2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+拉尼的烦恼与成长 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 拉尼的烦恼与成长 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Rani jumped off the school bus. Splash! She landed right in the muddy rainwater. It had been a Friday full of disasters. Angry thoughts boiled inside Rani’s head as she marched home in the rain. Why did she have to forget her raincoat back home? Why did she have to risk taking the school bus back home? Why did her hair have to wave up like a giant cotton candy balloon just when she wanted it to behave? Why, why, why, fumed (烦恼) Rani as she turned the backdoor key. “Rani, is that you?” Mama called from the family room. Suddenly Rani’s cousins, Amit and Sumit, came charging toward her. “How many eggs does Rani have in that nest on her head?” laughed Amit. 4 4 续写原文 “Let me get them off Rani’s head!” shouted Sumit. This was really too much. Rani was upset. She fled out of the door, down the driveway, and back up the road she’d walked down minutes before. Angry as Ran I was, she knew that she should calm down. Without noticing, she walked behind a green curtain of lush (茂盛的) bamboo. Tearing through the wild growth, she made her way down a narrow mud path into a clearing. She threw her schoolbag on the ground and breathed hard. Lying on her schoolbag, she bitterly remembered the hours, days, and weeks she had spent trying to soften her hair from using her grandmother’s special mixture of coconut to washing it with Sunsilk shampoo—but in vain. Before long, the tiring day caught up with Rani, and she fell into sleep. “Rani! Raa—aani!” 5 5 续写原文 Rani woke up to Mama’s calls. She lifted her head from her knees. She wandered absently around the bamboo overlooking her house. Rani hugged herself, making no response. “I still need time to calm down,” she told herself, “Amit and Sumit shouldn’t have made fun of me.” Alone in her secret hideout, Rani watched the shadows get longer and begin to disappear as dusk fell. Suddenly the leaves rustled (沙沙作响). 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：Someone was making its way towards her. 、 Paragraph 2：Rani! Here you are . Mama said relievedly. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了拉尼在周五遭遇诸多不顺，先是没带雨衣，在雨中头发乱成一团，回家后又被表兄弟嘲笑。她愤怒地跑到家附近的竹林，回忆起自己为了柔顺头发花费了很多时间却徒劳无功。后来妈妈找到她，告诉她自己也曾有类似经历，让她接受自己。最后拉尼在妈妈的安慰下，决定回家面对家人。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：Someone was making its way towards her. 有人朝拉尼走来，原来是妈妈。妈妈轻声安慰拉尼，说知道她很生气，也明白她的烦恼。妈妈告诉拉尼自己年轻时也有同样的问题，让她接受自己。拉尼听了妈妈的话，心中的愤怒渐渐消散。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Rani! Here you are . Mama said relievedly. 妈妈和拉尼一起回家，拉尼不再纠结头发的问题。她意识到家人的爱和关心才是最重要的。回到家后，她和表兄弟和解，大家一起开心地玩耍。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Someone was making its way towards her. Rani was so angry that she was ready to lash out at whoever it was. However, to her surprise, it was her mother who came into view. Her mother gently said, “I know you are upset. I used to have the same problem when I was young. You need to accept yourself.” Rani was deeply touched by her mother's words. 14 14 范文呈现 Rani walked back home with her mother. She realized that her family's love and care were the most important things. When she got home, she made peace with her cousins. They played together happily, and Rani finally let go of her anger and enjoyed the time with her family. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Someone was making its way towards her. Rani, who was in a rage, was ready to lash out at whoever came into sight. However, to her surprise, it was her mother who emerged from the shadows. Her mother, with a soft voice, said, “I know you're upset. I used to have the same problem when I was young. You need to accept yourself.” Rani was deeply touched by her mother's words, and her anger gradually melted away. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Rani walked back home with her mother, realizing that her family's love and care were of utmost importance. When she got home, she made peace with her cousins. They played together joyfully, and Rani finally let go of her anger and embraced the time with her family. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$