2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习 跑步的意义：拯救朋友的力量 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 跑步的意义：拯救朋友的力量 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 A Reason to Run Justin and his friend David had known each other before they became classmates. David didn’t seem to mind that Justin was small for his age. But on the first day of school, when David and Justin had lunch with the rest of the fifth- grade boys, Steven asked when David had started playing with babies. David laughed out loud and Justin felt uneasy. Several weeks later, David called to invite Justin to his birthday party at his grandfather’s farm. Justin didn’t want to go. He had wanted to spend the day running. When he ran, the problems at school didn’t matter, and being the smallest kid in his class didn’t matter, either. So every day after school he practiced. And Saturday morning was the best time to run. 4 4 续写原文 This Saturday, however, he reached the farm with Steven and the rest of David’s friends. David’s mother suggested that David show the boys around, so David asked his grandfather, Mr. Hamilton, to drive them to the foot of a hill. Mr. Hamilton left to prepare for the party. The boys decided to enter a cave, go out from a hole at its top, climb the hill and then hike back. The entrance to the cave was a big stone room with huge wooden beams (梁) bordering the doorway. About thirty feet in was a wall of rocks blocking further entrance. From the hole in the ceiling, light sh one on the back wall. David started to show the boys how to climb up the ha ck wall. “Let me go first,” Steven demanded. He grabbed David’s belt and pulled him off the rock, throwing him into Rafael. 5 5 续写原文 “Watch it!” shouted David. But it was too late. He and Rafael fell hard against a beam and the wood started to crack. A second later the beam fell. Then part of the ceiling collapsed. Dust filled the air. When the dust finally settled, the six boys found themselves trapped in the cave and the only exit was the hole in the ceiling, which became smaller — too small for anyone to go out. Worse still, a stream of water was flowing into the cave. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” Paragraph 2： Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了Justin 和 David 是朋友，上学第一天，Steven 嘲笑 Justin 弱小，这让 Justin 很不舒服。几周后，David 邀请 Justin 去爷爷的农场参加生日派对。在农场，孩子们进入山洞探险，结果山洞坍塌，唯一的出口变得很小，且水不断涌入。关键时刻，Justin 凭借自己身材小的优势，从洞口挤出去寻求帮助。最终，在 Mr. Hamilton 和救援队的帮助下，被困的孩子们成功获救。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1: Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” Justin 说自己可能足够小能从洞口出去后，其他被困的男孩们虽然心存疑虑，但也没有更好的办法，只能全力协助 Justin。他们用身体搭成 “人梯”，让 Justin 踩着他们的肩膀向上攀爬。Justin 费了好大的劲，在众人的帮助下，终于成功挤过了狭小的洞口。一出去，他就发现外面正下着大雨，而自己身处一个山坡，距离农场的房子还有一段很远的距离。此时，Justin 心里只有一个念头，那就是赶紧去求救，救自己的朋友们。于是，他不顾雨水的冲刷和道路的泥泞，拔腿就朝着农场的方向跑去。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Listening to her words, I started to relax and had more confidence in myself. Justin 在雨中拼命奔跑，他的视线因为雨水变得模糊不清，但他凭借着对农场大致方向的记忆，一刻也不停歇。他的衣服被雨水湿透，紧紧地贴在身上，每一步都感觉像是在和大自然作斗争。终于，他看到了那座熟悉的农舍。Justin 用尽最后一丝力气跑到门前，用力地敲门。Mr. Hamilton 打开门，看到浑身湿透、狼狈不堪的 Justin，十分震惊。Justin 气喘吁吁地向他说明了山洞里的紧急情况。Mr. Hamilton 立刻意识到事情的严重性，他一边打电话联系救援队伍，一边从屋里拿出一些绳索。随后，两人一起朝着山洞的方向奔去。在救援队伍的帮助下，被困在山洞里的男孩们都被安全地救了出来。这次经历让大家对 Justin 刮目相看，David 也为之前对 Justin 的态度感到愧疚，真诚地向他道歉。从此，Justin 更加明白跑步不仅能让他暂时忘却烦恼，还能在关键时刻发挥巨大的作用。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 When Justin said he might be small enough to get out, the trapped boys were skeptical at first. However, with no other options, they decided to give it a try. They formed a human ladder, and Justin climbed up step by step, struggling to squeeze through the narrow hole. Finally, he managed to get out. To his dismay, it was pouring heavily outside, and he found himself on a slope far from the farmhouse. But Justin didn't hesitate for a second. With the thought of saving his friends, he took off running towards the farmhouse, ignoring the heavy rain and the slippery ground. 14 14 范文呈现 Justin ran as fast as he could in the rain. His vision was blurred by the raindrops, but he kept running based on his memory of the direction. His wet clothes clung to his body, making each step a struggle. Finally, he spotted the farmhouse in the distance. With the last bit of his strength, he rushed to the door and knocked hard. Mr. Hamilton opened the door, shocked to see Justin in such a mess. Justin quickly explained the situation in the cave. Realizing the urgency, Mr. Hamilton immediately called the rescue team and grabbed some ropes. Then, they hurried back to the cave together. With the help of the rescue team, all the trapped boys were safely pulled out. This experience changed everyone's view of Justin. David, feeling ashamed of his previous behavior, sincerely apologized to Justin. From then on, Justin knew that running could not only relieve his stress but also save his friends in times of crisis. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Justin looked up at the hole and said, “I might be small enough to get out.” Upon hearing this, the boys, though filled with doubt, had no alternative but to assist him. They formed a human ladder, with Justin stepping on their shoulders, struggling to make his way through the tight opening. After great efforts, he finally managed to squeeze out. Outside, it was pouring cats and dogs, and he found himself on a slope, far from the farmhouse. Without hesitation, driven by the determination to save his friends, he dashed towards the farmhouse, regardless of the heavy rain and the muddy path. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Suddenly, Justin saw the farmhouse. With the last ounce of his strength, he sprinted towards it and pounded on the door. Mr. Hamilton, who opened the door, was shocked by Justin's appearance. Justin, breathless, explained the critical situation in the cave. It was then that Mr. Hamilton realized the urgency. He immediately called the rescue team and fetched some ropes. Subsequently, they rushed back to the cave. With the rescue team's help, all the trapped boys were safely rescued. This incident not only changed the boys' perception of Justin but also made David, who felt ashamed of his previous attitude, apologize sincerely. From that day on, Justin deeply understood that running, which could relieve his stress, could also save his friends in a life - or - death situation. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$