20 UNIT 3 Getting along with others Period 6 写作-【名师导航】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册同步课件(译林版2020)

Period 6　 UNIT 3　Getting along with others 主题语境 人与社会——良好的人际关系 本单元要求同学们写一篇关于友谊的日记，用以记叙一天中所发生的有意义的事情或将来的打算。一般要求有固定格式(日期、星期、天气情况等)，记叙过去的事情多用过去时，描述现在的情况多用现在时。人称主要使用第一人称以及第三人称等。 日记 课时学案 写作(Writing) Period 6 (一)基本框架 1．开头——简明扼要介绍日记主题或话题。 2．主体——具体描述所记录的话题或主题的具体内容信息。 3．结尾——最后归纳总结个人意愿或想法。 Period 6　 (二)常用表达 1．Through friendship，we can become happier，wiser，and more satisfied humans． 通过友谊，我们可以成为更快乐、更明智、更满足的人。 2．My teacher is selfless and we all highly respect him． 我的老师很无私，我们都很尊敬他。 3．I owe him a lot for everything he has done for me． 我非常感谢他为我所做的一切。 Period 6　 4．What happened today has left a deep impression in my memory． 今天发生的事在我的脑海里留下了很深的印象。 5．In my opinion，he is a kind-hearted，humorous and responsible teacher． 在我看来，他是一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的教师。 6．Thanks to his help，I have made much progress and caught up with others． 多亏了他的帮助，我取得了很大进步并赶上了其他同学。 Period 6　 假定你是李华，你和英国笔友Mike讨论了“理想中的笔友”这个话题，请你写一篇日记，记叙讨论的内容，描述一下你理想中笔友应具备的条件和品质等。 注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Thursday，March 23 Sunny _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Period 6　 [审题构思] 1．确定体裁：本文为日记，属于应用文； 2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称和第三人称； 3．确定时态：本文的主体时态为一般现在时； 4．确定内容： ①第一段，简单介绍和笔友Mike讨论了“理想中的笔友”这个话题。 ②第二段，我们一致认为理想笔友应具备的条件和品质等。 ③第三段，我的想法或感受等。 Period 6　 [遣词造句] 1．今天上午，我和笔友Mike讨论了“理想笔友”这个话题。 This morning，my pen pal Mike and I _______________ of “ideal pen pals”． 2．作为学生拥有理想笔友是很有必要的事情。 _________________ students to have ideal pen pals． 3．好的笔友首先是一个真正的朋友。 A good pen pal is _________ a true friend． discussed the topic It is necessary for first of all Period 6　 4．好的笔友是你可以信任的人。 A good pen pal is someone _____________． 5．笔友应当是与你有共同爱好的朋友。 A pen pal should be a friend who _____________________ with you． 6．好的笔友应该在生活中是诚实而有责任感的人。 A good pen pal should be ___________________________________． you can trust shares similar hobbies an honest and responsible person in life Period 6　 7．好的笔友是一面镜子，他们会及时帮你看到自己的不足。 A good pen pal is a mirror that ________________________________． 8．理想的笔友会让我们建立长久的友谊，丰富我们的生活。 Ideal pen pals will enable us to _____________________ and enrich our lives． helps you see your shortcomings in time build a lasting friendship Period 6　 [句式升级] 1．用同位语合并3、4句。 ________________________________________________________ 2．用not only...but also...合并5、6句。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A good pen pal is first of all a true friend，someone you can trust． A pen pal should not only be a friend who shares similar hobbies with you but also an honest and responsible person in life． Period 6　 [连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语) Thursday，March 23 Sunny ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Period 6　 [参考范文] Thursday，March 23 This morning，my pen pal Mike and I discussed the topic of “ideal pen pals”． We all agree that it is necessary for students to have ideal pen pals．A good pen pal is first of all a true friend，someone you can trust．Besides，we think a pen pal should not only be a friend who shares similar hobbies with you but also an honest and responsible person in life．Most importantly，a good pen pal is a mirror that helps you see your shortcomings in time． Sunny Period 6　 In all，we firmly believe that ideal pen pals will enable us to build a lasting friendship and enrich our lives． Period 6　 [词块积累] 1．