专题06 期末复习之书面表达（深圳专用）-2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期末复习重难点突破（沪教牛津版）

2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期末复习重难点突破（沪教牛津版） 专题06 期末复习之书面表达 （1） 假如你是李华，报名参加了学校的交换生项目，下个月即将前往英国伦敦的一所学校学习，届时你会住在当地的Mrs King家中，现需询问其家庭的一些信息。请你根据以下内容提示，用英文给Mrs King写一封邮件。 要点： 1. Mrs King的家庭情况（家庭成员、住房情况） 2. 我需要做的准备（衣服，……） 3. 我对寄宿生活的期望…… 要求： 1. 词数80左右（开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥： 3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mrs King, I’m so excited that I will fly to London to meet you soon. Could you please answer some of my questions so that we can have a good time together?_______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua （2） 假如你是李华，在一所国际学校就读。请根据以下表格的提示，写一篇演讲稿，讲述你的经历。 曾经的我 不吃不喝不睡整天打电脑游戏，进了医院。 得到的帮助 父母参加了校长的讲座，家校合作；专家给我建议……（自行补充一点） 现在的我 更多地进行户外活动； 意识到了电脑可以用来做各种有益的事，比如……（自行补充两点） 要求： 1．语言通顺，逻辑清晰，字迹工整。 2．必须包括表格中所给的提示信息，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 4．词数：不少于80词。 参考词：合作：cooperate  专家：expert Good afternoon, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I want to share my story with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 假设你是李华，你的学校举办了一个“未来发明家”的征文比赛，你的发明是一种能够帮助学生学习的工具，你的征文获得了一等奖。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英文获奖感言，包含以下内容： 1.发明的东西及外观； 2.该项发明的功能；  3.参加比赛的收获。 Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. I’m really happy that I have won the first prize in the essay competition. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国寓言故事很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，告诉他一则守株待兔的寓言故事，内容包括： 时间、地点 古代中国 开始 农民曾经努力工作 经过 农民看到一只兔子撞到了树干 结果 …… 寓言道理 …… 要求： 1. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇：树干（trunk）；撞上（run into）；寓言（fable）；寓意（moral）；庄稼（crop） Dear Mike, Learning that you’re interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to ________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （5） 世界上有很多发明，它们正在渐渐地改变我们的生活方式。英语课上，同学们正在准备以“The invention that influences my life most”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一项对你生活影响最大的发明。 提示： 1. What is the invention that influences your life most? 2. How does it influence your life? 3. What’s your feelings about it? 要求： （1）演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）演讲词中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most. ____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! （6） Supermind网站举办“The Greatest Invention In My Eyes”征文活动。假如你是山河中学的学生李想，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文。 要点提示： （1）纸的历史：①大约2000年前，中国的蔡伦发明了造纸术； ②纸被发明前，人们只能在石头或木材上写字； （2）纸的用途：做书，印报纸等； （3）纸和你的关系，自主发挥，至少一点。 要求： （1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； （2）不得出现真实姓名和校名； （3）书写整洁，标点正确。 The Greatest Invention In My Eyes Paper is one of the greatest inventions in the world. _________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 网络走进了学生们的生活,在带给学生们巨大方便的同时,也存在不利的方面。请以Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet为题,根据提示介绍网络的利弊。 要求：80词左右,可以适当发挥。 Advantages 1. 带来方便 2.可以作为学习的工具,学习英语 3.读新闻与收发邮件 Disadvantages 1. 沉迷于聊天与游戏 2. 对视力有害 3.看不好的电影对学生有害 参考词汇: convenience, trouble, come into one's life, be addicted to(沉迷…) Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet The Internet has come into students' life._______________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （8） 上一周,学校开展了以“远离网游，走近经典”为主题的校园活动。假如你是学校英语电台的记者，请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语新闻报道。 活动目的 1. 帮助学生培养良好的阅读习惯； 2. …… 活动内容 1. 邀请了专家介绍网游的危害； 2. 召开了班会讨论阅读的重要性； 学生的感受 自由发挥，至少一点。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清除、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇： 远离 stay away from     养成习惯 get into a habit of Last week, our school held a themed activity “Stay away from online games and get close to classic books”._____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9） 在我们成长的道路上，家人、同学和朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好和难忘的回忆！请以“An unforgettable memory”为题，写一篇短文，叙述你的一个难忘的回忆。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数80个左右； 2. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名、学校的名称。 An unforgettable memory ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （10） 随着科技的进步，网络走进了学生们的生活，但它带给学生们巨大方便的同时，也有不利的一面。请以Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet为题，根据提示介绍网络的利弊。要求：80词左右，可以适当发挥。 提示： Advantages Disadvantages 1、带来方便； 1、沉迷于聊天与游戏； 2、可以作为学习的工具，学习英语； 2、对视力有害； 3、读新闻与收发邮件。 3、看不好的电影对学生有害。 参考词汇：convenience, trouble (问题), come into one's life, be addicted to (沉迷……) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期末复习重难点突破（沪教牛津版） 专题06 期末复习之书面表达 （1） 假如你是李华，报名参加了学校的交换生项目，下个月即将前往英国伦敦的一所学校学习，届时你会住在当地的Mrs King家中，现需询问其家庭的一些信息。请你根据以下内容提示，用英文给Mrs King写一封邮件。 要点： 1. Mrs King的家庭情况（家庭成员、住房情况） 2. 我需要做的准备（衣服，……） 3. 我对寄宿生活的期望…… 要求： 1. 词数80左右（开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥： 3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mrs King, I’m so excited that I will fly to London to meet you soon. Could you please answer some of my questions so that we can have a good time together?