2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+暴雪夜的艰难求生与暖心救援 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 暴雪夜的艰难求生与暖心救援 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 I survived a snowstorm A snowstorm was supposed to hit on the evening of Monday, Jan. 31, 2022. I was working from home, but I had to leave that afternoon and go to my office at First Nations University in Regina, Saskatchewan, so I could sign an emergency financial aid check for a student. As director of finance, I wanted to get it to him as soon as possible, snowstorm or not. Besides, I wasn’t worried. I figured I had more than enough time to make it to the office and get back home. The route to the university took about 30 minutes along the Trans-Canada Highway. When I got there, my colleague Jack came to my office to co-sign the check, then he left for the day. As I was packing up, I noticed Jack had left his laptop bag in my office. “Shoot,” Jack said when I called him. “I’m already home.” 4 4 续写原文 “I can bring it to you,” I assured him. It was just past 4:30 p. m. The snow wasn’t supposed to start until later, but just to be safe, I decided to take the country roads to his home instead of the highway. On the way to his place, I picked up a new cellphone charger, filled up my SUV with gas and picked up two stuffed-crust pizzas because I’d promised my 15-year-old daughter and 10-year-old son I’d bring some pizzas home for dinner. As a single mother, I worked hard and did my utmost to take good care of my two kids though it was not easy. It took me about 15 minutes to get to Jack’s house, where I dropped off his laptop bag and got right back on the road. Then the snow started-and it was coming down fast. Within minutes I was in a whiteout. The storm was a “snownado,” or what the TV meteorologists called a Saskatchewan screamer, because it came in fast and so windy that it screamed. 5 5 续写原文 The snowstorm grew stronger and stronger, forcing me to slow down. The windows were fogging up and getting covered with snow, so I rolled down my driver’s side window, thinking I could better follow the edge of the road and keep to a straight line. But really, I didn’t have a clue where I was or even which side of the road I was on. At one point, I didn’t know exactly where I was going, I stopped because I was afraid of driving into a farmer’s field, a ditch or worse. I kept the car running to stay warm and called 911. The policeman who received the call sadly advised me to try other ways for rescue as he was the only one on the duty. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：Having no other choices, I called Jack for help. Paragraph 2： The warm reception and food at Jack’s home relieved my anxiety. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了2022 年 1 月 31 日下午，身为财务主任的单亲妈妈为给学生签紧急助学金支票，在暴雪来临前前往办公室。之后，她因同事 Jack 落下电脑包，决定送还。途中她采购物品，返程时暴雪突至，形成 “雪龙卷”。她被困，车窗被雪覆盖，迷失方向，报警后因警力不足，只能另寻救援。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：Having no other choices, I called Jack for help. 在毫无办法的情况下，我向 Jack 求助。电话接通，我声音颤抖地诉说着自己的危险处境，恐惧如潮水般将我淹没。Jack 听到后，没有丝毫犹豫，语气坚定地让我别害怕，他马上就来。我在车里焦急地等待，周围除了呼啸的风雪声，一片死寂。每一秒都过得无比漫长，我紧紧盯着车外白茫茫的世界。终于，透过纷飞的雪花，我看到了一束微弱的光，那是 Jack 的车。他艰难地靠近，打开车门，那一刻，我像抓住了救命稻草，心里满是感激。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：The warm reception and food at Jack’s home relieved my anxiety. 到了 Jack 家，他的家人热情地迎接我。他的妻子满脸笑容，温柔地拉着我进屋，让我赶紧坐下暖和暖和。孩子们好奇又关切地看着我，不一会儿，一杯热气腾腾的茶被递到我手中。餐桌上摆满了丰盛的食物，在这寒冷的雪夜显得格外诱人。我坐在温暖的房间里，给孩子们打电话报平安。之后，我们围坐在一起聊天，Jack 和家人讲着有趣的故事，逗得我哈哈大笑。在这温馨的氛围中，之前的恐惧和焦虑渐渐消散，我感受到了人与人之间真挚的情谊。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Having no other choices, I called Jack for help. When the call connected, I was almost in tears, stammering out my desperate situation. “I'm completely lost, and I'm so scared,” I cried. Jack, with his calm and reassuring voice, said, “Stay put. I'm coming for you right now.” I waited in the car, constantly looking out of the window, my hands tightly gripping the steering wheel. The snow was still falling heavily, and visibility was extremely low. But I had faith in Jack. After what seemed like an endless wait, I finally spotted his car approaching slowly through the blizzard. He carefully parked beside me and rushed to my car, opening the door and helping me out. “You're safe now,” he said, patting me on the back. 14 14 范文呈现 The warm reception and food at Jack’s home relieved my anxiety. His wife welcomed me with open arms, saying, “Come in, you must be freezing.” She led me to the living room where a warm fire was burning. The children peeked from behind the couch, their eyes full of curiosity. Soon, a cup of hot coffee was placed in my hand. I called my kids, telling them I was safe and sound. Then, we sat around the table, enjoying the delicious food. Jack and his family shared interesting stories about their past experiences in snowstorms. Their laughter and warmth filled the room, making me forget all the hardships I had just gone through. I felt truly grateful for their kindness and hospitality. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Having no other choices, I called Jack for help. When the call connected, so desperate was I that my voice trembled uncontrollably as I stammered out my perilous situation. “I'm completely lost, and fear is overwhelming me!” I cried. Jack, with his calm and reassuring voice, immediately responded, “Stay put. I'm coming for you right now.” Waiting in the car, my hands tightly gripping the steering wheel, I constantly stared out of the window, with only the howling wind and snow as my companions. It was an endless wait, but finally, through the blizzard, I spotted his car approaching slowly. He carefully parked beside me, rushed to my car, opened the door, and helped me out, saying, “You're safe now,” while patting me on the back. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 The warm reception and food at Jack’s home relieved my anxiety. His wife, with open arms, welcomed me, saying, “Come in, you must be freezing.” She led me to the living room where a warm fire was burning brightly. The children, whose eyes were full of curiosity, peeked from behind the couch. Soon, a cup of hot coffee was placed in my hand. It was then that I called my kids, telling them I was safe and sound. After that, sitting around the table, we enjoyed the delicious food. Jack and his family shared interesting stories about their past experiences in snowstorms, laughter filling the room. It was their kindness and hospitality that made me forget all the hardships I had just gone through. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$