读后续写专项限时训练2 导学案-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写专项训练二解析 文本解读 故事讲述的是作者在万圣节发生的一件囧事:一家人一直沿袭万圣节制作万圣节南瓜灯的传统,同时还保持着评选每年最重南瓜的选拔赛。去年，作者获得冠军。今年为了能证明自己带回家的南瓜是最重的，作者将头伸进了已掏空瓜瓤的南瓜里，结果却被死死卡住。文本故事线索清晰，以故事线“头试南瓜——身陷窘境——智取脑袋——分享经历”为主线，以作者的情感线“好胜一兴奋一焦虑一害怕一释然"为辅线向读者呈现由囧变趣的故事。 在阅读文本时，我们通过记叙文的基本要素，即when、where、who、what、why、how 去厘清文本的内容和故事情节的发展脉络。在梳理故事情节发展的脉络时，我们要抓住三条线索：时空线、故事情节线和情感发展线。 时空线：万圣节前夕；家里的厨房。 故事情节线：每年万圣节，一家人一直沿袭万圣节制作万圣节南瓜灯传统，作者“我”每年都会和兄弟姐妹一起比赛看谁挑选的南瓜最大。兄弟姐妹中“我”是家里老大，力气大，于是“我”将头伸进了掏空的南瓜里，开心地将南瓜顶起来。但南瓜太沉，我想将南瓜卸下来,尽管有弟弟Jason的帮助,但头却仍被死死卡住。“我”被困得越久，心情就越烦躁紧张，也可以说害怕。“我”如何从南瓜脱险?周边的家人什么反应?是幸灾乐祸，还是友情提示?妈妈将录制的视频上传网络,网络的反应如何?家人和“我”的反应又如何?这就是留给考生的续写任务。 情感发展线:故事讲述的是作者“我”在万圣节发生的一件囧事。 在故事推进的过程中，作者以“我”的情感线“好胜一兴奋—焦虑一害怕一释然"向读者呈现由囧变趣的故事。 为了使已知文本信息更加清晰，我们可以根据记叙文的六要素来梳理故事情节，了解主旨大意，把握故事梗概。 Celebrating Halloween is a family tradition. Seeking out the 1 (big) pumpkin was an annual competition 2 the kids in my family. Last year, | was the 3 (win). And this year, | also wanted to prove this point. With the pumpkin home and 4 (rest) on the table hole uppermost, | pressed my head 5 the opening. Though a bit 6 (jam), I managed to put my whole head into the pumpkin, which made me feel 7 (excite). But the excitement soon turned into the struggle to get my head out. After several repeated 8 (fruit) attempts, even with my 9 (brother) help, | was still trapped in the pumpkin. Exhausted and 10 (help), | got into a panic, crying and screaming for help. 续写首句及语言特点解读 已知文本交代了作者“我”为了能证明今年自己带回家的南瓜是最重的，将头伸进了已掏空瓜瓤的南瓜里，结果却被死死卡住。第二段首句“That video was posted the day before Halloween.”的提示，我们可以推断出，脑袋被南瓜卡住并不致命，最后一定会成功脱险。母亲将“我”所做的囧事录制成视频上传网络， 想必一家人也该是一笑置之。因此这一段续写应该聚焦网民在看了上传到网上的视频后的反应和评论，家人的反应以及作者我的感慨，这样的节日回忆注定是难忘的! 第一段首句"I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer."中的"though" 可以推断出:“我”被困得越久，心情就越烦躁紧张、害怕。尽管头被卡只有五六分钟，但似乎觉得过了好长时间。因此这一段应该续写“我”的紧张、焦虑与害怕以及如何在家人的帮助下成功脱险。 为了增添故事的画面感，续写时需要细致入微的动作和修辞来描写，并且所用语言的风格与已知文本保持一致。如第三段描写“我”如何将自己的脑袋一步步塞进南瓜的形象的动作描写: bent over and pressed my crown against the opening, got jammed, went on with my task, unwilling to quit, popped my whole head in, like a cork forced into a bottle, straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders。 思维导图 写作思路 根据Given-New策略，我们可以基于原文本和首句提供的信息，采用围绕中心词问一些相关问题，然后回答这些问题的方法，拓展我们的写作思路和思维角度，最终形成合力的故事情节线。 第一段我们可以尝试回答这些问题： 1. How did I feel while stuck in the pumpkin? 2. How did my family members react to it? 3. How did I get my head out? 4. How did I feel afterwards? 然后进行详细地回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章： I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Trapped in the pumpkin, I breathed quickly and deeply for air. I struggled to squeeze my head out of it, but in vain. Noticing my fear, Jason proposed calling the fire department，while others laughed wildly. At that moment, my dad dashed to me, helped me to push my head farther into pumpkin and reached his hand in to loosen my ponytail. My head was finally released but I found my mom had been filming the whole incident. 第二段我们可以尝试问这些问题： 1. How widely was the video shared online? 2. How did the netizens react to it? 3. How did my family members react to it? 4. What were my reactions? 然后进行详细地回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章。 That video was posted the day before Halloween. When I logged in my Facebook I found abundant likes and messages from those who had seen my video. Jason was delighted that he became famous overnight. The dilemma was turned into the positive responses, the comfort as well as countless similar stories shared by those strangers. Thanks to Mom, the video turned out to be a memorable moment and a recollection of festive happiness. 