_______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua （2） 假如你是李华，在一所国际学校就读。请根据以下表格的提示，写一篇演讲稿，讲述你的经历。 曾经的我 不吃不喝不睡整天打电脑游戏，进了医院。 得到的帮助 父母参加了校长的讲座，家校合作；专家给我建议……（自行补充一点） 现在的我 更多地进行户外活动； 意识到了电脑可以用来做各种有益的事，比如……（自行补充两点） 要求： 1．语言通顺，逻辑清晰，字迹工整。 2．必须包括表格中所给的提示信息，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 4．词数：不少于80词。 参考词：合作：cooperate  专家：expert Good afternoon, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I want to share my story with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 假设你是李华，你的学校举办了一个“未来发明家”的征文比赛，你的发明是一种能够帮助学生学习的工具，你的征文获得了一等奖。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英文获奖感言，包含以下内容： 1.发明的东西及外观； 2.该项发明的功能；  3.参加比赛的收获。 Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. I’m really happy that I have won the first prize in the essay competition. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国寓言故事很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，告诉他一则守株待兔的寓言故事，内容包括： 时间、地点 古代中国 开始 农民曾经努力工作 经过 农民看到一只兔子撞到了树干 结果 …… 寓言道理 …… 要求： 1. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇：树干（trunk）；撞上（run into）；寓言（fable）；寓意（moral）；庄稼（crop） Dear Mike, Learning that you’re interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to ________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （5） 世界上有很多发明，它们正在渐渐地改变我们的生活方式。英语课上，同学们正在准备以“The invention that influences my life most”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一项对你生活影响最大的发明。 提示： 1. What is the invention that influences your life most? 2. How does it influence your life? 3. What’s your feelings about it? 要求： （1）演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）演讲词中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most. ____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! （6） Supermind网站举办“The Greatest Invention In My Eyes”征文活动。假如你是山河中学的学生李想，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文。 要点提示： （1）纸的历史：①大约2000年前，中国的蔡伦发明了造纸术； ②纸被发明前，人们只能在石头或木材上写字； （2）纸的用途：做书，印报纸等； （3）纸和你的关系，自主发挥，至少一点。 要求： （1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； （2）不得出现真实姓名和校名； （3）书写整洁，标点正确。 The Greatest Invention In My Eyes Paper is one of the greatest inventions in the world. _________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 网络走进了学生们的生活,在带给学生们巨大方便的同时,也存在不利的方面。请以Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet为题,根据提示介绍网络的利弊。 要求：80词左右,可以适当发挥。 Advantages 1. 带来方便 2.可以作为学习的工具,学习英语 3.读新闻与收发邮件 Disadvantages 1. 沉迷于聊天与游戏 2. 对视力有害 3.看不好的电影对学生有害 参考词汇: convenience, trouble, come into one's life, be addicted to(沉迷…) Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet The Internet has come into students' life._______________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （8） 上一周,学校开展了以“远离网游，走近经典”为主题的校园活动。假如你是学校英语电台的记者，请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语新闻报道。 活动目的 1. 帮助学生培养良好的阅读习惯； 2. …… 活动内容 1. 邀请了专家介绍网游的危害； 2. 召开了班会讨论阅读的重要性； 学生的感受 自由发挥，至少一点。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清除、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇： 远离 stay away from     养成习惯 get into a habit of Last week, our school held a themed activity “Stay away from online games and get close to classic books”._____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9） 在我们成长的道路上，家人、同学和朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好和难忘的回忆！请以“An unforgettable memory”为题，写一篇短文，叙述你的一个难忘的回忆。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数80个左右； 2. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名、学校的名称。 An unforgettable memory ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （10） 随着科技的进步，网络走进了学生们的生活，但它带给学生们巨大方便的同时，也有不利的一面。请以Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet为题，根据提示介绍网络的利弊。要求：80词左右，可以适当发挥。 提示： Advantages Disadvantages 1、带来方便； 1、沉迷于聊天与游戏； 2、可以作为学习的工具，学习英语； 2、对视力有害； 3、读新闻与收发邮件。 3、看不好的电影对学生有害。 参考词汇：convenience, trouble (问题), come into one's life, be addicted to (沉迷……) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．例文 Dear Mrs King,   I’m so excited that I will fly to London to meet you soon. Could you please answer some of my questions so that we can have a good time together? First, could you tell me something about your family? How many people are there in your family? And what kind of house do you live in? If I stay at your house, will I have a room to myself? Second, I wonder what kind of clothes I should prepare. Is it very cold in London next month? Do I need to learn your customs and manners? Also, I hope to learn about British culture and make friends with you and your family during my stay. I’m sure I can get along well with you. I look forward to sharing our daily lives and having interesting conversations. Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中对寄宿生活的期望，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，询问Mrs King的家庭情况，主要围绕家庭成员和住房情况展开； 第二步，询问自己需要做的准备； 第三步，表达对寄宿生活的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①make friends with sb与某人交朋友 ②get along well with sb与某人友好相处 ③look forward to doing期望做某事 [高分句型] ①I’m sure I can get along well with you.（宾语从句） 2．