be easily annoyed at容易对……生气 2．explode with anger 勃然大怒 3．get mad at sb．对某人发火 4．run out of the room in a burst of anger一怒之下跑出房间 5．stamp one's foot in anger气地跺脚 情感描写——生气发怒 Period 6　 6．an angry look愤怒的表情 7．could hardly/scarcely contain his anger几乎抑制不住他的愤怒 8．be seized by anger勃然大怒 9．trembled with anger气得发抖 10．a look of burning anger愤怒的表情 Period 6　 [佳句积累] 1．Anger poured through her．愤怒涌上她的心头。 2．She was breathless with anger．她气得喘不过气来。 3．He felt a flash of anger．他感到一阵愤怒。 4．Anger rushed through her．她一下子生气了。 5．He kept his anger in check．他抑制住了自己的愤怒。 6．Anger rose in him like a tide．愤怒像潮水一样在他心中涌起。 Period 6　 7．Anger welled up in his chest．他怒从心头起。 8．Boiling with rage，Tom shook his fist at me．汤姆怒火中烧，向我挥舞拳头。 9．Filled with anger，Tom was unable to say a single word．汤姆气得一个字也说不出来。 10．Tom felt so angry that he stormed out of the room，slamming the door furiously behind him．汤姆气得冲出房间，狠狠地关上了门。 Period 6　 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Stinky(难闻的) Street Houses are very different．Some are huge and have gold swimming pools．Pop stars live in those．Some are in rows with a brick wall at one end and overlook a pie factory．Franklin Gates lives in one of those．Number three，Stanley Street，to be exact． Period 6　 He loved living on Stanley Street．Everyone was friendly．All his mates were there and the smells from the pie factory were filling the air．Mmm，delicious! There was just one problem．Franklin's mum and dad wanted to move．His mum was expecting twins and they needed another bedroom．“This house is too small，” said his mum．Next day，there was a “For Sale” sign stuck by Franklin's door． Franklin and his best friend Josh stared at the words．“What am I going to do，Josh？” said Franklin． Period 6　 Josh frowned．“Has your house got problems? Number forty's got problems and no one wants to buy it．” Franklin stared at number forty．It looked all right to him．“What kind of problems？” He asked． “Oh，mice and damp and really horrible wallpaper．” Franklin sighed．His house was warm and friendly and it had just been painted，worse luck． Mrs．Cox lived next door to Franklin in a big house that had once been the corner shop．Just then，she called out，followed by her dog Zack． Period 6　 “I'm sorry you're moving，” Mrs．Cox said．“So am I，” Franklin grumbled．Mrs．Cox patted Franklin on the arm．“Never mind．Your house might take months to sell．” But a few days later，Franklin came home from school and found a man in the kitchen．His name was Mr．Bragg and was interested in buying the house．He glared at Franklin and trod on his toes，without saying sorry．Franklin's heart sank when Mr．Bragg said he wanted to come back for a second visit on Saturday morning． Period 6　 On Saturday morning，Mr．and Mrs．Gates were still outside when Mr．Bragg rang the doorbell． _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Period 6　 [参考范文] On Saturday morning，Mr．and Mrs．Gates were still outside when Mr．Bragg rang the doorbell．Entering the house，Mr．Bragg stopped and smelt the air，asking curiously，“What's that disgusting smell？” Franklin told him the factory does fish pie on Saturdays，which made Mr．Bragg annoyed．“Mind the mouse too，” Franklin grinned，pointing to a pile of brown lumps．“It gets stuck in the carpet．”“Urgh！” Mr．Bragg pulled a face．He ran downstairs and out of the door，never returning back．Later，Franklin's parents knew this and they felt a little angry but had to wait for another chance to sell their house，which made Franklin relaxed for quite a while． $$