2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+两只小猫带来的意外欢乐与温馨 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 两只小猫带来的意外欢乐与温馨 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 My sister-in-law Carol said she’d already picked out a kitten for me. I agreed to go with her… just to look. I made no promise to take one home. After all, only two months had passed since I lost my beloved calico cat, Mandi. Maybe I needed to be pet-free for a while. When we got there, three of the four kittens remained in the litter. Carol picked up one and handed it to me. The beautiful face and white fur on the right side of her nose reminded me of a clown-like mask. How could I resist? Then another kitten, with an evenly balanced white face, jumped into my lap and purred. Driving home in my British sports car proved difficult with two mischievous kittens. One clung to my left arm and shoulder, watching the fast-moving scenery outside. The other paced back and forth from my lap to the passenger’s seat, making it hard for me to shift gears. Both mewed in a loud duet(二重奏) of protest. Of course, I hadn’t brought a cage. I had not planned to take home a kitten — or two. 4 4 续写原文 The clown-like-masked female earned the name Squeakette with her tiny voice squeaking about each new discovery as she explored her new home. The male, lacking only a black tie in his formal clothes, took the name Sebastian for my favorite composer, Johann Sebastian Bach. A few weeks later, a neighbor helped me carry down my six-foot artificial Christmas tree from the attic(阁楼). I thanked him with a batch of cookies, and then set up the tree in the comer of my living room. Sebastian and Squeakette knocked it down before I opened the box of decorations. After setting it upright, I straightened the few bent wire branches back into place. As I checked for any other damage, a quick flash of black-and-white fur passed by me. Up they went, branch by branch. The tree danced around as the two kittens took turns climbing it together. Sebastian made it to the top a moment ahead of Squeakette. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1：He lunged at me from the top, paws stretched out like wings. Paragraph 2：Sensing their interest, I found a smaller Christmas tree for them. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了作者在失去爱猫曼迪两个月后，被嫂子卡罗尔带去看小猫，最终带回了两只小猫，取名塞巴斯蒂安和斯奎基特。回家途中小猫调皮捣蛋，到家后它们又撞倒了圣诞树，还在树上嬉戏玩耍，作者虽无奈但也被它们的活泼可爱所感染，后来作者还专门为它们准备了一棵小圣诞树，让它们尽情玩耍，小猫的到来为作者的生活增添了新的欢乐和生机，填补了之前失去爱猫的空缺。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：He lunged at me from the top, paws stretched out like wings. 它从树顶向我扑来，爪子像翅膀一样张开。我急忙伸手接住它，它却在我怀里兴奋地扭动着，还伸出小脑袋蹭我的下巴。斯奎基特见状，也 “喵喵” 叫着从树上跳下来，围着我的脚打转。我看着它们天真无邪的模样，心中的无奈瞬间化为乌有，只剩下满满的宠溺。我轻轻地挠着它们的下巴，它们舒服地眯起眼睛，喉咙里发出咕噜咕噜的声音，那一刻，我知道它们已经完全融入了我的生活，成为我生活中不可或缺的一部分。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：Sensing their interest, I found a smaller Christmas tree for them. 察觉到它们对圣诞树的浓厚兴趣后，我特意找了一棵较小的圣诞树放在厨房角落。我在树上挂满了五颜六色的小铃铛和柔软的毛球，还在树下铺了一块柔软的垫子。当我把小猫们抱到树前时，它们的眼睛一下子亮了起来，迫不及待地扑向小树。它们用爪子轻轻拍打铃铛，追逐着毛球，玩得不亦乐乎。看着它们欢快的样子，我也被这份纯真的快乐所感染，坐在一旁静静地欣赏着它们的表演，享受着这温馨的时刻。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 He lunged at me from the top, paws outstretched like wings. Hastily, I reached out and caught him. Thrilled, he wriggled in my arms and rubbed his little head against my chin affectionately. Noticing this, Squeakette jumped down from the tree, meowing, and circled around my feet. Looking at their innocent and lively appearance, my initial exasperation vanished instantly, replaced by sheer fondness. Gently, I scratched their chins, and they closed their eyes contentedly, purring with pleasure. At that moment, I knew they had seamlessly integrated into my life and become an indispensable part of it. 13 13 范文呈现 Sensing their keen interest in the Christmas tree, I deliberately found a smaller one and placed it in the corner of the kitchen. I adorned it with colorful little bells and soft pom-poms and spread a soft mat underneath. When I brought the kittens to the tree, their eyes lit up immediately, and they couldn't wait to pounce on it. They playfully batted at the bells with their paws and chased after the pom-poms, having a great time. Watching their joyous play, I was also infected by this pure happiness. I sat aside, quietly enjoying their performance and savoring this warm and sweet moment. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 In a split second, he launched himself at me from the pinnacle of the tree, his paws splayed wide like the wings of a fledgling taking its first flight. Reacting instinctively, I shot out my hands and managed to catch him mid-air. Overwhelmed with excitement, he squirmed within my grasp, his tiny head nuzzling affectionately against my chin. At the sight of this, Squeakette, not one to be left behind, let out a series of meows and gracefully leaped down from the tree, proceeding to encircle my feet in a figure of eight. Beholding their guileless and animated countenances, the exasperation that had initially welled up within me dissipated into thin air, supplanted by an overwhelming sense of affection. With the utmost tenderness, I caressed their chins, eliciting contented purrs that reverberated through the room. It was at this precise moment that I became acutely aware that they had effortlessly woven themselves into the fabric of my life, assuming an indispensable role therein. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Perceiving their intense fascination with the Christmas tree, I purposefully procured a more diminutive one and carefully positioned it in a cozy nook of the kitchen. This I bedecked with a profusion of vividly hued little bells and plush pom-poms, and beneath it, I laid a sumptuously soft mat. The moment I introduced the kittens to this newfound wonder, their eyes sparkled with unbridled delight, and without a moment's hesitation, they bounded towards it. With nimble paws, they engaged in a playful skirmish with the bells, their eyes fixed intently on the elusive pom-poms as they darted to and fro. Enthralled by their mirthful antics, I found myself irresistibly drawn into their world of innocent pleasure. I seated myself at a discreet distance, quietly relishing the spectacle before me and luxuriating in this heartwarming and idyllic interlude. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$