Unit 4 Writing——如何写故事评论-【勤径学升】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修3同步练测（人教版2019）

3.worked 4.had reminded 5.has been working Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship 6.have been writing have written 7.has read named Endurance.Unfortunately,on the way Endurance 8.has been playing 9.has made 10.have been doing became stuck in the ice,sinking into the ocean.Having Ⅱ，完成句子 abandoned the ship,they escaped to Elephant Island. 1.have been visiting 2.have been waiting for you Shackleton made a commitment to save them,so he 3.have waited for you 4.have been reading resolved to turn to others for help.Although they got into 5.have finished the design a panic and there were many difficulties,the crew Section II Using Language,Assessing Your managed to survive. Progress Video Time I was deeply moved by the concern and love between 【基础认知自主学习】 them and I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in face of difficulties.In a word,I have 工，重点单词一基础单词 learned an important lesson from the inspiring story.That 1.motor 2.candidate 3.episode 4.motive is,if we were to meet with difficulties,we would never 5.Confucianism give up. 拓展单词 跟踪训练 1.rough 2.navigator 3.loyal 4.commitment [参考范文 Ⅱ，重点短语 Shackleton and his men began their expedition to 1.of 2.of 3.up 4.fire 5.off 6.with 7.back 8.for 9.from 10.in Antarctica in 1914.After more than 700 days of adventure,he and his men returned safely. Ⅲ，重点句型 As they approached Antarctica,their ship, 1.What if 2.Staying alive 3.If it weren't for sea Endurance,got stuck in the ice and they had to abandon animals 4.such relief and joy that 5.while waiting to it.Shackleton threw away all his gold and took only be rescued essential supplies.He did so because he realized clearly 【语篇精读合作探究】一整体理解 that survival was the most important thing and he had to I.the story of Shackleton's men on Elephant Island and set an example to his men.As there wasn't any chance that at last they were rescued of being rescued on Elephant Island,Shackleton Ⅱ.1-4BABC ventured more than 1,300 kilometers with five of his II.1.sailed 2.to imagine 3.up 4.growing 5.that/ men to search for help.It was a very tough trip,and no which 6.optimistic 7.a 8.were rescued 9.Finally one could imagine the danger ahead of them.This is 10.commitment Shackleton,a considerate and responsible leader with 【要点精研讲练互动】一核心词汇 great perseverance. 1.活学活用①off②to③out④泄露⑤公布 I think of Shackleton's expedition to Antarctica as a ⊙上交 great one,and he is a great leader with love,responsibility 2.话学话用①playing②commitment)committed and strong will. made a commitment to thoroughly help UNIT 5 POEMS 5committed myself to thoroughly helping 【美文欣赏·话题链接】一探究问题 Obeen committed to thoroughly helping 1-5 FTFTT 重点句型 L.活学活用①for②if③about④What if Section I Reading and Thinking 2.话学话用①had made②were③saw/should see/ 【基础认知自主学习】 were to see 4If I had enough money 【,重点单词一基础单词 Writing- 一如何写故事评论 1.rhyme 2.nursery 3.folk 4.diamond 5.bull 6.recite 7.bee 8.dawn 9.butterfly 10.lawn 11.amateur 典题示例 12.mood 13.tease 14.await 15.utter [词汇推敲] 拓展单词 1.make a commitment to do sth. 2.go aboard the ship 1.drama 2.sorrow 3.literary 4.respective 3.abandon/give up 4.decide/resolve to do sth. 5.turn respectively 5.delicate 6.comprehension to sb.for help 6.get into a panic Ⅱ.重点短语 [遗词造句] 1.with/to 2.oneself 3.to 4.sense 5.about 6.of ①went aboard②became stuck in the ice ③they 7.of 8.with 9.in 10.by escaped to Elephant Island so he resolved to turn to Ⅲ.