2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+雪夜被困的救援之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 雪夜被困的救援之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 The snowstorm was to hit the evening of Monday, Jan.31,2022. After work, I had to take the laptop my colleague left in my office to his house before it came. On the way to his place, I picked up two pizzas because I’d promised my kids I'd bring some home for dinner. It took me about 15 minutes to get to my colleague’s house, where I dropped off the laptop case and got right back on the road. Then the snow started and it was coming down fast. It came in fast and so windy that it screamed. The windows were fogging up and getting covered with snow. I didn’t have a clue where I was. I stopped because I was afraid of driving into a farmer's field. I called 911. The dispatcher (调度员) told me to sit tight and wait things out for the night — nobody was coming to get me until morning at the earliest. 4 4 续写原文 Those seconds after the call were agony. Getting out to walk in the white world with zero visibility, high winds and a low temperature wasn’t a wise option. Would the storm continue for longer than predicted or would I be found too late? My kids! It was the first time they would ever be spending a night without me at home. I was literally terrified at the scene that the snow was piled up. I stayed in the car and texted my colleague whose laptop bag I had just returned. He had an idea.“ Pin your location on Google Maps and send it to me,” he said. I did, and a few minutes later he told me that I was on a road called Bouvier Lane, in between two farms. At 6:30p. m, I posted this new information to my Facebook community group, hoping for anyone who knew who lived on the farms to help me get rescued. At 8 p. m, my cellphone rang. It was the son of the farmer who owned the land beside the road I was stranded on. He told me that his dad, Andy, was coming to get me. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1：Later, I saw a tall figure moving toward me in the dark, carrying a flashlight and a shovel(铲子). Paragraph 2： In Andy’s home, his wife, Maryann Bouvier, treated me to hot drinks. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了文章讲述了作者在雪 storm 来临前，送同事的笔记本电脑回家，途中遭遇大雪被困。作者向 911 求助，之后同事帮忙定位，得知自己在一条叫布维尔巷的道路上。最终一位农民儿子打来电话，农民安迪前来救援。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：Later, I saw a tall figure moving toward me in the dark, carrying a flashlight and a shovel(铲子). 作者在黑暗中看到安迪拿着手电筒和铲子走来。安迪的身影在雪夜中显得格外清晰，他用手电筒照亮周围，走到车旁，打开车门，让作者下车。作者跟随安迪在雪地里艰难前行，雪不断地打在脸上。安迪一边走一边安慰作者，让作者不要害怕。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：In Andy’s home, his wife, Maryann Bouvier, treated me to hot drinks. 作者来到安迪家，安迪的妻子玛丽安端来热饮。作者坐在沙发上，喝着热饮，感受着温暖。安迪和玛丽安询问作者的情况，作者讲述了自己担心孩子的心情。安迪表示会帮助作者尽快回家，玛丽安也安慰作者，让作者放心。作者对安迪一家的帮助表示感激。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Later, I saw a tall figure moving toward me in the dark, carrying a flashlight and a shovel. The flashlight illuminated the path ahead, and I could see the snow swirling around him. As he approached the car, he opened the door and said, “I'm Andy. Let's get you out of here.” I got out of the car and followed him through the snow. The wind was blowing hard, and the snow was falling heavily. Andy walked ahead, using the shovel to clear the snow in front of us. 13 13 范文呈现 In Andy’s home, his wife, Maryann Bouvier, treated me to hot drinks. She handed me a cup of hot tea and said, “You must be freezing. Sit down and warm up.” I sat down on the couch and took a sip of the tea. Andy and Maryann asked me about my situation, and I told them how worried I was about my kids. They reassured me that everything would be okay and said that they would help me get back home as soon as possible. I was grateful for their kindness and hospitality. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Later, I saw a tall figure moving toward me in the dark, carrying a flashlight and a shovel. The beam of the flashlight cut through the darkness, revealing the snow - covered landscape. As he got closer, I could see his determined expression. He opened the car door and said, “I'm Andy. Let's get you out of here.” I got out of the car and followed him through the snow. The wind was howling, and the snow was falling thickly. Andy walked ahead, using the shovel to clear the path. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 In Andy’s home, his wife, Maryann Bouvier, treated me to hot drinks. She handed me a cup of hot tea and said, “You must be freezing. Sit down and warm up.” I sat down on the couch and took a sip of the tea. Andy and Maryann asked me about my situation. I told them how worried I was about my kids. They reassured me that everything would be okay and said they'd help me get back home as soon as possible. I was grateful for their kindness and hospitality. This experience not only relieved my anxiety but also left me with a deep sense of warmth and hope in the face of the snowstorm. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$