2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+制表匠亨利的时光与人生之悟 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 制表匠亨利的时光与人生之悟 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 In a world where time was the most valuable currency, a man named Henry lived a life of monotonous (单调乏味的) routine. Every day was a mirror image of the last, filled with the tick-tock of the clock that dictated his every move. Henry was a skilled watchmaker, and his creations were admired for their precision and beauty. However, the irony (讽刺) of his profession was not lost on him; despite his ability to control the measure of time, he felt as if time was controlling him. To make matters worse, there harbored a deep regret in his heart — his son Richard, who worked in another city, seldom contacted him. They were literally strangers living far apart. 4 4 续写原文 One day, an elderly woman visited Henry’s shop, seeking a watch with a peculiar request. She wanted a timepiece that did not tell the exact time but rather reminded the wearer of the fleeting and temporary nature of life. “This watch is also for my son, who once did something associated with the concept of time, but he…” she suddenly paused, and obviously there was a slump in her throat. But she quickly composed herself and told Henry she would come for the watch one month later. Intrigued (感觉着迷的), Henry accepted the challenge, pouring his soul into the creation of a unique watch. He designed it with no numbers, only two hands — one moving rapidly and the other so slowly it was almost still. 5 5 续写原文 As he completed the watch, he found himself fascinated by its unconventional design. The hands seemed to dance around the face, a visual metaphor for the passage of time. The more he observed it, the more it made him reflect on his own life. He realized that in his pursuit of perfection and order, he had forgotten to live and appreciate the present moment. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：One month later, the elderly woman returned to collect her watch. Paragraph 2：As the woman left, Henry felt a profound sense of change. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 故事围绕着制表匠亨利展开。亨利生活单调，虽能掌控手表的时间精准度，却觉得被时间操控，且与在外地工作的儿子理查德关系疏离。一天，一位老妇人来定制特殊手表，不要显示准确时间，而要提醒生命短暂，这引起了亨利的兴趣，他接受挑战并精心打造。完成后，他被这独特设计吸引，开始反思自己因追求完美和秩序而忽略了当下生活。这个过程或许会成为亨利转变生活态度的契机，也可能让他重新审视与儿子的关系，未来他可能会采取行动改变现状。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： One month later, the elderly woman returned to collect her watch. 一个月后，老妇人如期回到亨利的店铺取表。亨利满怀期待地将那只独特的手表递给她，眼中闪烁着自豪的光芒，这毕竟是他耗费心血的得意之作。老妇人接过手表，仔细地端详着，手指轻轻抚摸着表盘上没有数字的设计，脸上露出了一丝难以言喻的神情，似悲伤又似欣慰。她轻声说道：“这表真的很特别，就像我对儿子的思念一样独特。” 亨利忍不住问道：“您的儿子到底怎么了？” 老妇人的眼眶瞬间红了，她哽咽着讲述起儿子曾经是个争分夺秒、一心追逐事业成功的人，却因此忽略了家庭和生活的美好，后来在一场意外中离世。亨利听着，心中不禁泛起层层涟漪，开始反思自己对待时间和生活的态度是否也存在同样的问题。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：As the woman left, Henry felt a profound sense of change. 当老妇人离开后，亨利独自坐在店铺里，一种深刻的改变之感在心底油然而生。他的目光落在那些摆放整齐的工具和尚未完成的手表零件上，但思绪却飘到了远方。他意识到自己一直以来都被时间的精准性所束缚，如同被关进了无形的牢笼，机械地重复着每一天，忽略了生活中那些真正重要的瞬间和情感。他决定不再这样浑浑噩噩地生活下去，要主动打破这种沉闷的现状。他想起了久未联系的儿子理查德，心中涌起一股强烈的渴望，想要立刻见到他，修复他们之间疏远的关系。于是，亨利站起身来，开始整理店铺，准备暂时放下手中的工作，踏上前往儿子所在城市的旅程，去重新拥抱生活，找回那些被自己遗失在岁月长河中的珍贵情感和时光。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 One month later, the elderly woman returned to collect her watch. Henry had been eagerly anticipating her arrival, the finished watch lying carefully on the counter. As she entered the shop, he greeted her with a warm smile and presented the timepiece with a touch of pride. The woman's eyes widened in admiration as she took the watch in her hands, gently turning it to examine every detail. "It's truly remarkable," she whispered. Henry's curiosity got the better of him, and he tentatively asked about her son. The woman's expression saddened, and she took a deep breath before speaking. "My son was a brilliant young man, always chasing after success and the next big thing. He was so consumed by time that he forgot to live in the moment. And now... he's gone." Tears welled up in her eyes, and Henry felt a lump form in his throat. Her words hit him hard, making him question his own life choices. 14 14 范文呈现 As the woman left, Henry felt a profound sense of change. He sank into his chair, lost in thought. The watch he had crafted had not only been a job but a revelation. For the first time in a long while, he saw the futility of his monotonous existence. He had been a slave to time, just like the woman's son. Determined to break free from this cycle, he made a sudden decision. He would close the shop for a while and go to visit his own son, Richard. Henry quickly began to make arrangements, his heart pounding with a mixture of nervousness and anticipation. As he packed a small bag, he thought about what he would say to Richard. This journey, he hoped, would be the start of a new chapter in his life, one where he would cherish every moment and rebuild the connection with his son. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 One month later, the elderly woman returned to collect her watch. Henry, having spent countless hours meticulously crafting it, presented the unique timepiece with bated breath. As the woman entered, her eyes were immediately drawn to the watch, which boasted an unconventional design with no numbers and two hands, one scurrying rapidly and the other creeping along at a snail's pace. "It's exactly what I envisioned," she murmured. Overwhelmed by curiosity, Henry couldn't help but inquire about her son. With a heavy heart, the woman recounted how her son, once so engrossed in the rat race of life, had tragically passed away. "It was only after he was gone that I realized how much time we had wasted," she lamented. Henry was deeply affected, realizing he too had been a prisoner of time's relentless march. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 As the woman left, a profound sense of transformation washed over Henry. Sitting there, lost in contemplation, he understood that this watch had served as a wake-up call. Never again would he allow himself to be ensnared by the mundanity of routine. It was then that he resolved to take action. Closing up the shop, he set off on a journey to visit his estranged son, Richard. With each step he took, a newfound determination filled his being. Not only was he determined to mend their relationship, but also to embrace life's precious moments. This voyage, he firmly believed, would mark the beginning of his liberation from the shackles of a life lived in the shadows of the ticking clock. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$