阅读词汇 others for help managed to survive Ohave learned an 1,形象的描述，意象：像 important lesson DIf we were to meet with difficulties 2,黄铜：黄铜制品：铜管乐器 [句式升级] 3.露珠；水珠 1.Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship 4.花朵：花熊 named Endurance. 5.旋转：环绕：转动 2.Unfortunately,on the way Endurance became stuck in W.重点句型 the ice,sinking into the ocean. 1.Compared with other forms of literature such as the 3.Having abandoned the ship,they escaped to Elephant novel,drama,and the short story Island. 2.do you think [妙笔成篇] 3.they are easy to learn and recite [参考范文 4.while others do not This story is about a great expedition in history. 5.With so many different forms of poetry to choose fromUNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE [活学活用] ③f1 (see)him tomorrow,I (1)单句语法填空 would invite him home. ①Ifwe (make)adequate (2)单句写作 interaction and preparation,the meeting would ④如果我有足够的钱，我会和你一起去动 have been very successful. ②If there 物园。 (be)no modern telecommunications,we would have to wait for I would go to weeks to get news from around the world. the zoo with you. Writing 如何写故事评论 10.learn from...that 从…中学到 口文体指导 11.describe 描述：描写 本单元的写作任务是根据一则故事写一 12.recommend 推荐：介绍 篇短评，属于议论文文体。 13.share 分享 1.描述故事，准确把握评论对象。 14.comment 评论：意见 针对故事内容，把握真正内涵。对评论对 15.opinion 意见：主张 象有准确的把握，才能形成自己的见解，才能 [常用语句 形成自己的观点或评论的中心。 1.He was very anxious and began to look 2.确定评论点，有明确的评价。 extremely old. 对故事的评价一定要明确，要实事求是， 他非常着急，开始看起来非常老。 有理有据。 2.They were overjoyed to see us and everyone 模板构建 began to cry. [基本框架] 看见我们，他们欣喜若狂并且每个人开始哭 首先，简要介绍故事发生的时间、地点、人 起来。 物：事件发生的起因、经过、结果。 3.The story is based on... 其次，对故事中的人物进行评论。 这个故事是基于…而写的。 最后，阐述你对这个故事的感受并解释你 4.This is a story about... 的感受。 这是一个关于…的故事。 [常用词语] 5.I learned from this story that... l.stay cheerful and positive保持快乐和乐观 我从这个故事中学到… 2.admirable 值得赞赏的； 6.My point of view towards...is... 可钦佩的 我对…的看法是… 3.appreciate 欣赏；感激 7.The author described that... 4.communicate with 与…交流 作者这样描述… 5.be ready to help others 乐于助人 8.The story ends with... 6.be concerned for/about 对…担心/ 故事以…结尾。 关心 9.I'm moved by the story. 7.share...with… 与…分享… 我被这个故事感动了。 8.depend/rely on 依靠；相信：信赖 10.Here I want to share... 9.based on 在…基础上 这里我想分享一下… 93 ●高中英语·选择性必修第三册 3After they had abandoned the ship, 典题示例 请根据下面的提示写一篇80词左右的短评。 在弃船后，他们逃到了大象岛上。 1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一 4Shackleton made a commitment to save 起登上了名为“坚忍号”的大船。途中“坚忍 them, 号”被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了大象岛。 沙克尔顿承诺救他们，因此他决定去寻求他人 沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重 的帮助。 重船员们还是活了下来。 5Although they got into a panic and there were many difficulties,the crew 2.在这个故事里船员之间真诚的关心和 爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力也使 尽管他们陷入了恐慌，也有许多困难，但是全 我深受鼓舞。 体人员设法活了下来。 3.从这个故事中我学到一个教训：无论遇 ⑥I 到任何困难，都不要放弃！ from the inspiring story. [审题谋篇] 从这个鼓舞人心的故事中我学到一个重要的 明确体裁话题：议论文，欧内斯特·沙克尔顿 教训。 和船员们的故事评论 ⑦ we 确定人称时态：以第三人称及一般过去时为主 would never give up 布局文章架构：首段介绍故事背景： 将来万一我们遇到困难，我们绝不放弃。 中段简要介绍这个故事： [句式升级] 尾段表达自己对这个故事的 1.用非谓语动词升级句① 感受。 2.用非谓语动词升级句② 列出核心要点：1.故事介绍 2.在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力 3.用非谓语动词升级句③ 3.教训 [词汇推敲] [妙笔成篇] 1. 答应做某事 2 上船 3. 放弃 4. 决定做某事 5. 向某人寻求 帮助 跟踪训练 6 陷入恐慌 [造词造句] 读了本单元提供的两篇航海备忘录后，请 DErnest Shackleton and his crew 写一篇80词左右关于Shackleton故事的 the ship whose name was Endurance. 评论。 欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名 为“坚忍号”的大船。 2Unfortunately,on the way Endurance and sank into the ocean. 提示、请完成《素能提升训练》训练十二 不幸的是，途中“坚忍号”被冰块困住，并沉入 请完成《素能提升训练》检测卷四 大洋。 94