2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+印度少年逐梦求学的艰辛与机遇 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 印度少年逐梦求学的艰辛与机遇 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 I was born into a poor family from a small Indian village where we had no college, or university. After completing Grade Ten, my father came to me with some bad news. . . “Son, I’m sorry. I won’t be able to pay any more of your educational expenses.” I was the fourth and youngest son in the family. The family expenses had become too much for my father’s small army wage to handle. Not having money for my education worried me. I laid my head down that night, wondering what my future held in store. The words of my teacher came to me, “Nawaz, you must try and find another way for your future. Look at me! I grew up as a poor boy from the village. I struggled, I worked hard and I went to the city. You must find a way and never give up. ” 4 4 续写原文 I heard Karachi was a city of opportunity for poor people due to lots of small jobs. I decided to move to the city to get a job, so I could save up and pay for my education. On a busy street not far from where I stayed, I found a job in a small restaurant. I waited on tables, cleaned floors, and washed dishes. I slowly saved enough money for my college admission fee. After that, I studied by day. By night and on weekends I worked at the restaurant. I was tired but determined to complete my education. 5 5 续写原文 One day Mr. Jatin started asking me questions. “Where are you from?” “What are you doing here?” “Why are you working here?” He came to the restaurant for a cup of tea regularly in the afternoon, so the waiters were all familiar with him. I politely answered his questions about my situation. “Mmm, I see,” Mr. Jatin nodded. “I’ve watched you work hard. And I’d like to pay for all your college fees. You can quit your job and focus on your studies. ” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：I couldn’t believe what I had just heard. Paragraph 2：Having got a well- paid job after graduation, I realized it was time to pay back. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了 “我” 独自在家的经历。家人去外地参加婚礼，“我” 拒绝去邻居詹金斯先生家，因为他常被孩子们嘲笑议论，看起来像坏人。“我” 按母亲指示锁门、做作业后看电视，却遭遇停电，屋内一片漆黑。正摸索找蜡烛时，听到有人朝家走来，“我” 以为是小偷，心提到嗓子眼，还紧张地拿起菜刀准备自卫。结果是詹金斯先生敲门询问情况，这让 “我” 十分意外，也打破了对他的固有偏见，后续可能会改变对他的看法，故事在此留下悬念，引发读者对邻里关系的思考。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： I couldn’t believe what I had just heard. 我简直不敢相信自己刚刚听到的话。贾廷先生的提议如同一道惊雷在我耳边炸响，一时间，我呆立在原地，大脑一片空白。这是真的吗？我使劲眨了眨眼睛，怀疑自己是不是在做梦。过了好一会儿，我才回过神来，嘴唇颤抖着，用带着哭腔的声音向他连声道谢。泪水不受控制地涌出眼眶，模糊了我的视线。我想起过去为了学费和生活辛苦奔波的日子，再看看眼前这突如其来的转机，心中五味杂陈。我深知，这份恩情重如泰山，我暗暗发誓，一定要好好珍惜这个机会，不辜负贾廷先生的期望。随后，我怀着忐忑又激动的心情向餐馆老板提出了辞职，准备全身心投入到大学的学习生活中，开启人生新的篇章。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Having got a well- paid job after graduation, I realized it was time to pay back. 大学毕业后，我凭借自己的努力找到了一份高薪工作。在事业逐渐稳定下来后，我意识到，是时候回报曾经帮助过我的人了。我四处打听贾廷先生的消息，每一次询问都满怀期待，希望能尽快找到他。终于，功夫不负有心人，我得知了他的下落。当我再次站在他面前时，往昔的艰辛与他的恩情涌上心头，我激动得几乎说不出话来。我紧紧握住他的手，向他详细讲述了这些年我的奋斗历程，以及他的帮助对我产生的巨大影响。我真诚地对他说，没有他的慷慨解囊，就没有我的今天，现在我希望能够回报他的恩情。我询问他是否有任何需要我帮忙的地方，无论是经济上还是其他方面，我都愿意全力以赴。贾廷先生看着我，眼中满是欣慰和自豪，他微笑着说，看到我有今天的成就，他感到无比高兴，他的付出是值得的。从那以后，我便以贾廷先生为榜样，积极投身于公益事业，帮助那些像曾经的我一样在困境中挣扎的学生，让这份善良和爱心得以延续和传递，让更多的人感受到温暖和希望。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I couldn't believe what I had just heard. My mind went blank for an instant, and I stared at Mr. Jatin in sheer disbelief. Was this a dream? The thought raced through my head. I opened my mouth, but no words came out at first. After what felt like an eternity, I managed to mumble a heartfelt "Thank you" through my trembling lips. Tears of gratitude and astonishment welled up in my eyes, blurring my vision. Memories of the arduous days I had endured to make ends meet flashed before me, and now this unexpected offer seemed like a miracle. I knew I had to seize this opportunity with both hands. With newfound determination, I informed the restaurant owner of my intention to resign, ready to embark on my college journey wholeheartedly. 14 14 范文呈现 Having got a well-paid job after graduation, I realized it was time to pay back. I had been thinking about Mr. Jatin's kindness ever since I started my career. I made it my top priority to track him down. It took some effort, but finally, I found him. Standing in front of him again, a rush of emotions overwhelmed me. I recounted my journey, from the struggles in college to my current success, emphasizing how his support had been the catalyst. I told him sincerely that I owed my achievements to him and that I was eager to return the favor. I asked if he needed any financial assistance or any other form of help. Mr. Jatin beamed with pride and said he was happy to see me thrive. Inspired by his selfless act, I decided to establish a scholarship fund for underprivileged students, ensuring that the kindness that had changed my life would be passed on, helping others to pursue their dreams just as I had been able to. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I couldn't believe what I had just heard. Standing there, rooted to the spot, my eyes widened in sheer astonishment as if I had been struck by a bolt from the blue. It was Mr. Jatin's offer that seemed like a glimmer of hope piercing through the thick clouds of my financial woes. Hardly had I regained my composure when I stammered out my gratitude, tears streaming down my cheeks, which were witnesses to my overwhelming emotions. Bearing in mind the arduous days I had gone through, I made up my mind to cherish this godsend opportunity. Without hesitation, I informed the restaurant owner of my decision to quit, thus setting sail on my college journey with unwavering determination. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Having got a well-paid job after graduation, it dawned on me that it was high time to pay back. It was the kindness of Mr. Jatin that had been the cornerstone of my success, and I was bent on finding him. Eventually, located him I did. Face to face with him again, a surge of gratitude flooded over me. Recounting my odyssey from a struggling student to a successful professional, I emphasized how instrumental his support had been. So crucial was his act of kindness that I was determined to give back. Not only did I offer to assist him financially if needed, but also I resolved to establish a scholarship for students in need. Only by doing so could the flame of kindness be kept alight, lighting up the paths of those chasing their dreams, just as mine had been illuminated. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$