2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+七岁孩童对家庭贫富认知的转变 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 七岁孩童对家庭贫富认知的转变 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 The winter wind bit through my coat but didn’t lessen my cheerfulness as I carried my four jars of home- canned tomatoes into the community center. Excited to participate in feeding the less fortunate in our community on New Year’s Day, I joined my Sunday school’s classmates as we boxed the goods for delivery. That year, we went to Bobby’s house. He was one grade ahead of me in school, but I never knew he was poor. When we took the box inside the small house, I saw bedrooms had been created by hanging sheets over ropes. Bobby came home while we were there. Embarrassed, he quickly hid behind the screen (隔板). It made my heart ache. Even as a seven- year- old, I understood embarrassment. After we returned to the community center, my teacher pulled me aside. I thought she was going to discuss Bobby’s situation, but she didn’t. 4 4 续写原文 My teacher told me that they had collected a lot of food that year and suggested that, since I had a large family, I should take an extra box home with me. She picked up the cardboard container, expecting me to accept the food. I refused, saying that the food was for poor people. My teacher responded that all people needed help at times. I insisted that my family didn’t need help. I opened the door and went back home. I began to wonder if we were poor. I looked at our family carefully, concluding that we were definitely poor. 5 5 续写原文 My mom never tolerates foolish behavior and doesn’t allow complaining. Two days later, she demanded to know why I’d been depressed. I told her that we were poor. When she demanded to know who had said that, I replied that nobody had said it, but I had figured it out. I couldn’t look at her in the eye, feeling that she had been hiding this important truth from us. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：She asked why I thought we were poor, and I listed reasons. Paragraph 2： After I finished, my mother sat down and told me we were not poor but very rich. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了新年当天，七岁的 “我” 满怀热情带着自制罐装番茄参与社区的慈善活动，为贫困人群送去食物。我们来到同学 Bobby 家，“我” 惊讶地发现他家十分贫穷，这让 “我” 心里很不是滋味。活动结束后，老师因食物充足，建议家庭人口多的 “我” 多带一盒食物回家，被 “我” 拒绝。回家后，“我” 开始思考自己家是否贫穷，最终得出肯定的结论。两天后，母亲察觉到 “我” 的低落情绪，询问原因 。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：She asked why I thought we were poor, and I listed reasons. 母亲询问我为什么觉得我们家穷，我便开始一五一十地列举原因。我小声说道：“你看，咱们家的房子比我好多同学家的都小，他们家还有专门的书房，可我只能在餐桌上写作业。还有，我的衣服都是姐姐穿小了给我的，上面还有些小补丁，同学们都穿着崭新的漂亮衣服。每次去学校，看到他们那些新奇的玩具，我都羡慕极了，咱们家却没有。” 说着说着，我的声音越来越小，头也越来越低，眼泪在眼眶里打转。我觉得自己仿佛看到了一个贫穷家庭的种种窘迫，而这些之前都被我忽视了。我满心疑惑，不明白为什么我们家会是这样。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： After I finished, my mother sat down and told me we were not poor but very rich. 等我说完，母亲轻轻叹了口气，然后拉着我坐到沙发上，语重心长地对我说：“孩子，我们并不穷，相反，我们非常富有。你看，我们一家人身体健康，每天都能围坐在一起吃饭，分享彼此的喜怒哀乐，这是多少钱都买不来的。虽然我们的房子不大，但它充满了温暖，能为我们遮风挡雨。你的衣服虽然不是新的，但它们干净整洁，而且每一件都饱含着姐姐对你的爱。至于玩具，快乐并不是靠玩具来衡量的，你和小伙伴们一起玩耍，一起探索这个世界，这难道不是最珍贵的吗？真正的财富，是家人的陪伴，是我们对彼此的爱。” 听了母亲的话，我恍然大悟，心中的阴霾瞬间消散 。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 She asked why I thought we were poor, and I listed reasons. In a soft voice, I started, “Our house is much smaller compared to many of my classmates'. They have special study rooms, but I can only do my homework on the dining table. Also, my clothes are all hand - me - downs from my sister, and there are even some small patches on them. My classmates always wear brand - new and beautiful clothes. Every time I go to school, I'm jealous when I see their fancy toys, but we don't have any at home.” As I spoke, my voice gradually trailed off, and my head dropped lower and lower. Tears welled up in my eyes. I felt as if I had suddenly seen all the hardships of a poor family, which I had ignored before. I was full of confusion, wondering why our family was like this. 14 14 范文呈现 After I finished, my mother let out a soft sigh and then pulled me to sit on the sofa. She said to me earnestly, “My dear, we're not poor; instead, we're very rich. Look, our family is healthy, and we can sit around the table every day to have meals and share our joys and sorrows. This is something that no amount of money can buy. Although our house isn't big, it's full of warmth and can protect us from the wind and rain. Your clothes may not be new, but they're clean and tidy, and each one is filled with your sister's love. As for toys, happiness isn't measured by toys. You play with your friends and explore the world together. Isn't that the most precious thing? True wealth lies in the company of family and the love we have for each other.” After hearing my mother's words, I suddenly understood, and the gloom in my heart dissipated instantly. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Prompted by her query as to why I deemed us poor, I began to enumerate my reasons, my voice barely above a whisper. “Our abode pales in comparison to those of my classmates,” I lamented. “They boast dedicated study nooks, while I'm confined to the dining table for my schoolwork. Moreover, my wardrobe consists solely of hand - me - downs from my sister, marred by the odd patch here and there. In contrast, my peers flaunt brand - new, stylish attire. Each time I set foot in school, envy gnaws at me as I behold their fancy playthings, which are conspicuously absent from our home.” As I continued, my voice faltered, my head drooping lower with each word. Tears welled in my eyes, threatening to spill over. It was as if a veil had been lifted, revealing the harsh realities of a poverty - stricken existence I had hitherto overlooked. A cloud of confusion hung heavy over me, leaving me bewildered as to why our family had to endure such circumstances. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Upon the conclusion of my monologue, my mother emitted a gentle sigh and gently guided me to the sofa. Seated beside me, she spoke with profound earnestness, “My dear child, far from being destitute, we are in fact abundantly wealthy. Consider our health - a priceless gift that allows us to gather around the table daily, sharing laughter and tears. This simple pleasure transcends the value of any material possession. Our humble dwelling, though modest in size, shelters us from the elements and overflows with warmth. Your clothes, though not fresh off the rack, are imbued with the love of your sister, making them far more precious than any designer label. And toys? True happiness is not found in the latest gadgets but in the laughter shared with friends as you embark on adventures together. True wealth, my dear, is the love that binds our family together, a treasure far more valuable than gold or jewels.” Her words were like a ray of sunshine, dispelling the darkness that had clouded my heart, leaving me with a newfound understanding of the true meaning of wealth. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$