张情绪;③情绪描写以形容词和介宾结构相结合的方式,需要直接表现时,用形容词;需要一定的烘托时,用介宾结构;④词语选择,以伏笔的复现为最优解,最终解决前后文的冲突,消除“震惊”。 6.续写两段内容: ① 第一段以“我”的感受和所见所闻为主,以动作和心理活动表现不断抬高“紧张”感,可借助机车手的言行给“我”带来的压迫感,来表现“我”的坐立不安; ② 第二段要结合纪录片的内容,揭开机车手的“真正面目”,后者可通过对这些机车手的“反差式”表现进行描写,最后以“我”的认知作为结尾,今晚不虚此行。