例文 Good afternoon, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I want to share my story with you. I used to be crazy about computer games. I played them all day without eating, drinking or sleeping. As a result, I was in such a poor physical condition that I ended up in the hospital. My parents were very worried and attended a lecture by our principal about home-school cooperation. Experts gave me some advice. They advised me to set a daily schedule and find new hobbies. With their support, I started doing more outdoor activities like playing football and climbing mountains. I also realized that computers can be used for many useful things, such as learning new languages and researching interesting topics. Now, I have a healthier lifestyle and I can use my computer wisely. I am grateful for the help and guidance from my family, school, and the experts. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的省略部分；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作主旨； 第二步，讲述曾经的自己是什么样的； 第三步，讲述自己得到的帮助； 第四步，介绍现在的自己是什么样的，并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ②advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事 ③such as 例如 [高分句型] ①As a result, I was in such a poor physical condition that I ended up in the hospital. （such...that引导的结果状语从句） ②I also realized that computers can be used for many useful things, such as learning new languages and researching interesting topics.（宾语从句） 3．例文 Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. I’m really happy that I have won the first prize in the essay competition. I would like to share my unique invention with you in details. My invention is a super schoolbag, which is practical, convenient and green. Interestingly, it is as small as an English textbook. And it is light and easy to carry. Besides, it only uses solar power to work, so it is friendly to the environment. It is amazing. Moreover, I can put some books in my super schoolbag, and it can communicate with me. What’s more, the schoolbag can remind me to get up and go to bed on time so that I am not late for school. Especially, when I face some problems of learning, it can help me to solve them at a fast speed and provide some useful suggestions for me to find out my mistakes in learning. To sum up, I’m so glad to be the winner in the competition and I hope my invention will help students live a better campus life in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文； 第二步，具体介绍发明物品的外观、功能，并进一步介绍这个发明给自己带来的帮助； 第三步，总结上文，抒发自己获奖心得。 [亮点词汇] ①as small as和……一样小 ②is friendly to the environment对环境友好 ③communicate with sb.和某人交流 ④live a better campus life过上更好的校园生活 [高分句型] ①What’s more, the schoolbag can remind me to get up and go to bed on time so that I am not late for school.  (so that引导目的状语从句) ②Especially, when I face some problems of learning, it can help me to solve them at a fast speed and provide some useful suggestions for me to find out my mistakes in learning. (when引导时间状语从句) 4．例文 Dear Mike, Learning that you’re interested in Chinese fables, I am writing to share with you a story about a farmer and a rabbit. In ancient China, there was a farmer. Because of his hard work, his crops grew best in the village. However, one day, while working, he saw a rabbit run into a tree trunk and die. The farmer got a rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat by the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. What’s worse, his crops were all dead. The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. The harder we work, the luckier we will get. How do you find this fable? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，适当添加细节，使内容完善、行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给出的开头，讲述自己要分享“守株待兔”的寓言故事； 第二步，详述故事内容； 第三步，讲述该寓言故事所蕴含的道理； 第四步，询问对方的看法，并表示期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ① because of 因为 ② see sb. do sth. 看见某人做某事 ③ instead of 代替，而不是 ④ what’s worse 更糟糕的是 ⑤ depend on 依靠，依赖 ⑥ look forward to 期待 [高分句型] ① From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat by the tree trunk every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. (现在分词作状语) ② The moral of the fable is that we should never depend on luck. (表语从句) ③ The harder we work, the luckier we will get. (“the+比较级+其他，the+比较级+其他”句型) 5．例文 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most. Many inventions change our life. As far as I’m concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most. Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy goods from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet，and it opens up my eyes. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more convenient than ever. Thanks for your attention! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示写篇演讲稿，谈谈最影响我们生活的发明，包括这种发明是什么、它是怎样影响我们生活的，以及自己对它的感受。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题（已给出）； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍这种发明是如何影响生活的，以及对它的感受； 第三步，最后表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ① as far as sb is concerned 就某人而言 ② surf the Internet 网上冲浪 ③keep in touch with 和……保持联系 [高分句型] ① More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens up my eyes.