2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习 比比的助人行动与创意 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 比比的助人行动与创意 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Every Saturday, Bibi hung out at her grandma’s laundry and dry-cleaning store while her mom worked. Bibi loved being with her grandma, but she wanted to do more than just draw and read. “How about I write down what people bring in and pin a number to it?” Bibi offered. With Grandma nearby, she did fine. But the next order was an enormous bedspread. Bibi checked it in, but when she went to lift it off the counter, it wouldn’t move. She tried moving it, but it toppled over on her. “I’m OK!” She giggled from under the soft material. Grandma lifted the bedspread off her and smiled. “Why don’t you draw for a little while,” she suggested. “You’re such a good artist”. Bibi sighed. “But I wanted to help you.” Grandma didn’t want her to handle the hot presser or the iron. She could put the stiff cardboard into the ready washed shirts, but that was about it. “Why don’t you draw a picture of more customers coming in?” Grandma joked. “Maybe that would help!” 4 4 续写原文 Bibi went outside. It was a clear fall day. The last leaves were starting their lazy drift to the ground. She spotted her babysitter, Stephanie. Stephanie was painting big letters on the window of the hardware store. “Stephanie!” Bibi called. “You’re going to get in trouble.” Stephanie laughed. “The high-school cheerleading (啦啦队) is painting windows for our football game next weekend. Some of the shop owners said we could.” “Does that paint wash off?” Bibi asked. “Yep. It’s just cornstarch (玉米淀粉), soap, and food coloring,” said Stephanie. Bibi saw other kids from the high school painting designs on windows up and down the street. GO, TIGERS said the window of the nail salon in huge letters. HEAR US ROAR! said the window of the milkshake shop. “I can help you!” Bibi called to Stephanie, her heart beating fast. “I can draw!” “Sorry, Bibi,” Stephanie said. “I’m out of paint, and I have to get home. Thank you, though!” Bibi was so disappointed. She stared at Grandma’s windows. They were bare. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1：Suddenly an idea burst into Bibi’s head. Paragraph 2：When she was finished, Bibi went inside to get Grandma. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了比比在奶奶的洗衣店帮忙，因无法搬动大件物品而感到沮丧。她看到高中生在窗户上涂画，想帮忙却被拒绝。后来她想到用玉米淀粉自制涂料在奶奶店窗户上画画。最终完成了一幅漂亮的画，成功帮助奶奶吸引顾客。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：Suddenly an idea burst into Bibi’s head. 比比突然想到用玉米淀粉自制涂料。她找来材料，调配好后开始在窗户上画画。她画了一朵大花、太阳和一些快乐的人。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：When she was finished, Bibi went inside to get Grandma. 比比完成画后，带奶奶出来看。奶奶看到窗户上的画十分惊喜，称赞比比做得好。比比表示自己想帮奶奶吸引顾客，奶奶很欣慰。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Suddenly an idea burst into Bibi’s head. She remembered the cornstarch paint Stephanie had mentioned. She rushed home, found some cornstarch, soap, and food coloring. She mixed them together and got a small bowl of paint. Then she started drawing on the window. 13 13 范文呈现 When she was finished, Bibi went inside to get grandma. She took her outside and showed her the window. Grandma was surprised and happy. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Suddenly an idea burst into Bibi’s head. Remembering the cornstarch paint that Stephanie had told her about, she rushed home and gathered the necessary ingredients. With a small bowl of paint in hand, she began drawing on the window. She painted a large flower, a bright sun, and some happy people, her excitement fueling her creativity. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 When she was finished, Bibi went inside to get grandma. Leading her outside, she showed her the window. Grandma was both surprised and delighted. “Oh, Bibi! This is wonderful. It looks so inviting,” she said, her eyes filled with pride. Bibi smiled, feeling a sense of accomplishment. “I wanted to help you get more customers, and now I did it,” she said. Grandma hugged her tightly, her love and approval evident. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$