2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习 姐姐的爱与牺牲 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 姐姐的爱与牺牲 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 My sister, Norma, has always been a hard worker, eaming the title "my big girl" from our mother, while I was always labeled "lazy Joan". Norma began to work part-time when she was barely twelve years old, doing weekly cleaning for an elderly neighbor lady. But Norma didn't keep the money she earned. It went directly to Mother to help with the houschold expenses. When the final bell rang for the day, Norma would race to catch the bus to make it to work on time while I leisurely wandered in the hallway with new friends. As October brought fall rains and cold air down from the north, Mother kept telling me to put on my winter coat. The coat from the previous winter was ugly.The sleeves were too short, and since I had grown through the summer months, the waist of the coat was nearly under my armpits (腋下). 4 4 续写原文 Norma was having the same problem, with her coat being too small. Mother kept telling me that she didn't have the money for a new coat, and I kept refusing to wear the little girl's coat to school. I shouted; I cried; I begged. It didn't do any good. Some of my classmates were wearing their new coats with the fashionable short A-line style.How I envied those girls! One day, Mother was planning our annual family Thanksgiving dinner when I asked her the wrong question. “How is it that you can buy all those groceries to feed everyone but not buy me a new winter coat?” "Young lady, it isn't always about you and what you think you need," Mother kept telling me that she didn't have the money for a new coat, and I kept refusing to wear the little girl's coat to school. I shouted; 1 cried; 1 begged. It didn't do any good. Some of my classmates were wearing their new coats with the fashionable short A-line style. How I envied those girls! 5 5 续写原文 One day, Mother was planning our annual family Thanksgiving dinner when I asked her the wrong question. "How is it that you can buy all those groceries to feed everyone but not buy me a new winter coat?" "Young lady, it isn't always about you and what you think you need," Mother blared and immediately sent me to my room upstairs for my selfish attitude.I stayed in my room, feeling angry and disappointed. At eleven o'clock that evening, Norma finally came home from work. I could hear her excited voice in the living room below. Mother called to me, "Come down and see what Norma has bought with her paycheck!” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：I came down and saw Norma wearing a new coat. Paragraph 2： I took the box from Norma and opened it. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了 Norma 从小就辛勤工作，把挣来的钱都交给母亲补贴家用。到了冬天， Norma 和 “我” 都面临着旧衣服太小的问题，母亲没有钱给 “我” 买新衣服。“我因羡慕同学穿新衣服而抱怨母亲。后来， Norma 用自己挣的钱给 “我” 买了新衣服。通过这件事，“我” 感受到了姐姐的爱与牺牲，也意识到自己的自私。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：I came down and saw Norma wearing a new coat. 我看到 Norma 穿着新衣服，心里既惊喜又疑惑。她微笑着告诉我这是给我的。我难以置信，没想到她会为我做这样的事。她解释说知道我一直渴望新衣服，所以用自己的钱给我买了。我想到自己之前的任性和自私，感到十分羞愧。 Norma 又说她知道母亲也不容易，我们要体谅母亲。我听了深受触动，决定以后要多为家人着想。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：I took the box from Norma and opened it. 我接过盒子，打开后看到那件漂亮的新衣服。我抚摸着衣服，感受着它的柔软。我想起自己之前对母亲的抱怨，心里满是后悔。我走到母亲面前，向她道歉，说自己不应该这么任性。母亲欣慰地看着我，说看到我能理解她很高兴。我穿上新衣服，感觉温暖又幸福。从那以后，我懂得了珍惜和感恩，也明白了家人之间的爱与牺牲。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I came down and saw Norma wearing a new coat. I was really surprised and confused. She smiled at me and said it was for me. I couldn't believe she had done this for me. She explained that she knew how much I wanted a new coat, so she used her money to buy it for me. I felt ashamed of my selfishness. Norma also said that she knew our mother was in a difficult situation and we should understand her. I was deeply touched by her words and decided to be more considerate towards my family. 14 14 范文呈现 I took the box from Norma and opened it. Inside was a new coat just like the ones my classmates had been wearing. I touched the coat, feeling its softness. I thought about my complaints to my mother and felt regretful. I went to my mother and apologized to her, saying I shouldn't have been so selfish. Mother smiled at me and said she was glad to see me understand her. I put on the new coat and felt warm and happy. From then on, I learned to cherish and be grateful, and also understood the love and sacrifice among family members. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I came down and saw Norma wearing a new coat. The moment I laid eyes on it, I was struck by its beauty and style. It was exactly the kind of coat I had been longing for. Norma, with a big smile on her face, said, “I know how much you've been wanting a new coat, so I bought it for you.” Her words, which were full of love and selflessness, made me feel a mix of surprise and guilt. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 I took the box from Norma and opened it. Inside was a new coat that was not only fashionable but also warm. I couldn't help thinking about how selfish I had been, always thinking about my own desires. As I put on the coat, I felt a rush of emotion. It was not just a coat but a symbol of Norma's love and sacrifice. I went to my mother and said, “I'm so sorry for my selfishness.” Mother replied, “It's okay. I'm glad you understand now.” In that moment, I realized that true love is about putting others first. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$