Unit 6 Writing 写关于自然的诗歌-【勤径学升】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修3同步练测（外研版2019）

UNIT 6 Nature in words Writing- 写关于自然的诗歌 口文体指导 And those are brown and dry. 本单元的写作话题是“Writing a poem 海浪是绿色的潮湿的，但从它们平息的处所， about nature”,写一篇关于自然的诗歌。题材 依然卷着更大的浪涛，而且是褐色的干燥的。 广泛，可以涉及大自然的所有内容，如海洋、高 3.Though the morning was cold,Tom was 山、森林、天空以及鸟类和动物等，几乎任何事 happy warm; 物都可以成为自然诗歌的主题。写诗歌要注 So if all do their duty,they need not fear harm. 意下面几点： 晨风虽冷，汤姆自感心欢温暖：如果所有人 1.明确所要表达的诗歌主题。 都恪尽职守，就不怕灾难。 2.运用修辞手法：写作时要适当地运用比 4.Living in a house towards the sea,with 喻、拟人等修辞手法来突出景物的特点与特 spring blossoms. 征，要细致捕捉描写对象的颜色、形态、气味 我有一所房子，面朝大海，春暖花开。 等，把景物描写得更加生动、形象。 5.Faithfulness lies here: 3.采用灵活押韵：押韵方式有abab、baba I love not only your gigantic stature, 以及其他隔句押韵的方式。 But also the position you uphold, [常用词语] And the earth on which you stand. 1.lake 湖泊 坚贞就在这里：不仅爱你伟岸的身躯，也爱 2.stream 河；溪 你坚持的位置，脚下的土地。 3.forest 森林 典题示例 4.path 小道 结合你所学的诗歌知识，写一首关于“赏 5.mountain 山 雨”的英文诗歌。 6.sky 天空 注意：1.诗歌类型不限； 7.rainbow 彩虹 2.写作词数应为80左右。 8.valley 山谷 [审题谋篇] 9.season 季节 明确体裁话题—诗歌 10.scenery 景色：风景 确定人称时态一以第三人称及一般现在时 [常用语句] 或一般过去时为主 1.The trumpet of a prophecy!O Wind,If 布局文章架构 第一部分：引出主题 Winter comes,can Spring be far behind? 第二部分：表达具体内容 去唤醒沉睡的大地吧！西风啊，如果冬天 第三部分：升华主题 来了，春天还会远吗？ [词汇推敲 2.Sea waves are green and wet, 1. 非常愉快的：令人快乐的 But up from where they die, 2. 优美的 Rise others vaster yet, 3. 等待 123 ●高中英语·选择性必修第三册(WY) 4 地平线 [句式升级] 5. 偷窥 1.用现在分词和过去分词升级句② [遗词造句] DRain,glorious,pounding,soaking rain, 雨，愉快的，砰砰的，淋湿的雨， 2.用as引导时间状语从句升级句③ 我多么喜欢听你的歌！ ②I in your torrential downpour, I sit here and stare at your frenzy dance moves [妙笔成篇] upon my window panes. And I 在你的倾盆大雨中淹没我的世界， 我坐在这里，凝视着你在我窗台上疯狂的 舞步， 迷失在你优美的动作中。 ③The dawn You dance through the night. ☑跟踪训练 当黎明在地平线上等待时，你在黑夜中翩翩 请根据“Nature”为主题写一首诗. 起舞。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 4You walk your last moves and the sun peeks through the clouds, “Move on,”it cries, “For 你辉舞着最后的舞步，太阳透过云层窥视着， “走开，”它嚷道， “因为现在是我用光明洗涤世界的时候了。” ⑤And your last drops “Goodbye..” 提示请完成《素能提升训练》训练（十入） 你的最后一滴水告别整个世界， 请完成《素能提升训练》单元检测卷（六） “再见。” 124Ⅲ，阅读词汇 句式升级 1.寓言2.提醒，使（某人）意识到3.故意地4.海洋的 1.Drowning my world in your torrential downpour, N.重点句型 I sit here and stare at your frenzy dance moves upon my 1.puzzled and disturbed window panes. 2.causing a great increase in environmental awareness Lost I am in your graceful movements. 3.more emotional than scientific 2.You dance through the night as the dawn awaits in the 4.strong though they are horizon. 5.do listen 妙笔成篇 【语篇精读合作探究】 [参考范文] 整体理解 Watching the Rain I.the content and significance of Silent Spring written Rain,glorious,pounding,soaking rain, by Rachel Carson How I love to hear your song! II.1-4 DAAA Drowning my world in your torrential downpour, Il.1.written 2.to alert 3.reasonable 4.carefully I sit here and stare at your frenzy dance moves upon my window panes. 5.features 6.a 7.who/that 8.on 9.was established Lost I am in your graceful movements. 10.awareness 【要点精研 You dance through the night as the dawn awaits in 讲练互动】 the horizon. 核心词汇 You walk your last moves and the sun peeks through 活学活用 the clouds, 1.(1)①on②from③banned “Move on,"it cries, (2)are banned from bringing cellphones to school "For it is my time to wash the world with light." 2.(1)①puzzlement②puzzling③about//over And your last drops bid the world, (2)Opuzzling puzzled puzzles “Goodbye.” 3.(l)①precisely②with③precision 跟踪训练 (2)④to be precise [参考范文] 4.(1)①for②to The Peace of Wild Things (2)③fame reputation When despair grows in me 重点句型 and I wake in the middle of the night at the least l.(1)①excited②Helpless③helplessly sound (2)④Amazed in fear of what my life and my children's lives may 2.(1)①Snowing②as/though be: (2)Youngest as/though he is I go and lie down, Writing- 一写关于自然的诗歌 where the wood drake rests in his beauty on the water, 典题示例 and the great heron feeds. 词汇推敲 I come into the peace of wild things, 1.glorious 2.graceful 3.await 4.horizon 5.peek who do not tax their lives with forethought of grief. 遣词造句 I come into the presence of still water. ①How I love to hear your song②drown my world And I feel above me the day-blind stars, am lost in your graceful movements awaits in the waiting for their light. horizon Oit is my time to wash the world with light For a time I rest in the grace of the world, ⑤bid the world and am free. 12