【参考范文一】 It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. I was overwhelmed by a feeling of regret and annoyance, while my parents and Jason burst into laughter. I pointed to the pumpkin on my head, saying, “Help! Help! I can't support its weight.” Much sooner than expected, my dad was determined to break the pumpkin with the help of a sharp knife. Eventually I could take a breath of fresh air, only to find that my mom was engaged in recording my embarrassing and awkward situation. The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. No sooner had the clip been posted on the line than it managed to attract the attention of hundreds of thousands of viewers, making many funny and warm comments. It was when reporters called for an interview that I realized how popular the video was. Wild with joy, I became a celebrity in my city. There was no denying that this was the most unforgettable Halloween I had ever had. 【参考范文二】 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The pumpkin rested comfortably on my shoulders, not wanting to leave. Fortunately, I’ve always liked the smell of pumpkins. Dad was called and he got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so Jason could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. I managed to pull my head out and emerged with messy hair and my nose plugged with pulp. It was only then that I realised Mom had been filming the whole time. That video was posted the day before Halloween. By the end of that day it had had over 1,000 views, and by Halloween morning we had got phone calls from TV shows — the video started getting hundreds of thousands of supporters. When I walked in the street, I was recognised by people I’d never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passersby and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask to take selfies with it. Though embarrassed, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I had brought to others. 【参考范文三】 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. If only I had never forced my head in out of curiosity! How I wished I had not acted so foolishly, making myself a laughing stock of my family! Seeing my repeated but fruitless efforts, Jason darted out of the room and turned to Dad for help. Seeing me caught in such a situation, Dad was surprised, but soon surprise transformed into laughter. Jason and Dad worked together, tearing pumpkin into two. After what seemed like a century, a bright world came into my sight again. Just when I felt relieved to be freed from the pumpkin, I suddenly found that Mom should be shooting the whole incident. That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. It went viral immediately. Just within hours, hundreds of likes and funny comments appeared, showing their enthusiasm. Constant streams of curious people even came by to take photos with us and my prized pumpkin. Jason was really excited and Mom was glad that her video should become such a hit land thus grew even crazier about shooting videos. But for me, though a little embarrassed, I soon totally forgot the “unforgettable” incident and set out for the trick-or-treat. I would like to take it as a treat to add joy and fun to this festive atmosphere. 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$读后续写专项训练二答题纸 班级 姓名 学号 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. That video was posted the day before Halloween. 读后续写专项训练二 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving（雕；刻） at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost (最上面), I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed（堵塞的；拥挤的）just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______ ____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. _______________ ____________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$