2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+雪山孤影中的别样圣诞 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 雪山孤影中的别样圣诞 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 December strode (阔步走) into the mountains of Colorado, shooting snowflakes and blowing them into a thick blanket of white. As Christmas approached, the farmers there closed down most wooden houses for a holiday cheer. Not all were closed, however. There was still work to be done, and someone had to stay. That someone was Slim Carter. Old Jake, another farmer there, had offered to keep him company, but Slim shook his head. “After all, a young man like me has got plenty of Christmases ahead,” Slim joked. Before Jake offered to stay again, Slim hurried on. “I’ll just have a private Christmas this year, and that’s the way I want it.” So he was left alone at the house. Alone, with his horse in the farm and the wolves roaring in the forest nearby. 4 4 续写原文 Truth was, Slim had decided not to celebrate Christmas at all. It wasn’t that he didn’t like Christmas. In fact, his Christmas memories were good ones. His mother would fill their house with the light of candles and the smell of candy. His father would make their Christmas tree hunt an all-day, men-only affair. Slim smiled as he remembered sitting on the broad back of their horse with the freshly cut tree along behind. Back home, they would cover the tree with paper snowflakes and homemade decorations and sing all the Christmas songs they knew. And that’s the way he liked it. Those were the memories he pulled out on nights when he was working alone. Such memories warmed him inside, even if his outsides were aching with cold. 5 5 续写原文 This was Slim’s first year away from home. “Christmas is nothing if not spent with family,” Slim declared to the empty house. That was the real reason he’d sent Jake away. He figured he would handle Christmas better if he just pretended it was an ordinary winter workday. But on Christmas Eve, as Slim headed back with snow beneath his feet and stars overhead, his head hung low. It was Christmas, even without the tree and the gifts. Christmas, and he was all alone. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：Then he remembered decorating the tree with his family again. Paragraph 2：While singing to his decorated Christmas tree, Slim heard a knock on the door. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了Slim 独自在科罗拉多山区过圣诞，尽管这里白雪皑皑、寒风呼啸，但他内心仍回忆着过往和家人共度圣诞的温馨画面。尽管他一开始拒绝了老杰克的陪伴，打算独自熬过这个节日，但在圣诞夜，当他回忆起和家人装饰圣诞树的情景时，孤独感愈发强烈。就在此时，老杰克带着礼物前来，两人围坐在火炉边分享故事，让这个原本孤寂的圣诞夜充满了温暖与情谊，Slim 也体会到了不一样的节日欢乐。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：Then he remembered decorating the tree with his family again. Slim 沉浸在回忆中，愈发觉得孤单。他想起往昔与家人温馨的画面，心中满是思念。此时，外面寒风呼啸，屋内寂静清冷，他的心情愈发沉重，不禁开始怀疑自己独自过节的决定是否正确，思念之情也愈发浓烈。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：While singing to his decorated Christmas tree, Slim heard a knock on the door. Slim 满心疑惑地打开门，看到老杰克站在门口，身上落满雪花，笑容温暖。他又惊又喜，连忙将老杰克迎进屋内。炉火旁，老杰克递上礼物，两人愉快地交谈起来，分享着各自的故事。屋内的气氛逐渐变得欢快，笑声和温暖驱散了之前的孤独，这个圣诞夜因这份意外的情谊而变得格外美好。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Slim was sinking deeper into the ocean of memories, feeling lonelier than ever. The scenes of past happy Christmas days with his family flashed before his eyes, filling his heart with longing. Outside, the wind was howling bitterly, while inside, the silence and coldness seemed to magnify his solitude. Doubts crept into his mind about his choice of spending Christmas alone, and the sense of missing his family grew stronger and stronger. 14 14 范文呈现 Full of curiosity and surprise, Slim opened the door. Standing there was Old Jake, covered with snowflakes, with a warm smile on his face. Overwhelmed with joy and gratitude, Slim quickly welcomed him in. By the fireplace, Old Jake handed over the gift, and they began chatting merrily, sharing their unique stories. Gradually, the atmosphere in the room became lively and warm, with laughter and friendship driving away the previous loneliness. This Christmas Eve turned out to be extraordinarily beautiful because of this unexpected bond. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 It was on Christmas Eve that Slim, drowned in the sea of memories, felt an overwhelming sense of loneliness creeping up on him. The heartwarming scenes of celebrating Christmas with his beloved family in the past were playing vividly in his mind, which was now filled with intense longing. Outside, the wind was wailing as if lamenting his solitude, and the chilly silence within the wooden house only served to deepen his isolation. It was at this moment that he started to question the wisdom of his decision to spend this special occasion alone, with the homesickness gnawing at his heart. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Suddenly, a knock on the door jolted Slim out of his melancholy reverie. With a mixture of anticipation and bewilderment, he opened the door. Lo and behold, there stood Old Jake, whose figure was dusted with snowflakes like a messenger of warmth. Overcome with a surge of delight and gratitude, Slim ushered him in without hesitation. By the dancing flames of the fireplace, Old Jake presented a carefully wrapped gift, and then ensued a delightful conversation where they exchanged their tales of yore. Little by little, the room was suffused with merriment and camaraderie, the once-predominant loneliness being completely dispelled by the magic of friendship. Truly, this Christmas Eve became an unexpectedly beautiful chapter in Slim's life, all thanks to this precious bond that defied the cold and isolation of the wintry night. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$