（副词比较级的使用） ② It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax.（并列连词not only...but also...的使用） 6．例文: The Greatest Invention In My Eyes Paper is one of the greatest inventions in the world. It is the greatest invention in my eyes. First, paper is an important invention. Cai Lun invented it around 2,000 years ago in China. Before the invention of paper, people had to remember lots of information or write it on stone, wood, leaves, etc. What’s more, today everyone in the world uses paper. With paper, we can make books and print newspapers. Sharing information is a lot easier with the help of paper. I use paper every day. I do homework on paper and I keep a diary. In a word, paper is a great invention. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是说明文，为材料作文。 ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。 ③提示：根据要点提示完成写作，注意分段，且正确运用时态。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接文章开头，点明主题。 第二步，从纸的发明历史，用途和纸在人们生活中的用途进行描述； 第三步，总结全文，首尾呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①the inventions of paper纸的发明 ②with the help of paper.因为有纸 ③In a word总的来说 [高分句型] ①Sharing information is a lot easier with the help of paper.（形容词比较级） 7 例文． Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet The Internet has come into students' life. It brings us not only a lot of convenience and happiness but also troubles． Some students use the Internet as a tool to study. When they learn English, the Internet helps them a lot. They also read news, send and receive emails through it. However, some students are addicted to chatting and playing games. It is harmful to students to watch bad films. Sitting in front of computers too long is also bad for students' eyesight。 It is clear that the Internet has advantages and disadvantages. I think we should use it correctly. 【详解】阅读题干，这是一篇话题类作文关于说自己看法的。看法类的文章主要包括利与弊两个方面，还有简单的说出自己的看法。 短语：not only……but also不仅…而且…；a lot 许多；be addicted to doing sth沉迷于做某事；in front of…在…前面；be bad for……对…有害。 句型： （1）It is harmful to students to watch bad films. 看不好的电影对学生是有害的。It is + adj. to do sth做某事是怎样的。 （2）It is clear that the Internet has advantages and disadvantages. 很明显，互联网有优点也有缺点。That引导的宾语从句。 8．例文: Last week, our school held a themed activity “Stay away from online games and get close to classic books”. Here are some exact details towards it. It is not only to help students with getting into a better habit of reading but also foster students to learn more about Chinese classic stories which also benefit them of broadening their horizons. During this period of time, our school invited some experts to explain the dangers behind playing the online games. And also, the importance of reading had been discussed in our meeting after the seminar. All the students were astonished by these invisible risks and determined to control the time frame of using the internet. We overwhelmingly welcome this activity and are looking forward to the next series of themed programs. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇新闻报道； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出主题； 第二步，阐述此次活动的目的及活动内容； 第三步，表达学生的感受，结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ①not only... but also...不但……而且……； ②look forward to期待；盼望； [高分句型] ①Here are some exact details towards it. (here be引导的倒装句) ②It is not only to help students with getting into a better habit of reading but also foster students to learn more about Chinese classic stories which also benefit them of broadening their horizons. (which引导的定语从句) 9．例文 An unforgettable memory There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot. In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先引出难忘的回忆这个话题； 第二步，具体介绍让自己难忘的一次经历； 第三步，书写结束语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①something unforgettable 难忘的事 ②a deep influence 深远的影响 ③fell down 摔倒了 ④be worried about担心 ⑤fall behind 落后 [高分句型] ①There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.（there be句型） ②When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study.（when引导的时间状语从句） 10．例文： Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet The Internet has come into students’ life. It brings us not only a lot of convenience and happiness but also troubles. Some students use the Internet as a tool to study. When they learn English, the Internet helps them a lot. They also read news, send and receive emails through it. However, some students are addicted to chatting and playing games. It is harmful to students to watch bad films. Sitting in front of computers too long is also bad for students’ eyesight. It is clear that the Internet has advantages and disadvantages. I think we should use it correctly. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于提纲作文写作，在写作时围绕所给标题展开，第一段点题并表明观点；第二和三段分别介绍了网络给学生们带来的便利之处和不利影响，最后一段总结并提出网络使用要求。 2. 写作指导：本文主体部分主要采用第三人称来介绍网络对学生学习生活的影响，时态用一般现在时，显得客观公允；具体介绍网络的利弊时，要点明确，条理清晰；最后一段总结全文并且提出了使用网络的建议，首尾呼应又结构完整。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$